書く A short poem

Saritaswims posted on Apr 04, 2010 at 05:10PM
many people have liked this poem but i dunno im new to this writting so comment how u fell about it

I'm a murder becuase I kill war and revive peace I'm a lover becuase I ignore the haters and embrace the kind and loving I'm smart becuase I study when needed and have fun when required I'm a free spirit becuase in my mind is where I live I'm strong becuase no one can make or break me But most importantly I'm human an...d I embrace my flaws and my perfect imperfection:)

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1年以上前 DragonsArt said…
last line is good, the rest are just roll offs that might work better as word play for a poem. your style is just to... common to be consided unique.
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1年以上前 shadow-angel said…
big smile
Whoa! That was really good! You should write stuff like this more often.....