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This is a persuasive essay I had to write for my English class, I 投稿されました a フォーラ asking for opinions on addressing the reader. I know it's a dangerous thing to do, but I thought it would be okay to do here. Opinions are great, I would 愛 to here anything あなた have to say. Also, if I made any mistakes (i.e. spelling, grammar, puncuation) please point them out so I can fix them, thanks:D



Do あなた remember that feeling you'd get on the last 日 of school? Remember how excited you'd be to finally get to do those summer things like ride bikes with your friends, stay up all night planning pranks, and...
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Hannah met Jamie in the summer of 2004.It was Hannah's 21st birthday and she and her フレンズ went to a club.They wanted to dance,but they didn't like the 音楽 so Hannah went to speak to the DJ."This 音楽 is awful,",she said."Could あなた play something else?"The DJ looked at her and said,"Don't worry,I have the perfect song for you."

2 分 later he said:''The 次 song is によって Coldplay.It's called Yellow and it's for a beautiful girl who's dancing over there."Hannah knew that the song was for her because she was wearing a yellow dress.When Hannah and her フレンズ left the club,the DJ was waiting...
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Okay, this is chapter 2... enjoy :)

Duncan and Gwen were taking a stroll through the forest

Duncan: So how's it going with あなた and Courtney?
Gwen: Horrible, whatever I do I hurt her and she just hates me even more!
Duncan: Well, it's not so fun being in the hero's team either.
Gwen: Oh... I just don't get it I've done so many good things and... and Courtney and あなた weren't dating at the time
Duncan: Cheer up, Gwen あなた have me
Gwen: Yeah I guess so

Duncan and Gwen go back to their cabins

Gwen confessional: At least I can try to fix things with Courtney no matter how many times I... fail (Gwen starts...
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DOVEWING PVO
Dovewing listened to Squirrelflight name those who are going to the gathering:
"Bumblestripe, Ivypool, Toadstep, Cinderheart, Brackenfur, Millie, Lionblaze, Leafpool, Jayfeather, Bramblestar, I, Seedpaw, Lilypaw, Molepaw, Amberpaw, Dewpaw, Snowpaw, Molepaw, Cherrypaw, Blossomfall, Dovewing, Sandstorm, Whitewing & Hazeltail." Squirrelflight finished.
"Yay!" Amberpaw ran across the clearing toward Dovewing, her mentor.
Toadstep and Ivypool appeared によって her side.
Dewpaw and Snowpaw raced after Amberpaw.
"We're goin' to our first gathering." They pranced around.
"Alright, be sensible...
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posted by peacebaby7
This is for those who have just begun writing, または for those who need helpful advice. I hope this 記事 helps you.

1) Spelling and Grammar

Spelling and grammar is the first thing あなた worry about. If there are many spelling/grammatical errors, the story doesn't flow very well. あなた don't have to be an expert, but あなた at least should have a dictionary nearby and know the basic rules of grammar. You'll pick up on もっと見る the もっと見る あなた write.

2) Know Your Topic

First and foremost, after spelling and grammar, あなた must know what you're 書く about. And I don't just mean a topic in general. For example,...
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posted by axemnas
Role playing または Rping as most of the community calls it. Almost everyone's done it one way または another whether they realize it または not. Remember those days when you'd pretend あなた were a movie character または a prince/princess または a pirate または whatever. あなた were role playing in a since. Now days when あなた hear the word role playing あなた probably think things like War Craft, 星, つ星 Craft, Nights and Dragons, Toontown, etc..
Something you've probably never figured however, is rping in relation to writing. Writing, that's all rping basically is. It's just 書く a collaborative story from different points...
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Chapter Three: "Dark Destiny"

Some time later, after almost everyone has returned to school after break…

A young man and an older man sat across from one another in the comfortable back of a long black limousine, the world rolling によって unheeded beyond the darkly tinted glass. It was daylight outside, meaning they would rather be sleeping than traveling about, but they had much to do and were not wasting any time. Despite the apparent age difference between the two vampires, it was the younger one who obviously was the figure of greatest power, which was apparent from the way the older one addressed...
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posted by HouseMindFreak
Chapter 19






Sitting on the porch in the late evening for BJ was her only time to get fresh air and some decent time away from Cayden. In the mid-summer it was warm and pleasant outside at night but tonight it was unusually chilly. BJ wrapped her arms around herself feeling a chill run through her body. The air felt thick but it wasn’t humid it was…tense. The sky was preparing for a storm. A rumble of thunder rattled around her making her jump. She couldn’t understand why she was so jumpy, storms never bothered her but there was just something she was sensing that wasn’t right. Another...
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Chapter one
Okay this is a really ランダム stroy but I was bored and I couldn't get this idea out of my head. In my opinion it is really badly written so sorry.

“Okay Class, あなた have the rest of the period to finish this quiz. This is the last grade before your midterm so work well, and remembers what we studied,” 発言しました my Mr. Grazing, my math teacher. He was the kind of teacher kids pick on and make fun of behind his back. I hate math, so I don’t care for him as a teacher much. He usually wears a sweater vest and weird 1950 glasses that squeeze his nose at the tip.

I stared at the Chapter...
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posted by StarStorm
The Fay
The fay is a クロス between a demon and an angle.
They are very very powerful and are now hunted, but
a fay can take the form of any living organism, so the few that are left are in hiding. And this is the story of one human who finds out that all the myths and legends about angles and demons are all very very true.



Suizanna Gentry is a average girl. She lives in a small apartment with her mom and dad, she has two ネコ and a overexcited
dog. She goes to a good school. Makes average grades. Has
four best friends. And is plain. But one 日 she wakes
up to hear her parents arguing with...
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posted by tayandkris4evr
I woke up feeling groggy. My eyes were swollen from crying, and my head felt like it'd been hit with a sledge hammer a couple of times. Niki's head was on my shoulder, his blonde hair was dry now, and his eyes were also swollen and pink.
I slowly put Niki's head on a soft trash bag then I scooted out from the hollow tree's cover. Standing there in the forest made me realize something. It made me realize that sometimes Death brings sadness and sometimes it brings a reason, a meaning, または a story. Niki 発言しました that he'd burned the tree... with his hands. But, I'm not sure if that's true at all....
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First Name: Sayori(you are called Sayorihime at your temple)
Last Name: Tsukine
Age: 16
Height: 5’7
Weight: 121
Eye Color: Pink
Hair Color: Black(straight short bangs, straight long hair that goes down to your knees and the end of the hair is straight)
Personality: Stubborn, clever, smart, tactician, strong-willed, kind and caring(but doesn’t admit it because of stubbornness)
Info: あなた are the descendant of a very strong and powerful miko* named Mizuhahime. あなた have strong powers, strong enough that if a demon absorbs you, its powers will increase によって 100X and if mated with a half demon, the child...
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It pulsed rhythmically like a beating ハート, 心 across the horizon. I guess that makes sense considering it looked like the solitary line on a ハート, 心 monitor, radiating オレンジ as it zigzaged up and down. I've been here before; Level 1, Dark Space. I don't know how I knew, I don't even remember being here before...I just know I have. Despite the darkness, and there was plenty to go around, I knew from somewhere that it was my お気に入り level. The candimals bought small and soft light, which was enough for me. I touched the flame as I always did, it never hurt nor left any burns. At the brush of my...
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"Aw, it's pretty close." Tyler McCarthy and Shawn Detham were standing side によって side. Both held a gun in a head, but Shawn also held a machete. My hand flew up to my mouth to try to hold back a scream as I realized that the blade was dripping with blood. What if it was a friend of my または Nick's, what if it was a teacher? I buried my face in Nick's back trying hard not to picture it.

"Tyler . . . Shawn, what the hell are あなた guys doing." Both of them had grown up with Nick; they use to play together in there neighborhood. They had, at one point, all been inseparable, but high school hit and like...
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posted by problematic124
Laughing heals the soul. What makes あなた laugh? Were all different. As a writer in training I'm experimenting on the"fun factor". Down the page are some funny stuff and I'd like to know which one makes あなた laugh the most. If あなた found a funny pic please post it and please コメント on the pictures.
Now like I've 発言しました we all have different tastes and it all is on you. Laughing is a very fun excersise.And these pictures are funny (or at least to me). Hold on to your socks lady and gentlemen it's time to get your laugh on.
Please comment!!!
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I've been lately adding a lot of X Academy, Stardom and Vampire Society excerpts and since nobody really knows what im talking about i decided to make a guide XD

X Academy - Aiko is a fourteen 年 old girl who was put up for adoption as a baby and was adopted によって a man called Gideon. Throughout the years Gideon physically abused Aiko. Aiko gets accepted into the elite X Academy, an enormous school with an enormous secret. A week before Aiko is supposed to pack her bags and leave for X Academy, she is bitten on her wrist によって a rogue vampire. She is also saved によって another vampire. The bite on her...
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Darkened Bliss

By: Non other than the legendary . . . drumroll please . . . ME!




“If あなた had a choice and it was to be thought over, what choice would あなた go with? Invade the World’s tactics, または leave what is left of our world after the Apocalypse?
Not like our world is going anywhere . . .”



“Repress and retrain,
Steal the pressure and the pain,
Wash the blood off your hands,
This time, she won’t understand”
- Muse, Ruled によって Secrecy








To,
My フレンズ who cannot wait to see if they are quoted








Need to know Basis, Rules and Legislations of the Bliss
The Cult of Sorpse was an ancient community...
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Chapter 2 Hue
Exo-Vampires

Everybody has their chances

Don’t touch me.
    The filthy half-vampire was sitting in the corner while I, me, out of all people... ヴァンパイア had to watch over the muddy thing. Thing is not a good word for the half-vampire, it is もっと見る of an IT. Maybe it does not need to live. Why? Why does it have to sleep like that. Sleeping is not normal if あなた are a vampire. Stupid Half.
    “Ahh!” It screamed in its sleep.
    “Shut, UP!” I yelled, smacking it in the face. It opened its eyes, revealing a big bruise...
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posted by stopbullying
The Stalker
Chapter 1

    It was a cool, winter night. It wasn’t too cold outside and I thought after work I would go out for a walk and take advantage of the nice weather. It was four-thirty in the evening. I got off of work at 7:00. It should be a little クーラー によって then.
Work was boring and nobody really came in. Only one person did and he was weird looking. He had ripped shorts, a short shirt, and worn out shoes on. I looked at him suspiciously because the whole time he was in there I caught him looking at me. This was weird especially since I was only 18 and he was like...
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Keep in mind I have no idea what chapter this will be but I got this idea yesterday so I wrote it last night. Actually I had two ideas of how my two main characters would kiss. I'll write and put up a different version of their first キッス some time soon. I actually had tears in my eyes when I wrote this

I storm outside of the house and plop myself down on the sofa outside. I feel my eyes tear. It's so unfair. My tears overflow my eyes.
"Hey Starr what's wrong?" A voice asks behind me. I look behind me and see Elliot
"Oh こんにちは Elliot. Nothing is wrong," I say wiping my eyes
Elliot sits down next...
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