書く Whatcha Think?And what should I call it?

Cullen-fan posted on Jun 02, 2009 at 08:10PM
Kim Jones is an ordinary french/american teenager up until her 14 birthday, when she wakes up to find out she now possess these powers.Later on she finds out her parents arent her real parents and her real ones are after her for her real powers and are willing to kill her for her unbelievably strong powers! In La Fleur academy she meets a guy called Taylor!Little does she know her real parents are using Taylor to get to her!!!!

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1年以上前 harold said…
Well, you'd have to come up with a good reason for Kim's pursuers to not act in the open, or attack Kim in such a way that she still feels safe enough to go to school.

Let me explain: if a person's life is threatened, that person's not going to go about their normal day-to-day routine; instead, she'd go to the police and/or flee. So it would have to not be obvious to Kim that her life was in danger, at least at first. And that, as I said at first, would require that the parents have a good reason to not just kidnap her or attack her openly (which would tip the hat that she was in danger). There has to be a very good reason that they go the indirect route of manipulating Taylor to get to Kim, rather than doing something that would get them what they want faster.

It's an interesting premise. Are you thinking it will be a short story, a serial, a novella, a novel, or series of novels?

As for a title, it's a bit difficult without knowing a name for the powers, what the powers are or where they originate. Still, some ideas:
* The Specialist
* Unpleasant Surprises
* She's Unbelievable
* A Wonderful Year
* Mistress of the Heart and Light (making a guess at her powers here)
1年以上前 Cullen-fan said…
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Her mom that kidnapps her is in jail thats y!Is that a good enough reason?