...wow.
Please, either ease up on the caps lock and get some real poetry in your brain before attempting to write again, or just keep everything in your journal and don't subject the rest of us to this stuff.
I respect that you like Obama and wanted to write an "ode" to him, and I respect that you're expressing yourself through this, but seriously...from a strictly writer's point of view, this was just...sad.
*grumpily mutters something about "What do they teach in schools these days??" and goes off to find that bag of Lindor truffles...*
Please, either ease up on the caps lock and get some real poetry in your brain before attempting to write again, or just keep everything in your journal and don't subject the rest of us to this stuff.
I respect that you like Obama and wanted to write an "ode" to him, and I respect that you're expressing yourself through this, but seriously...from a strictly writer's point of view, this was just...sad.
*grumpily mutters something about "What do they teach in schools these days??" and goes off to find that bag of Lindor truffles...*
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