It's nice description, and I like the idea that she's happy because the place is preserved as her mother left it, even though the implication is that she's sad underneath at her absence.
I recommend that you choose whether to use past tense or present, and then stick to the one or the other. The contrast between her actions ("she woke") and the routine ("as she does") is really jarring and discordant. Past is more natural, but present really gives the sense that every day is the same without end, which may be what you wanted. Even if you do choose present tense, though, there are a few words that should be past tense, like "nestled" and "mismatched", as they are used as adjectives rather than verbs.
I've said this before in other feedback, but my preference is that the adjectives are used a little more sparingly, particularly when describing people. In longer fiction, authors tend to break up lots of physical detail over several passages (one passage might talk about the paleness of skin, another might talk about her hair color), but in short fiction the tendency is to stick to one or maybe two really pertinent details which convey some part of the character's nature...her eyes (so like her mother's) or lips (always smiling), perhaps?
A few other grammar issues:
* "dazzling light of the garden"
* "of pansies" needs only be mentioned once.
* "and the hanging baskets" - lose the "and" - it's unnecessary here
Vocabulary:
I don't know what a "hebe" is, other than a derogatory racial slur.
I recommend that you choose whether to use past tense or present, and then stick to the one or the other. The contrast between her actions ("she woke") and the routine ("as she does") is really jarring and discordant. Past is more natural, but present really gives the sense that every day is the same without end, which may be what you wanted. Even if you do choose present tense, though, there are a few words that should be past tense, like "nestled" and "mismatched", as they are used as adjectives rather than verbs.
I've said this before in other feedback, but my preference is that the adjectives are used a little more sparingly, particularly when describing people. In longer fiction, authors tend to break up lots of physical detail over several passages (one passage might talk about the paleness of skin, another might talk about her hair color), but in short fiction the tendency is to stick to one or maybe two really pertinent details which convey some part of the character's nature...her eyes (so like her mother's) or lips (always smiling), perhaps?
A few other grammar issues:
* "dazzling light of the garden"
* "of pansies" needs only be mentioned once.
* "and the hanging baskets" - lose the "and" - it's unnecessary here
Vocabulary:
I don't know what a "hebe" is, other than a derogatory racial slur.