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Firewriter said:
It will depend if あなた have your story in third または first person view, but it mainly depends on if あなた want the main character to be on the defense または to be the attacker. If he/she is on the defense, mainly have the attacker come out of nowhere. Describe the best あなた can how the main character is feeling. Emotionally and physically. Is he panting, sweating, going blurry eyed, fighting strongly または weakly, is he/she feeling scared, emotionally numb, fierce, angry, etc. If your character is the attacker, mainly if あなた want it to be dramatic, have the opponent appear unexpected of the main character/attacker. If あなた want to be gruesome, describe things. The scene, is it dark, cobblestone ground, starless cloudy sky, etc. During the fight, is there blood? Are your character holding weapons? If so, what kind and how are they holding it? With a deathly grip, weakly, shakily, innexperienced... etc.
I'm sorry for the super long reply, but I hope i could help.
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