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Is this a good plot for a story? What do あなた think? PLEASE HELP ME!!
I was thinking of 書く this story about vampires, REAL vampires, those who dont sparkle but have fangs and burn in the sunlight. So here it goes:
the main character is an almost college grad who got in with a almost dwindling scholarship. she is orphaned and extremely poor. she is looking フォワード, 前進, 楽しみにして to graduating and earning a degree in order to pursue her dream job and a healthy life. she struggles with depression, poverty, and fear of being attacked. one 日 when she is walking down an alleyway towards her apartment, she is suddenly hit in the head and pushed over. then something または someone begins fighting with her. then everything goes dark and she finds herself lying oon a bare and damp floor with surprising features. her skin is stone cold, her face is ghostly pale and she has abnormally sharp teeth. then out of nowhere comes a pale female with bright red eyes. she reveals to the girl that she has been bitten によって a vampire and is now one as well. in shock and disbelief, the girl doesnt believe her at first. when he female levitates her with her mind and leads her into a deep dark forest, she finally does. then it is revealed that there are vampires, who live in hiding deep inside forests due to the fact that vampire hunters are rising in power and the killings have increased beyond anything. the rest of the stories follow the girl as she learns about her powers and heritage. at the end there is a war with the hunters and a lot of backstory...
this is how my ヴァンパイア work:
they burn in sunlight
they are ヴァンパイア except newborns (sorry, working name for bitten ppl) cant control themselves. when newborns near blood, they will lose control, there eyes will turn red and they will attack. but as their life progresses, they learn to control there hunger and have a permanent red iris to symblise their true vampire status.
there are things called bonds. they are a series of marks または scars that etch themselves onto a newborn's arm with every achievement. for example.
the main character is an almost college grad who got in with a almost dwindling scholarship. she is orphaned and extremely poor. she is looking フォワード, 前進, 楽しみにして to graduating and earning a degree in order to pursue her dream job and a healthy life. she struggles with depression, poverty, and fear of being attacked. one 日 when she is walking down an alleyway towards her apartment, she is suddenly hit in the head and pushed over. then something または someone begins fighting with her. then everything goes dark and she finds herself lying oon a bare and damp floor with surprising features. her skin is stone cold, her face is ghostly pale and she has abnormally sharp teeth. then out of nowhere comes a pale female with bright red eyes. she reveals to the girl that she has been bitten によって a vampire and is now one as well. in shock and disbelief, the girl doesnt believe her at first. when he female levitates her with her mind and leads her into a deep dark forest, she finally does. then it is revealed that there are vampires, who live in hiding deep inside forests due to the fact that vampire hunters are rising in power and the killings have increased beyond anything. the rest of the stories follow the girl as she learns about her powers and heritage. at the end there is a war with the hunters and a lot of backstory...
this is how my ヴァンパイア work:
they burn in sunlight
they are ヴァンパイア except newborns (sorry, working name for bitten ppl) cant control themselves. when newborns near blood, they will lose control, there eyes will turn red and they will attack. but as their life progresses, they learn to control there hunger and have a permanent red iris to symblise their true vampire status.
there are things called bonds. they are a series of marks または scars that etch themselves onto a newborn's arm with every achievement. for example.
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