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my mom says that no one will ever read this, but i wanna know what あなた guys think.

Kitsunes
In Hanagasa high school, there are a group of gorgeous students that don’t really fit in…or at least, choose not to. The reason they don’t fit in and keep to themselves is because they are Kitsunes. A Kitsune is a half human half cat creature that can go from a cute kitty cat to a vicious flesh eating monster in a matter of seconds. This group of students named Ikuto, Amu, Rin, Len, Finny, Kisa, and Nerine secret is in danger when a teenage girl named Toeto figures out their secret. They then depend on her to make sure their life stays normal and that no one finds out there secret.

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Half human and half cat? あなた mean their one parent is a cat? And it had sex with a human? XO (I'm sorry, i had to ask)
KissOfDoom posted １年以上前
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no, they are cursed with it.
narlyvamp1234 posted １年以上前
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kitsune is Japanese for fox, not cat
RikuSoraKairi3 posted １年以上前
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It's a great idea, but me 読書 it would depend on how u wrote it... good job so far!
SkyBendingVee posted １年以上前
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xElvenPiratex said:
That actually sounds very interesting to me! You'd have to be careful how あなた write it, though, as it might be hard to gain sympathy for a bunch of perfectly gorgeous people, even if they are outcasts. あなた wouldn't want them to be too flawless または they might get boring または be completely unrelatable, so you'd need to make sure あなた give them very interesting and intricate personalities to balance them out. But yeah, from the 説明 あなた gave, I would definitely give the story a read! It's a very intriguing plot! :)
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posted １年以上前 
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thx :)
narlyvamp1234 posted １年以上前
Camilie39 said:
Maybe I would :) I have to say, it's really original!
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thx :)
narlyvamp1234 posted １年以上前
luna-lefright said:
I think its good!!!! R u 書く more?????
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posted １年以上前 
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yeah, this was just the introduction, if あなた want when i am done with it i can post it on here and give the link so あなた can read it.
narlyvamp1234 posted １年以上前
sehdt said:
Your mum is wrong lots of us have read it and its really very good. Well Done
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thx :)
narlyvamp1234 posted １年以上前
chickencheese said:
Don't listen to your mom! So long as あなた write it well then people will read it! It's not really the kind of story I tend to be interested in, but I know lots of people do like that genre so I'm sure people will want to read it!
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posted １年以上前 
writer67 said:
not bad, jeckle and hyde type of reasoning of a personality, adaptable and good, should have made bet with mum;-]
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EclecticFan78 said:
Definately sounds interesting, but I do have one question. If they can turn into flesh eating monsters why don't they just attack Toeto so no one finds out their secret? I am just curious as to the motives.
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posted １年以上前 
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well, あなた see, Ikuto won't let them do that...you will have to read it when i am done to find out why.
narlyvamp1234 posted １年以上前
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Ah, okay. Well あなた definately have my intrest peaked. I for one will look フォワード, 前進, 楽しみにして to 読書 it.
EclecticFan78 posted １年以上前
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awesome!
narlyvamp1234 posted １年以上前
samuraibond005 said:
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Kutsune is half human, half fox
Neko is half human, half cat.
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posted １年以上前 
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i know, but i kinda wanted to shake it up.
narlyvamp1234 posted １年以上前
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Well okay, the idea sounds great, but mixing up the proper terms like that would make it hard for anyone who knows what Nekos ore kitsunes are to read it.
samuraibond005 posted １年以上前
Me_Iz_Here said:
Sounds good, but it's really similar to this TV 表示する that I know about.
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posted １年以上前 
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fruits basket?
narlyvamp1234 posted １年以上前
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Actually, the Nine Lives of Chloe King. It's about high schoolers who are basically half-cat with powers and stuff.
Me_Iz_Here posted １年以上前
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yeah, i wanted to watch that 表示する but i don't have the channel for it.
narlyvamp1234 posted １年以上前
adamk said:
Sounds cool and actually original. Are あなた going to post it on here?
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posted １年以上前 
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i will soon, i am almost done with it.
narlyvamp1234 posted １年以上前
JaseKS said:
Hey, our moms would get alng great ^_^
And yea, I would read that
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crazywolf23 said:
Please write more! im begging!
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posted １年以上前 
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i'll post it and give あなた the link when it is done, okay?
narlyvamp1234 posted １年以上前
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ok thanks!
crazywolf23 posted １年以上前
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almost done! can't wait to see what people think.
narlyvamp1234 posted １年以上前
madening_mahem said:
definitely, I would totally read it!
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definitely, I would totally read it!
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Maachi said:
あなた definitely have talent...keep working it!
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torilee07 said:
Sounds very original & interesting. I would definitely read it!
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MiyaShuni said:
Its good, but I think あなた should really change the names because they're all from 人気 mangas I know(Except for Toeto, cool name):
Ikuto and Amu= Shugo Chara!, Rin and Len=Vocaloids,
Finny= Kuroshitsuji/Black Butler, Kisa= Fruits Basket.

tried to come up with もっと見る uncommon names. NIce job apart from that.
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posted １年以上前 
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oh, i didn't know that ;)
narlyvamp1234 posted １年以上前
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its cool. Good Luck. I hope i get to read it :)
MiyaShuni posted １年以上前
Albina21 said:
Sounds really good! I would read that! Did あなた get the idea from フルーツ Basket? That's the one where they turn into ネコ right? または is it another anime?
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posted １年以上前 
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a lot Animes inspired it
narlyvamp1234 posted １年以上前
nimratanveer said:
hey, ive been there, my whole family thinks i cant write and it is not a good 'career option'
.but あなた know its up to u.dont be discouraged, cuz youve got talent, あなた just need to express it and be what あなた really are. for me, i really like the idea, seriously, and im totally thinking 'man, you're good'.no offense, but i kinda disagree with your mom. tons of people will read it, just dont give up.
i think its great.keep working.the world needs people like you....:)
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snootygirl50701 said:
I WOULD SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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CosmoLuvsTails said:
awesome! are あなた gonna post on here? If so, how soon?!
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