I need an opinion on this story.

Okay, my story is called "The Difference Between Normal and Me". It's about an outcast girl named Ashleigh Alyce who always was put down in middle school. In the summer before freshman year, she stumbles upon a website called Pixelate Life, where あなた can make your own virtual self and build up your own world however あなた want to. But the night after she logs in for the first time, she seems to "dream" that she's in her Pixelate Life world. But when morning comes around, she realizes that it's no dream, that she'd actually been transported into her Pixelate Life world. A mysterious character tells her that she has to find the way out before the 次 sunrise または she'd be trapped until someone logged into her account, which would be impossible for Ashleigh to do from inside the game. The rest of the book would be a hunt for the way out of Pixelate Life and a way to get the others who the game has trapped out and to close Pixelate Life forever.


I need to know if it sounds too similar to anything existant already and maybe a few tips on the plot または something. Ashleigh's Pixelate Life world was based off of a lot of shonen-type stuff, so there's a lot of fighting monsters and stuff like that, just as a heads-up. She made her PL world dark and mysterious to match herself.