Would あなた read a story like this?

Okay, my story is called Uprising! <3 it is a series...
It is about Luna Lacrimosa, a hybrid of both エンジェル and lunar demon (she finds out that later on in story)She finds and saves a ten 年 old boy named Leon Trinity from being slaughtered によって a samurai named Ono. She then leaves the boy alone to go home...but the boy doesnt have a ホーム to return to cause his parents are dead! Leaving the boy to wander in the dark rainy cold night, also leaving him open for predators...As Leon walks in the rain (Oh I forgot, Leon was the TRUE son of the emperor, but got stolen as a baby and the peple who ストール, 盗んだ him raised him as his "parents") The emperor's soliders find Leon and capture him. (Leon nows knows the emperor was his father but wants 回答 of why after all these years, he didnt care)
Leon asks his father why he didnt do anything to save him and the emperor coldy states his doesnt care and that Leon has dirty eyes. He orders his workers to "get rid of Leon's sins" (meaning to lck him up and abuse him)...
After 7 years of being abused, Leon escapes, bloodily, BONES(ボーンズ)-骨は語る- broken, and all. The night is harshly pouring down the clouds' tears. Leon knocks on the door of Luna's temple, but doesnt realize it. Luna's servants (Mileena, Hikaru, and Thomas) panicly, and frigtned tell the lord of the temple that the boy is a boy laying at her doorstep all beaten. They save him)
Ruby (satan) and Luna's fiancee (Midnight Serentity) (Luna hates them) later come in and stay at her manor becuase Leon offered them and 発言しました that Luna would their company. (Leon works for Luna) Luna finds about her past cause she follows Leon to the forest of death, where there is a lonely grave and that grave belongs to Shina..the エンジェル part of Luna. )Luna is not a real being because she has memories that she doesnt know where and how they happened..also when. Se is made out of 2 diffent beings)
Later, she reuturns after defeating Hades and finding her way out of the gates of hades and hell. Leon misses
 Would あなた read a story like this?
 Luna-Lacrimosa posted 1年以上前
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returninglight said:
I would, be proud of your work :)
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Really?! :D
Luna-Lacrimosa posted 1年以上前
partypony said:
I will! Sounds interesting!
But a couple of questions...
1) what does 'dirty eyes' mean?
2) When is this set? I'm guessing the past because of the samurai and emperor... または is it one of those stories where time doesn't really 'exist'?
3) Who exactly is the main character? Luna または Leon? または is it both?
4) Is the story told in both of their PoVs?

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I know, useless questions, but I'm curious
partypony posted 1年以上前
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OK, "dirty eyes" mean that there is alot of hate in Leon's eyes that it takes away tthe beauty of eyes. It is in the pass, Luna is really the main chracter, but Leon is like literally right beneath her! No, they story is in 3rd peson...>w<;; Im not good at telling 1st person D:
Luna-Lacrimosa posted 1年以上前
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so yeah...
Luna-Lacrimosa posted 1年以上前
Kadaj said:
Sounds awesome. =)
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Thank chu ;3
Luna-Lacrimosa posted 1年以上前
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