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Help needed with a plothole: can ヴァンパイア 'make' their hearts beat?

So, I'm 書く a story about a girl discovering a スーパーナチュラル world parallel to her own. The twist is, the ordinary world has been shocked によって the discovery of vampires, and they're being hunted down and put into 'reserves'.
Every student and every working person has to undergo a bi-annual 'MediCheck', where they basically check if you're human. I've found ways for my ヴァンパイア to evade things like a blood test and a body temperature test (including them spreading rumors about themselves so they can easily pass other normal vampire 'marks', like not being able to be seen in a mirror). Anyway, I've just discovered a huuuuge plothole: vampires' hearts don't beat.
In 'my' mythology, blood sort of kick-starts the vampire's body again: the blood flows, albeit very slowly, the blood enables a vampire to heal and use their スーパーナチュラル abilities, even lets their hair and nails grow again (albeit very, very slowly), and most importantly, let them control the muscles of their body. So would it be too implausible to give them control over the muscles of their hearts, so they could make their ハート, 心 beat によって choice, like they can breathe によって choice but it's not necessary?
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Wow, that's one big infodump :') Sorry for the tl;dr, and I kind of gave away もっと見る of my story than I wanted to
Lunaste posted １年以上前
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lol dw
1-2vampire posted １年以上前
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i really hate vamp 本 but it actually sounds good maybe the absense of a 愛 story hmmm.... if u do this right it could actually be pretty 人気
bookworm12345 posted １年以上前
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one flaw in this, even when your dead, hair and nails grow, its the same thing with vampires, it's a good idea but do some research
Potter-rulez posted １年以上前
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ellieoth said:
I am also really interested in ヴァンパイア and other creatures!!!I really 愛 your story!!!Great twist!!!!I believe that ヴァンパイア can make their hearts beat!As they have control over their muscles and they are extremely strong,they could probably 'make' them beat!!!
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posted １年以上前 
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Thanks! I guess I will work that in, they can make their ハート, 心 beat but it's mostly an annoyance and unnecessary use of strength for them to do it all the time :)
Lunaste posted １年以上前
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Yes,it is!!!However ,they can do it in order to pass the bi-annual 'MediCheck'!
ellieoth posted １年以上前
vamp_grl_123 said:
i think thats an awsome twist. i never heard of that in any vamp book i wote または read...and i am obsessed w/ vamps...(can u tell によって my name)
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posted １年以上前 
nataliespn said:
I agree with ellieoth.And I 愛 your idea!!!!!!
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posted １年以上前 
AgentCoop said:
Well あなた already 発言しました that in your established mytholgy a vampire is able to control the muscles in his/her body. There's your answer, as the ハート, 心 is essentially a big muscle!
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posted １年以上前 
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Haha, I guess I had my own answer, mostly wanted to know if people would find it plausible! Thanks!
Lunaste posted １年以上前
BiteMeCullen107 said:
あなた could make a type of cure for that makes ヴァンパイア humans for a 日 または for as long as あなた want. It was on an episode in Moonlight.
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posted １年以上前 
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Hmm, that's a nice idea, but the point is that these ヴァンパイア have all these little tricks to circumvent exposure, I try not to have magic in my world :) but thanks :D
Lunaste posted １年以上前
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aww! thats kinda my idea: they're 1/2 human a 日 a week until they're 18 lol!
1-2vampire posted １年以上前
harold said:
No, I don't think it plausible to have any creature have voluntary control over their involuntary muscles. If so, the ヴァンパイア wouldn't be able to do anything other than concentrating on making all their systems operate so they don't die. That 回答 your request.

However, in あなた detail あなた say that the blood flows, albeit very slowly. This means that vampires' hearts DO beat - there's no way for the blood to flow otherwise. So make it that vampire hearts beat INvoluntarily, when there's blood in their system. They get brighter, もっと見る energetic, better color, their hearts beat, in every way もっと見る human (and もっと見る likely to pass inspection), when they've just fed.

That's a very interesting premise, and allows for a nice escalation between the humans and vampires, as each side figures out a new test/trick to find/avoid the others. After the humans figure out that undead hearts can beat, for instance, they have to capture and study them in order to figure out a new way to tell them apart. Cool.
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posted １年以上前 
1-2vampire said:
great idea! and your story; your choice.
e.g, im 書く about ヴァンパイア also and in mine they bleed but their blood is heatless and black and they can be born and when younger than 18, they have a 日 a week they're 1/2 human until they're 18 and stop aging または they can age later etc... also, there r 2 types of vamps in my story... oops 発言しました too much! but in mine, i made it how i wish ヴァンパイア were!
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