Umm so i have this assignment..

okay well i've got a religion assignment where i have to 表示する an artistic interpretation of Jesus. Now i chose to do the sea and do a bunch of short poems...um yeah if あなた could like help me, that'd be great, if youu think i'm going in the right direction, if its a tota piece of crap..okay.
ps. I REALLY need help with my ending, it sounds really bad to me

To feel the sand
The sun on your back
It’s a no man’s land
With no fear of attack
No chains of society
The sea frees all
Lose all your anxiety
And watch as the waves fall
God’s 秒 heaven under the sun
Surrounding all people being
The sea will be undone
For those people foreseeing
The sea without God’s sight