オリンポスの神々と7人の英雄 Mark of Athena Fanfic, 虹 Style

rainbow_goddess posted on Jun 27, 2012 at 08:58AM
Annabeth
Annabeth leaned over the edge. Her heart pounded. She was finally going to see her boyfriend, Percy Jackson, after eight long months. Most of the senior campers from Camp Half-Blood came along. Leo Valdz steering the Argo II. Out of the corner of her eyes, she saw Jason Grace and Piper McLean holding hands, talking. She hoped that the video Leo sent would let the Romans know that they weren't the enemy. But after watching Leo talk, she started to think that instead of helping them, Leo would get them killed in painful, nasty ways.
Piper and Jason came up next to her. Annabeth looked at them. "What do you think will happen?" she whispered.
Jason gazed into space. "I don't know."
Suddenly, a cloud parted and what Annabeth saw nearly gave her a heart attack. Camp Jupiter. The landscape displayed below her was beautiful. The hills were green. The Roman style temples and buildings were unbelievable. Her mouth hung open.
Leo's voice echoed through the speekers. "Attention everyone. We have arrived in Camp Jupiter. And they have spotted us. Jason, please kindly wave so that the Romans know that you are with us."
Annabeth sighed. Leo had the wierdest mind of them all. Piper and Jason rolled their eyes.
Below them, a large crowd of people stood, screaming and shouting. Then as the Argo II got closer, Annabeth saw that most of them carried weapons. Uh-oh, Annabeth thought.
"Leo!" Jason suddenly yelled. "You're going to land in the forum! Move to the left!"
Leo obeyed. Romans ran to meet them. Annabeth scanned the crowds, hoping to see Percy. Then she saw him. He had his arms around a girl with curly brown hair, who was about thirteen or fourteen, and a large bulky guy. The guy looked around sixteen.
"PERCY!!!!!!!!" she screamed. Percy dropped his arms and their eyes met.
"Annabeth!!" Percy cried.
Annabeth leaped off even before the ship landed. The Romans made way for her. She could feel tears streaming down as she ran. She tackled Percy and leaped into his arms. It felt so good to be wrapped in his powerful, strong arms. She felt so safe in his grasp that she didn't want to let go. But Percy pulled back and looked into her eyes with those beautiful sea green eyes that Annabeth haven't seen in such a long time.
"I've missed you, Wise Girl," Percy whispered.
"I've missed you too, Seaweed Brain," Annabeth said. She looked up and saw that there were tears in his eyes too.
Percy pulled her back into his arms and kissed her. A real kiss on the lips. They stood there for such a long time that Annabeth didn't realize that everyone was watching, until whoops and applause filled the air. Annabeth felt her face turn burning hot.
Percy gripped her hand. "Come on. Follow me. There's someone I want you to meet." He pulled her along, until they were standing in front of Jason, Leo, and Piper. They were talking with the two kids Percy had his arms around of before and another girl, who looked about fifteen. She had long black hair, and dark, intense brown eyes.
"Annabeth," Percy said. "Meet Hazel Levesque, daughter of Pluto." He pointed to the girl with curly brown. Annabeth saw that her eye were gold, like a 14-karat gold peice.
Annabeth managed a faint "hi". Hazel nodded and smiled warmly.
"This is Frank Zhang," Percy introduced. He nodded to the big, bulky boy. "He's a son of Mars. And my distant, ah, very distant half brother. Frank is probably the only nice child of the war god."
Frank blushed. Annabeth smiled. She realized that Frank had a strange combination of a strong man, and a pudgy babyish face.
Percy pointed to the other girl, who was talking to Jason. "That's Reyna, daughter of Bellona, the war goddess. She's the praetor of this legion."
Jason turned to Percy. "You replaced me?"
Annabeth had no idea what Jason was talking about. But Percy looked down and shuffled his feet nervously. "I didn't want to. But the legion insisted. And Reyna," he added nervously.
Jason's eyes were dangerous and threatening. Piper touched his shoulder. "It's all right. We'll figure this out."
Annbeth introduced Jason, Piper, and Leo, to Hazel and Frank. Hazel stared at Leo. "You're Sammy."
"What?" Annabeth asked. The others looked euqually confused. Leo stared at Hazel as if she had popped out from his nightmare.
Percy was about to explain when Reyna interrupted. "We'll talk about this at the meeting." She raised her voice and shouted. "Senators and Greeks. Meet me in the Senate House."
Annbeth looked at Percy questioningly. "Just follow me," he said.
All the others from Camp Half-Blood joined up with them. Percy turned back and announced, "Everyone. Listen up. No weapons allowed, so you're gonna have to take them out. You'll get them back, but we don't want the meeting to get bloody."
They marched to the city. The statue, Terminus, made sure all the weapons were placed safely on the metal tray.
They arrived at the Senate House right on time. Percy took the seat next to Reyna at the head. Jason kept giving Percy a murderous look. Percy looked very uncomforatable, because Reyna kept taking hold of his hand. Annabeth felt a strong pulse of jelousy rippling inside her.
Reyna stood. "Jason, I would like to hear your story. From the very beginning. Then Percy will tell you his. Then, we must discuss the problem that our long lost praetor, Jason, has come back, and Percy has just recently been raised at the second praetor. But that'll be for later. Jason, you may begin."
Jason stood and took a deep breath. Then he began.

This is my first fanfic, so i hope that you all like it. and i would LOVE comments. they dont hafta be positive. but keep them constructive. enjoy!
last edited on Jun 27, 2012 at 09:29AM

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1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
hey book-worm! we posted at the same time!!!
1年以上前 book-worm said…
That's awesome!
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
big smile
NEW PAGE!!!! woohoo!!!
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
MY COMPUTER IS GLITCHING!!!!!!!
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
oh. its back to normal. whew.
1年以上前 demigod324 said…
hola rainbow so you know how you and bookworm told me to hit my brother...well i did and now i'm grounded for the week. which means i'm not aloud on the computer(my parents didnmt say anything about my phone so i'm using it) and i can't draw my anime that i like
1年以上前 book-worm said…
I thought I said to yell at him
1年以上前 demigod324 said…
one of you said that if he was your brother you would hit him(i think i'm going crazy since i can't get on the computer and my phone has horribly slow internet)
1年以上前 book-worm said…
I try not to hit my brothers because I get in trouble, I mostly yell at them
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
sad
i said lightly though. but hes younger, right? cuz mine is older. im sorry u got into trouble demigod.

1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
sad
no one's online? thats sad.
1年以上前 demigod324 said…
no its cool rainbow now i have a reason to sit in my room all afternoon and read percy jackson
1年以上前 tristain714 said…
cake
Sorry rainbow i have not been here for a while :'( but yyour story just gets better and better each post here is a "i sorry" cake for you
1年以上前 AthenaKnowsBest said…
rainy
Post Soon :)
Poseidon is mad, there's a hurricane coming straight for me gtg


~Athena out

1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
thanks guys! u warm my heart.
@AKB: thats horrible! hmmmm...... crazy idea but...... make a sacrifice!
1年以上前 kkw1700 said…
^ LoL
1年以上前 AthenaKnowsBest said…
rainy
^^LOL, hmm I wonder what I should sacrifice. there literally is a hurricane over me right now-don't ever move to Louisiana
There are things flying everywhere, it is soooo windy. CURSE YOU POSEIDON!! I shall send my owls upon you!

~WisdomGoddess out
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
*gasp* AKB!! ur gonna get urself killed! NOOOO!!!!!
1年以上前 book-worm said…
^be careful!!!!

@demigod-I saw this pic on a tumblr once and it said "grounded to my room? With all of my bookshelves? Okay!"
1年以上前 tristain714 said…
its drizziling where i live
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
its soooo hot!!!
btw, i might not be able to post for a while, cuz a lot of homework these days. like i dont think snowflakes has been going online for a long time.
also, please read my other forum if u havent already. more like its snowflakes, but just please read it.
link
1年以上前 LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
perfect here!!
awww boo 8(
but ill wait
ur's and snowflakes other forum's is funny :P
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
thanks! i havent had a lot of time to work on my chappie. but im thinking about doing reyna's pov.
u guys fine w/ that?
1年以上前 kkw1700 said…
Of course! :D
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
big smile
great! ill try to find some time to start on it.
1年以上前 snowflakes989 said…
Hey guys. I'm kinda thinking about abadoning my forum, because i dont have enough time to write it now that school has started. Anyone volunteer to continue?
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1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
crying
oh pooey! its just getting good!! please dont abandon it!!! ill understand if u dont post in a while!
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
ugh. homework. it might take a while for me to finish this chappie. but ive already got most of the main points figured out.
1年以上前 extraordinary25 said…
@snowflakes989: Please don't abandon!!! I would volunteer to continue, but I'm getting kinda busy too.
1年以上前 LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
crying
@snow noooooooo!!!!!!! i like ur story 8( i suck at literacy :P dont abondon pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeee
@rainbow reyna's pov ??? sweet ... post as fast as possible but ill wait if it takes longer
imma say it SKOOL SUCKS (atleast to me )
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1年以上前 LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
smile
oh and NEWPAGE
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
my mom told me not to go online too much on the weekdays, so i will most likely be posting on the weekends.
1年以上前 LeoNicoCrazaiii said…
smile
okkaaaaaiiiiiiiii
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
big smile
u really r optimistic!
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
wink
i still need some time to work on my chappie. but its a long weekend, so i will have more time.
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
hmmm
where did everyone go??
1年以上前 kkw1700 said…
I am here... I've been busy with my story lately.
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
smile
well, i feel so stupid now. of course ur busy w/ ur story! *slap myself in the head*
ill try to post, but it might take a while.
1年以上前 kkw1700 said…
No, no, it's okay! Oh, I am so tired... (:I
1年以上前 tristain714 said…
Yay yor ganna post
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
i hope..... its really late for me where i live, and we have monday off, so i have plenty of time.
1年以上前 book-worm said…
It's not so late here
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
big smile
oh. i mean, its like 10 pm. and tomorrow morning, im watching a movie and blah blah blah. on sunday, im kina busy. but im open on monday! yay!!
1年以上前 book-worm said…
Woo!
1年以上前 tristain714 said…
Why do you have monday off
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
tongue
it labor day. crap. im experiencing a writers block right now. like i know what i want to happen, but i just dont know how to get there. ugh.
1年以上前 LeosGirl said…
^I listen to music, but that's just me.
1年以上前 book-worm said…
I do to, sometimes music tells stories you can rearrange to put in your story
1年以上前 rainbow_girl said…
hey! thats what im doing right now! i like taylor swift.
1年以上前 extraordinary25 said…
laugh
^ I like Taylor swift 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!