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hi all, i dont know any poets names, but here is a poem i made, plz tell me if u like it または not, thx

(i have no name 4 it yet, so it would be nice if some1 could give me some ideas..)

I never thought that my bestest friend could be so near, but though they seem close, they are further then expacted......but if they're a true friend, it would be worth the walking mile, to see them and knoe that there near.........

フレンズ are extreamley special, always keep them close......


to reader:I know that most 詩 should ryme, but some doesnt, all that matters is that it has heart......
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:D hi every1, ther is a send verse....exept my 4 月 old dog ate it, ;D
ambie98 posted １年以上前
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it was nice and good i liked it
chagrin91 posted １年以上前
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very good. あなた should go to www.thepoemproject.kk5.org
poetryproject posted １年以上前
 ambie98 posted １年以上前
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Lovetreehill said:
I 愛 your poem.
No rhyme, but your words came from your heart.



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posted １年以上前 
shomill said:
Hey, I like it.
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posted １年以上前 
topazEYEs91 said:
i like it a lot. it reminds me of a friend that i lost.
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posted １年以上前 
kacimay72293 said:
I 愛 your poem....it really touched me.....
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posted １年以上前 
kanyewestlover said:
U shuld call it "near vs. far" または "hold on to frienship"
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posted １年以上前 
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