Is this a good poem and do あなた think もっと見る could be added?

Please be honest

We had such fun
Trying anything to talk to eachother
We'd find away
But then it stopped
We hardly spoke または saw one another
We were a couple
And a really cute one to
Afraid of my reaction
あなた had a friend deal with the brake up
They wrote a note
And I thought it was a joke
One from a friend
A secret admirer
または your brother
Hearing from my sister
It was no joke
あなた 発言しました it was akward
And that あなた still 愛 me
But I think I pushed あなた too far
What did I do
To make あなた push me away
It may sound strange but
I still want あなた in my life
Even if as a a friend
I'll b e here for あなた even if
The rest of the world leaves you
I won't
I'll stay
But if あなた want me back
Prove あなた won't hurt me again
Never again あなた will あなた hurt me
The same way twice
Cause boy
あなた fucked up