What do u all think of my poem called Leaving?

I can’t take it anymore,
You’re around me, it’s such a bore.
あなた fill up my future days with future darkness.
How can happiness be with me,
If あなた have taken it away?
This time あなた led me astray,
Nothing left of me but a sad gesture on my face.

I scream out for help,
But no one hears me yelp.
あなた suffocate me with your breathe on my face
When you’re on 上, ページのトップへ of me.
I just gave あなた what あなた want,
But I guess I’ll take it back.
I don’t want to do that,
But my button, you’re pushing it.

I’m leaving in the early morn
Just to see the band Korn.
And from there, I’m leaving あなた forever.
So enjoy your life wit your soul.
And don’t forget that I told あなた so.
No romance, no comments.
あなた fill me up with nothing more,
But he sensation of a bore.