What do あなた think of these lyrics I wrote?

I have only come up with chorus + bridge, 書く up verses tomorrow. :)

The One For You

Chorus:]
Won't he open his eyes wide for awhile?
Just to see what he's missing out in his life
Cause I could be the one who'd make him smile
Cause I would be the one he'd say I 愛 あなた to
And she would never 愛 あなた the way I do
So take a chance and maybe then you'll understand
Maybe you'll come to realize I'm the one for you

Bright:]
I want to wave my hands make a gesture to see if he cares
I know he's out of reach and theres nothing I can do but stare
And he doesn't see me standing right there
Like I disappeared into thin air

No あなた and me is not that absurd
No あなた and me is not hard work
It's just that...

Chorus:]
He won't open his eyes wide enough for me
He doesn't know what he's missing out to clearly see
That I could be the one who'd make him smile
That I would the one he'd say "I 愛 you" to
And she won't ever ever 愛 あなた the way I do
So take a chance and maybe then you'll understand
Maybe you'll come to realize that I'm the one for you


--------------Draft Lyrics, don't know where to place them----------

And it was like a dagger to my heart
Seeing him smile holding hands with that girl
Seeing him with someone else breaks me apart
If he could only see I could rock his world