Okay I'm curious as to what あなた readers want.I only have 1 コメント for my new chapter and its been 2 days.I don't know if i'M just impatient または if my story really sucks.I know most of あなた rpobably like it and don't コメント but,I have a low self esteem and when i don't see コメント i don't feel too confident to continue because i think no one will read them.My WHY DO あなた LIKE HER story is the most 人気 now.And that was one of the first ones I did.Now I think I peeked too early.
Anyway,it helps me to see もっと見る コメント about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Anyway,it helps me to see もっと見る コメント about my stories to continue.SO please comment!PLEASE!NO one make fun of me please!
Courtney-um こんにちは so how u doing Duncan-fine fine very nice Duncan-hey can i talk to u in private Courtney-sure sure they walk to a a hallway Trent -im gonna go listen to them be right back dudes .... Duncan-so Courtney um I broke up with Gwen Courtney-why u guys were perfect for each other Duncan-we were cause u were really mean and mad Courtney-i was but then i gusse i got over u Duncan-u did Courtney-i dont know how but i guess i did Duncan-look im sorry if i hert u so would u like to be um Courtney-to still be フレンズ thatll be nice Duncan-sure we can but i ment もっと見る than フレンズ Courtney-oh u mean boyfriend and girlfriend Duncan-yeah Courtney-but What will be diffrent this time Duncan-look will be honest and not crazy I just want to be with u Courtney-really? Duncan-really then they kiss
Narrators POV:
Duncan found Courtney and left Steve unconces and went back to the wedding (this only took like 5 min.)Do あなた Duncan Paine Take Courtney 花 to be your ofley wedded wife...I do and do あなた Courtney 花 Take Duncan Paine to be your ofley wedded husbind.....I do....not
just kidding I do. Then with the power invested in me I now pronunce あなた man and wife あなた may now キッス the bride.
Duncans POV:
With plesher.This is the best 日 of my life.
Courtneys POV: This is the best 日 ever.
Narrators POV:
When they got ホーム they poped open a bottle of shapane and watched 映画 on cable.
Duncan found Courtney and left Steve unconces and went back to the wedding (this only took like 5 min.)Do あなた Duncan Paine Take Courtney 花 to be your ofley wedded wife...I do and do あなた Courtney 花 Take Duncan Paine to be your ofley wedded husbind.....I do....not
just kidding I do. Then with the power invested in me I now pronunce あなた man and wife あなた may now キッス the bride.
Duncans POV:
With plesher.This is the best 日 of my life.
Courtneys POV: This is the best 日 ever.
Narrators POV:
When they got ホーム they poped open a bottle of shapane and watched 映画 on cable.
Okay; This.. May possibly sound wierd. But! It's kinda related. So.. I was 読書 Twilight. Then; All of the sudden... The 愛 三角形 popped into my mind. Do あなた know how Edward is protective, somewhat strict about Bella, and who she hangs out with? Well... Edward is like a male version of Courtney. then; Theres... Gwen. -_-. Gwen is layed back; Protective when she wants to be; and knows how to have fun. See? Jacob's a male version if Gwen—Not goth though. Then, Bella is a female version of Duncan. あなた see how in NewMoon; she got into tons of trouble? And; Thats how Duncan is.
Now.. What do ya think?
Now.. What do ya think?
Duncan`s POV:There was nothing to say.Courtney pulled her fangs back in and started to fastly walk away.I followed her."See.I am a monster."Courtney said."No あなた are not.So don`t say that."I 発言しました grabbing her によって the shoulders.She was cold,but I didn`t care cause I loved her.I`ve never loved a girl like Courtney.There was just something about her that made it alright.It felt good though."Thanks.But あなた don`t understand.I`m a killer."she said."I don`t care."I said.I bent my neck over."You don`t want this."Courtney said."I want you."I said."You are sure?"she asked."Yes."I said.Courtney`s fangs quickly came back out again and sank into my neck.