Behind The Scenes

I've been planing this one for weeks, so please tell me if its good. Thanks!

Booths eyes flickered open. The cold hit him like a ナイフ and made him shiver. When his eye site had cleared he looked at his surroundings. He was in a dense forest, at the base of a steep hill, and he was alone. That’s when he saw his car. It was dented and was tipped on its side. It all came back to him in an instant. ‘We were driving, and then something, または someone hit us, and.... We! Where are BONES（ボーンズ）-骨は語る- and Parker!?’ Fear and shock ran through his body. He tried to stand, but the cold ate away at his strength....