So, uh, I just dug myself into those horrible, horrible hole where I asked a person if she needed help with her story and ohmygod I do not understand a word she wrote and I keep giving her little tips and advises but she's misunderstanding everything and I really don't want to help her anymore but I dunno how to tell her that and oh god what do I do?!
投稿されました 1年以上前
Wow sounds like a real jam; does she know you're having hard time understanding her work because of her grammar, spelling nonexistent story flow, plot, etc? I would say that, because あなた don't understand it, that あなた just can't help her. Just say you're very sorry, but this isn't working out. Hopefully she’ll understand.1年以上前
Yep, told her. And I tried telling her what she's doing wrong, like giving her examples and telling her she's not exactly understanding what elements make up a story. I told her that it's great that she's interested in writing, but before jumping into a huge story which she will most likely lose interest in after a while, start small. Practice before even thinking about putting her stuff up in the 'net. She hasn't replied back yet. I'm not really surprised. :/1年以上前
Well damn, the 移動する was purrrfect. It's crazy how very closely they followed the book, and I loved how they didn't try to cover all the violence and bloodbath, which was as intensely filmed as it was written. Rue's death shattered my petty little ハート, 心 into a million pieces, which was expected but I still cried a river. They didn't overplay the 愛 triangle, which made me an extremely happy fan. Seneca クレーン is sexy. Peeta's camouflage was AMAZING. Cato broke my ハート, 心 with his bloody speech.
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It's been a very happy December for me here! A lot of things have happened, including fanfiction stuff, and it's almost the New 年 here! :O How's it been going for you?1年以上前
I'm trying to, but a writer's block is blocking my way. Grr, so annoying. So I've asked a fellow writer in FFN to help me write. So, I'm not sure what's going to happen. :/1年以上前
YAY, a prop! That's like my 秒 リスペクト in here! Lol, thanks for adding me to your ファン 一覧 as well. あなた know what, I should start giving out リスペクト to people as well. :P1年以上前
^ Exactly. I didn't mind that she kept on getting もっと見る and もっと見る power and that she might be the key to all the mysteries, but she is changing so drastically. I'm 読書 "Fang" right now, and the part where エンジェル kicks Max out of the Flock had me staring at the book open-mouthed for like 5 minutes. I liked her much better when she was Max's little angel.1年以上前