Underlined= Thoughts.
Italics= Flashbacks
Soldiers were slowly picked out one によって one, as the explosion drew closer and closer. "We're not going to make it!" cried a solider who was close behind Derek. "Yes we are! So shut up!" Derek yelled as he leaped over cars and debris. The roar grew louder and a blast sent the soldiers flying into buildings and scattered along the streets. Soldiers screamed as the blast covered them burning their skin. Derek attempted to stand up only to be knocked back down unconscious.
"Adams? Adams! Status Report." Derek opened his eyes slowly and sat up,
"Adams! Are あなた there? Report!" he looked down at his radio and responded, "Adams here, what is it General?" Derek slowly got up and walked down the 通り, ストリート as dust and smoke arose from the 前 explosion. "Status レポート Soldier." The radio blared and static filled the speaker, "High count of casualties, I think I'm the only one left." the radio remained silent for a moment until the General responded, "Alright, get back to the 安全, 安全です zone and we'll pick up there." Derek coughed and started back walking, "Copy that." he scanned the area looking for any signs of life, but only death and sorrow filled the spaces of empty streets. Derek make a sharp turn, when he heard the sound of a helicopter, his eyes blurred and dizziness overwhelmed him. Gotta keep moving.... Derek slowly made his way towards the arrival of the helicopter, attempting to pull out the piece of shrapnel in his side. Derek jerked out the piece of metal in his side, blood soaked through his uniform as he slowly made his way through the rubble. "Adams! 'Bout time あなた showed up!" The General shouted over the roar of the helicopter. Derek gave him a weak smile as the General extended his hand. Derek reached out but collapsed to the ground injured, barely missing the General's hand.
This took a whole 5 minutes.
Italics= Flashbacks
Soldiers were slowly picked out one によって one, as the explosion drew closer and closer. "We're not going to make it!" cried a solider who was close behind Derek. "Yes we are! So shut up!" Derek yelled as he leaped over cars and debris. The roar grew louder and a blast sent the soldiers flying into buildings and scattered along the streets. Soldiers screamed as the blast covered them burning their skin. Derek attempted to stand up only to be knocked back down unconscious.
"Adams? Adams! Status Report." Derek opened his eyes slowly and sat up,
"Adams! Are あなた there? Report!" he looked down at his radio and responded, "Adams here, what is it General?" Derek slowly got up and walked down the 通り, ストリート as dust and smoke arose from the 前 explosion. "Status レポート Soldier." The radio blared and static filled the speaker, "High count of casualties, I think I'm the only one left." the radio remained silent for a moment until the General responded, "Alright, get back to the 安全, 安全です zone and we'll pick up there." Derek coughed and started back walking, "Copy that." he scanned the area looking for any signs of life, but only death and sorrow filled the spaces of empty streets. Derek make a sharp turn, when he heard the sound of a helicopter, his eyes blurred and dizziness overwhelmed him. Gotta keep moving.... Derek slowly made his way towards the arrival of the helicopter, attempting to pull out the piece of shrapnel in his side. Derek jerked out the piece of metal in his side, blood soaked through his uniform as he slowly made his way through the rubble. "Adams! 'Bout time あなた showed up!" The General shouted over the roar of the helicopter. Derek gave him a weak smile as the General extended his hand. Derek reached out but collapsed to the ground injured, barely missing the General's hand.
This took a whole 5 minutes.
park wearing civvies
age:18
alias:goodgirl
power(s):sings 音楽 that controls her enemy,levitation,and *bloodance
civvies:black and blue dress(changes her outfits a lot)
herocostume:long black and blue dress black boots
BG story:park ran away from ホーム at the age of 6,because she did not like her parents and a nice young lady took her in for a while and taught Park how to play ピアノ and violin and she learned that she had a great gift to 音楽 and had grown powers that came from her music,so she then joined the young justice kids,and became Goodgirl.
<3<3<3 hope あなた liked it :)
*bloodance is when she plays her violin really fast and makes the villain dance so much he starts to bleed to death.
Salil
Gun in a earlyer time
Greetings! I come in Geekiness!
Not really, just with some good news and bad news. Which do あなた want to hear first? Bad news it is. I'm cancelling the Red Revenge four part finale and the four season web-series that would've followed.
*Listens to silent audience* I'm sorry you're so displeased. *more silence* Anyway, onto the good news.
I just purchased a website which will become the ホーム of the Black Hero in the very near future. I'm working on books, videos, character slots, and maybe even a game for the website! No confirmed 日付 when this will be up but hopefully this summer.
Also, I'm restarting the Red Revenge series in his own world where everything belongs to me. The first book (the creation story, what else) will be published in three parts (for もっと見る details, stay tuned to my wall.)
So, while I'm cancelling Red Revenge VI: The Legend Falls here, I will be opening the Black Hero's website and publishing the first in a ten book saga this Summer. Stay tuned!
Not really, just with some good news and bad news. Which do あなた want to hear first? Bad news it is. I'm cancelling the Red Revenge four part finale and the four season web-series that would've followed.
*Listens to silent audience* I'm sorry you're so displeased. *more silence* Anyway, onto the good news.
I just purchased a website which will become the ホーム of the Black Hero in the very near future. I'm working on books, videos, character slots, and maybe even a game for the website! No confirmed 日付 when this will be up but hopefully this summer.
Also, I'm restarting the Red Revenge series in his own world where everything belongs to me. The first book (the creation story, what else) will be published in three parts (for もっと見る details, stay tuned to my wall.)
So, while I'm cancelling Red Revenge VI: The Legend Falls here, I will be opening the Black Hero's website and publishing the first in a ten book saga this Summer. Stay tuned!
Jenna
