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Vampire Knight ファン Fiction:Crimson Door chapter 4

posted by ZekiYuro

Chapter Four: "Sacrificial Lamb"

The sun was riding low in the sky, but the 日 students had not yet finished their classes. Ichiru had gotten himself excused from the last class, claiming a severe stomach ache. After fooling the nurse and being sent back to his room to rest, he'd promptly slipped back out of the dorm again and made his way out here. In a few hours, Zero would get out of class; he always got out ahead of the others in order to have time for his guardian duties, so he could pretend to protect the 日 Students from the Night Students… ironic and despicable, considering he himself...

How to write a letter

posted by ZekiYuro

The art of 書く a letter takes practice, knowledge about proper form and the ability to put into words your feelings, thoughts, and/or ideas. If あなた learn the basic parts of a letter, it will help あなた to create letters for a variety of occasions.
Parts of the Letter:

Your address
At the 上, ページのトップへ of your letter, あなた will put your address, so the reader will know where to send their reply to.

Date
Put the 日付 on which the letter was written in the format 月日年 i.e. June, 15, 2009.

Inside Address
The inside address is only required for a business letter and will include the address of the person...

書く an Essay in Reverse

posted by ZekiYuro

Some students have trouble 書く essays in the traditional sense, moving from 上, ページのトップへ to bottom. They struggle to get words on the pages this way, which causes them to take significantly longer to write whatever they need to write. If you’re going to school at one of the 上, ページのトップへ online universities, あなた need to know how to write well and efficiently at the same time. This is crucial in a fast-paced degree program like the ones available on the web.

When I was in college, I actually wrote all of my essays in reverse, starting from the conclusion and working my way to the introduction. This may be...

How to Organize a College Essay

posted by ZekiYuro

f I had to identify the most important step in 書く an essay, I would probably say it was the organization. Coming up with a thesis is a big part of essay writing, but it doesn’t mean anything if あなた do not have the proper support for it. That is where organization comes into play. If あなた can put your thoughts in the right order, あなた can get people to feel a certain way as they read your work. It’s like taking them on a journey through your mind.

Here are some tips to help あなた effectively organize your essays in the future.

The Pyramid Method
This is my お気に入り way to write essays, and...

Living underwater-possible または not?

posted by ZekiYuro

Some times ago,scientists began experiments to find out whether it would be possible to set up a 'village' under the sea.A special room was built and lowered into the water of Port Sudan in the Red Sea.For 29 days,5 men lived at a depth of 40 feet.At a much lower level,another two divers stayed for a week in a smaller 'house'.On returning to the surface,the men 発言しました that they had experienced no difficulty in breathing and had made many interesting scientific observations.The captain of the party,Commander Cousteau,spoke of the possibility of cultivating the seabed.He 発言しました that some permanent...

Always Up

posted by hgfan5602

I'm up all the time now.
Head up
Shoulders back
Legs slightly apart
Back straight.

I walk into the exam room,
Knowing inside my heart
That the ones who fear
Are the ones who do not succeed.

I sit down.
Confident,
I start my song
Of utmost elegance.

I use all my power
And strength.
I use all the dynamics in the world,
I use everything everyone's brought me.
I use all the good that everyone
Has 与えられた me
In my life.

Time goes slowly by.
I feel myself going along with the beat.
I am entranced in my own song.
It feels better than ever before.

I am done.
I walk over to the judges,
Shaking each hand.
I feel a sense of pride in my heart,
Knowing that I have done it now.
I truly have.

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Disappointed

posted by hgfan5602

I am disappointed,
At the way things are moving along.
Why is everyone so private about
Everything?

I am disappointed,
That I have not met my dream yet.
It seems a long way until I will
Catch my dream in the sky.

I am disappointed,
With many people.
Not just me.
But mostly me.

Why am I being so selfish?
Why are other people being so unkind?
Everything seems in ruin,
Including me.

I am sorry that this is the way it must be
Today,
But I know that tomorrow is a new day,
Waiting for all of us to do good deeds.
And do we shall.

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Best of the Thrills: Chapter Two: Jake

posted by hgfan5602

Jake Gartner here. For some reason, something kept those mutant serpents away from us. Chase Johnson, my friend, is over here with me at the としょうかん, ライブラリ of Death. Yeah. Bad name for a library, if あなた ask me. I would never have come here in the first place, had no one ever bothered me with a ransom note about my mother dying if I didn't go on this life-or-death journey. (Sorry, I have to speed the story up now. Chase says I'm getting all the attention.) So, what we found out at the library. Not much. All we found out was that mutant serpents tend to be very huge, have sharp teeth, and stay away...

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Sing Without Sound

posted by Insight357

    “Kayden!” Sebastian-my band’s manager-had a look of dismay on his simple features. I couldn’t hear him, but I could read his lips. Anyone who knew me knew to get my attention before they spoke.
    “What?” I asked. Though I’d been deaf since I was five I knew how to speak as well as anyone with full hearing.
    “You still haven’t made your set list,” he stated, his face screwed up into a frown. “The first performance is tomorrow night.”
    “I’ll have it finished...

Time to Run

posted by hgfan5602

My name is Matt Downley, and I am a サッカー player. I just moved here to New York, and I was just going to try out for the Weston Middle サッカー team, when believe it または not, the principal came rushing down the halls and 発言しました that I couldn't play because I am disabled. WHAT THE HECK!!! Okay, I was like, "So here's the deal. I can't play. I can't do anything. What the freak am I supposed to do at this stupid school!!!" But, of course, I didn't have the guts to say that out loud to the principal, so I just muttered and said, "Okay." Lately, I feel like people have been stalking me when I came back from school. Everyday when I go to bed, I feel like people are looming in the shadows above me. I didn't know now, but tonight would be a night of extreme danger.

Scandalous Parents

posted by alicia386

What scandalous secrets can adults keep from their parents? I need ideas for a book I am currently writing. It is about how some secrets adults keep from us can actually save our lives. I hope to give あなた a sneak プレビュー of my book which is called The Deadly Truth. Can't wait for your opinions!

To know もっと見る about my book please post your 質問 on my wall. I will try my best to reply as fast and as soon as I can. If I don't then just know I did read them.

あなた can believe the first chapter of my book will be 投稿されました either this week または次 Friday.

Shadows (A Short Story)

posted by morganaforever

Full of excitement, Nicole and Ellie arrived at the fairground. They walked through the towering gates, expecting laughter and chatter – but everything remained quiet. No music, no noise, nothing! The place was deserted. A strong gust of wind blew, making them shiver. As they walked on, it began to get darker. Gradually, the sky turned from a bright blue to black. One によって one the lights of the fairground flickered on, illuminating the black sky. As they passed によって The Haunted Mine, it seemed to be inviting them to have a go. A man clad completely in black was waiting beside the entrance.

“Can...

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So あなた thought Kindergarten was hard...

posted by sophiahs

It probably took あなた a while to learn the 26 letters of the alphabet back when あなた started school. But actually, あなた should count yourself lucky. Some languages use alphabets with many もっと見る letters than that. Russian, for example, has 33 letters, and the Khmer language of Cambodia has over 70. And in China and Japan, where they write with signs called 'characters', there are hundreds, even thousands of different shapes to remember. Japanese primary school children are expected to learn about a thousand characters before they can go on to high school!

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Background check

posted by candyvtoby511

Tess’s parents were shot down right before her eyes, coming out through the side door of a theatre. She couldn’t understand why he had killed them and not her. The murderer was young, maybe even the same age as herself. He was disguised as an older man, but she could still tell he was quite young, 14 または so.
Tess is walking late at night with her dog alone, thinking about her parent’s mysterious murderer; why didn’t he kill her as well? What motive did he have to kill them? She ponders over the words her mother spoke in her dying breath; what did she mean that I shouldn’t trust him?...

Emmanuel 線, レイ Successfully Opens Gibraltar Fashion Week

posted by ts_ilieva

Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture によってゴールド Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)

Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture by Gold Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)

Emmanuel Ray, Britain’s Fashion アイコン of The 年 2011 (Fashions Finest Awards), successfully opened Fashion Week Gibraltar on 18 April 2012 at the Casemates Gallery in Gibraltar.
London – In front of an excited crowd Emmanuel Raygave a short speech thanking everyone who came to the opening, his publicist David J Mann, director ofHighmore PR, and Fashion Week Gibraltar’s organiser and fashion designer Reene Weston. He then proceeded to cut the red ribbon allowing everyone to start their Fashion Week experience.
Emmanuel had this to say about the opening,
“What an amazing experience it was....

A Promise I Won't Forget- A Short Story

posted by IlovePatch97

If i get enough コメント i will extend it.

It was damp, smelled of earth and pine, I heard leaves rustle, twigs snap as 動物 scurried in the 木, ツリー tops. I wasn't supposed to be here, this wasn't my room, my bed. I was supposed to me in によって cottage on eagle lake. I was supposed to be asleep, 上, ページのトップへ bunk with my younger brother Elliot on the bottom. I was supposed to be smelling fabric softener and hear the soft snore from little Elli, feel the heat of my cat sleeping on my chest. I opened my eyes and I could see the sky, black with soft twinkle of a million 星, つ星 and the florescent glow of the moon....

1

Science project!

posted by precious211

“Before we leave I must warn you. We are now entering alien territory, so be careful and considerate to you’re new surroundings. One stupid mistake can get you, and everyone around あなた killed.”

The safety instructor’s voice boomed across the large, air conditioned spaceship. It sounded oddly cheerful for someone who had just told them that they could all die.
Everyone tried to see where her line of vision was pointing towards. It was aimed toward the windows.
Kendra glanced through them and, and gulped. They were about four thousand feet above sea level, and the 宇宙 craft had just...

How to Avoid 書く a Sentence Fragment

posted by IloveMyLord

Using correct grammar and sentence structure is vital if あなた want to convey your thoughts accurately. あなた also want your 書く to hold the reader's attention. Nothing is もっと見る annoying than 読書 a manuscript littered with grammatical errors. The error of 書く sentence fragments is a common error. Sentence fragments are incomplete sentences that don't express a complete thought.

tips:
1

Have a subject for every verb. The subject is the actor in the sentence. The verb is the action taken in a sentence.

2

Make sure all of your dependent clauses have a completing thought. An independent...

2

Perfect (part 1)

posted by cutiegirl01

(Please tell me your opinion on my story and be truthful please!)

    “Erik get down here now!” My father yelled.
    “I’m coming, I’m coming!” I hurried down the stairs. I learned in the last 17 years I’ve been alive, that if my dad calls me I need to be down fast…or else…
    I got down the stairs, and went into the living room where he always sat on his days off. “Yes, dad? What can I get you?”
    My mother smiled up at me from her book, “You are such a good son, Erik-“
    My...

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Boom Boom Clap

posted by NormalcyIsDead

Boom boom clap
Bounce your head, snap
To the classic, to the rap

Step ball change
Basic with a buck
Pleay, tour jete
Bounce your head to the rock

One two three,
Two two three,
Count along with your head
Mosh with the beat

Hop shuffle hop back
Twirl your arms, bend your back
Do the thingamajiggie
Wear out your taps

Breathe it in, breathe it out
Reach for the sky, dance on the ground
Flitter here, gallop there
Lose yourself anywhere

Flow with the music
Feel it in your veins
As あなた bounce your head, snap
Boom boom clap