書く Article: So..who are you? Part 1

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posted by StarWarsFan7

There I was. *sigh* Just sitting there, waiting for him. Who? あなた ask? My crush, Patrick Wellsiben, he was the one for me. Let alone, him being THE most 人気 boy in school, I was known as a loser. I was the omega of the 狼, オオカミ pack. What am I talking about? Nevermind. My conscience says "Ask him out!", but my guts say "Don't do it you! He's gonna say no!" I don't know what to do! He comes near me and says "Hey." I stand there like a scarecrow smiling. "I feel stupid." "So stupid." Why shouldn't I get the attention from populars? I have short, thick black hair, I wear tank tops all the time, regular jeans and converse. So much for fitting in.

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ryofangirl short, but i think u hav potential :)

Espeongirl360 I like the idea. But i could help with grammer and making the sentences a tiny bit better. Oh, god! now I feel like my friend/part time editor XD!

StarWarsFan7 Lol!

skyetwilightfan LOVE IT CAN'T WAIT TILL PART 2

bri-marie Okay, I'm going to try and do this without hurting your feelings. I apologize before hand if it doesn't work out too well :/ There really isn't much to go on here. You need many, many more details: where is "there"? Who is "I"? Why is she (I'm assuming its' a she) a loser - as of right now there isn't anything that makes her stand out? Watch how you phrase things: "I stand like a scarecrow, smiling" doesn't give me the visual I think you were aiming for. When I see (or hear) "scarecrow", I automatically picture a straw dummy in the middle of a field, wearing a denim button down shirt and a straw hat. "I have short, thick black hair, I wear tank tops all the time, regular jeans and converse. So much for fitting in." This makes it seem as if your character's appearance is odd - making her stand out. It's really not - it's actually a common outfit. "Why shouldn't I get the attention from populars?" Earlier she told us she was a loser. It doesn't make sense that, now, she's questioning why the "populars" aren't giving her any attention. ""I feel stupid." "So stupid."" This looks as if it's a conversation between two people. It comes off to your reader that your narrator said (aloud) that she feels stupid, and Patrick (also aloud) replied with "So stupid." "I was the omega of the wolf pack. What am I talking about? Nevermind." Is this some inside joke-type thing with your narrator, or is she assuming that whomever she's talking to doesn't know what an omega in a wolf pack is? Watch your tenses. You start off using past tense, then slip into present, then go back to past. Also, watch your spelling, punctuation and Mary-Sue-ness.

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The last 分 (prologue)

posted by nEvEr-tHe-sAme

The rain fell silently as I layed there waiting. Not like I had a choice though. But it had seemed もっと見る like a nightmare than reality. This wasn't how I imagined it... I never even got the chance to say goodbye. Let alone even explain what happened. I needed to wake up... from this nightmare, I tried, but never could... never did.

Life lesson: I learned that trusting people isn't what it actually seemed. There's もっと見る to it than あなた would ever imagine, I mean, it's not just trusting people, but it's who to trust. How can we tell? There might be some ways we think we can tell, but those ways......

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Broken Dreams Chapter 28

posted by BellaSwan636

Shaun

It feels like a piercing physical wound; to see her leave me again.

I cannot access the part of me that handles realisation. Serena called her Ashleigh. That child in her arms. Is mine.

My forehead is resting on the edge of the hard granite countertop, and I am trying to ignore the card that is currently lying right in front of me. I already know what is printed on it によって heart.

Serena Meyer

Gaurdian Ad Litem, New York.

serenashleigh@mweb.com

And then a number scrawled on in her own handwriting.

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Her eyes haunt me when I close my own. Everything...

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Destiny(Modified) によって isabellaashley

posted by Isabellaashley

PREFACE

The woods were filled with silence and I looked around for any signs of the slayer. As I heard the leaves on the ground rustling, I turned around and there he appeared from the treetops of a nearby 木, ツリー and he gave me a sly smile which sent shivers down my spine before slowly approaching me and my ハート, 心 was pounding inside my chest. I was vulnerable as there wasn’t anyone to protect me and I knew that I was going to die here, alone. Please let this be over fast, I thought to myself.
Every step that he took towards me was another step closer to death. His long, black hair was flowing...

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Daddy

posted by Sweet_Pants

A/N: Ok, this is just a short, about 500 word drabble I came up with. It's about 7-year-old Alice and her drunk derpressed father, called, of course, 'Daddy'. It's not much, but I though I'd post it. Constructive critisizm is welcome.

Please rate and comment.
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The smell of his breath came off in waves of grief and alcohol mixed into what could be described as inner turmoil. Although Alice barely gave a thought to the bottle of whiskey in his hand, as she was もっと見る preoccupied with not throwing up from the smell of her father she should have gotten...

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Wanting Someone - Chapter Five

posted by Lindy52

Chapter Five

When Jamie stared and was speechless the moment she saw the handsome man in the doorway, that man looked at her for a few 秒 and still holding the サッカー ball, he 発言しました to her with that grin of his, “So, this really your ball?” In return, Jamie didn’t answered his question, she just kept looking at him and figuring out what her mother was doing, Mac decided to be the person who will do the talking and from below, she looked up to the man and 発言しました to him, “Yeah, あなた are holding my ball!”

After hearing that, the man looked down at Mac and when he squatted down to Mac’s...

Trapped in my own time chapter 6

posted by dragonrider

"Uh Starr aren't あなた going to take me back to my own time?" Elliot asks
I glance at him "No the time travel part broke when I turned it off besides didn't あなた want to stay here?" I ask
Elliot looks down "Not really but isn't there other time machines?"
"Yeah but they can't get ahold of them so they are going after me. It's good and bad. It's bad because now I can't get あなた back to your own time. It's good because now they can't do those sick experiments So yeah あなた and I my friend are trapped in my own time," I say
"Hey do あなた think that if anybody is 読書 this they would laugh because...

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Spirit Of Stone part 3

posted by TDIlover226

Part 3
Eddie woke up on a sky scraper roof top. It was raining and he couldn't remember how he had gotten there. He was still tired, and dripping wet, but he didn't care, he curled up and went to sleep again.

"Good morning sleepy head!" Eddie woke up to see a mutant, that looked like an angel, standing over him. "Where am I?" he said. "On the 上, ページのトップへ of a building, can't ya tell!" another voice 発言しました from behind him. He looked behind him to see the mutant that was dressed like a devil. "Annie, don't be mean to him, he probably doesn't have any ideal of whats going on!" 発言しました the angel. "So I guess...

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Gods 2: Chapter 1: Palm Springs (Sorry I deleted the other copy)

posted by gossipgirlxoxo

There’s nothing better than a nice relaxing holiday; in the beach, city または country to meet your tastes. I had only been in the famous Palm spring for two days. And to be honest I wanted to go home, Ethan wasn’t speaking to me. Thor and Liz were all over each other. Remember that guy I ran into in the cemetery, well he’s here and talking to me, against Ethan’s wishes of course. I sat there on the fresh green grass, no not playing golf but 読書 ‘All the pretty girls’ a book that I needed, a bloody disgusting book with no 愛 what so ever. I closed the book and put my face in my...

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Wake up... Ch.1

posted by GWENxTRENT

"Gwen,Gwen,Gwen!" Ms.Barton 発言しました as I was asleep in history class."What?" I 発言しました when I woke up."had a nice dream?" "S-sorry Ms.Barton,it won't happen again"."let's hope not." She said. When the ベル rang to go to lunch,my best friend,Marlon came up to me."What happend back there?" Marlon asked.To tell あなた the truth,I've always had a crush on him.I always had a feeling he liked me back."Nothing,nothing at all,i was just dreamin." "What about?"he asked with a smile."I'm not telling you!" I 発言しました with a smile.When we went back to class,Ms.barton wanted to talk to me."Gwen,you have been sleeping in my class far to long". "sorry Ms.B,I havent been myslef lately." I 発言しました with a frown."OK,first of all,dont call me "Ms.B",and あなた must go to sleep on time." She 発言しました with a light smile."sorry,it hared to fall a sleep in my house." well then...ther is only one thing to do...you need to,wake up..."

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Three Poems

posted by Cuddles

These are for my dad who died almost exactly 12 years ago.
I don't know if it's any good.

Untitled

I’ve been at this point many times before.
One should think it might get better.
But now, as it’s almost exactly 12 years since
That special 日
I remember
Everything
As it would have been yesterday.
That I didn’t understand
That I didn’t want to understand.
That something faded away this day…
that it did not return
until now.
But it was not my hope
It’s still there, hidden in a small corner of my ハート, 心
Sometimes piping up
Just to abandon me again
But it didn’t leave me.
Yes…I still...

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Ode to Joy

posted by Dearheart

Josie ran.

“Maybe I made a mistake thinking you’d understand!”

“Well maybe I made a mistake marrying you!”

She ran, not heeding the tempest that tore at her clothes nor caring where she fled to as long as it was someplace far from home. Away from the chaos of her fighting parents and the hopelessness of the choice she was faced with.

“A tumor?”

“...it’s pressing on your brain stem and growing very rapidly. If it isn’t taken care of soon, it will be life-threatening...the surgery, however, would cost あなた your hearing... Permanently...”

Her ハート, 心 pounded in time with her feet;...

Don’t あなた understand

posted by blossomyumyum

You’re keeping me up at night as 日 breaks
It’s all for you
Yeah that’s what あなた do, got me feeling so blue
When will あなた see
あなた have to let it be
When will あなた see just how much あなた really mean to me

Why is it just so hard to send that card
When do あなた think you’ll be able to understand
My 愛 might be killing me

I hope あなた realize I’m just a fool
Damn! You’re so cool

When do あなた think you’ll understand
あなた drove me to a far off land
When will あなた see
I can’t just let it be
Come on try to set me free
When will あなた finally understand
I care about you
I’ll tell あなた that firsthand
あなた have my ハート, 心 and my life
I hope soon I’ll get a chance to be your wife
I hope soon you’ll see, あなた mean the universe and the galaxy to me

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Despairing in the Autumn Chap.1:Pt.1

posted by -Universe_COLA-

Daniel

~"Rays of hopeless light beamed dim and pale through the dull orange, yellow, and auburn leaves of the fall's trees. But even where there is calmness in neutrality, there is always a prey, and always a predator. Humanity is no different."~

Daniel tore through woods at full speed, clothes torn, his small オレンジ backpack dangling across his back, his left arm carved with shredded flesh in the form of animalistic claw markings and lines of smeared crimson leaked slowly from the wound above his eye. The leg to his jeans on the left side, only hanging on によって a thread ripped itself away just above...

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about me

posted by stephany1617

Race:half Italian Human,Otaku,Reader Fanfiction,I 愛 my フレンズ and Respect them i Speak American English Fluent and i like the sound of the ocean and ビーチお気に入り animals:Dogs,Wolf,Dolphins,Horses,Panda,Tiger,Orca
Beluga Whales
アニメ i love:Naruto Shippuden,Swords Art Online,Inuyasha,Vampire Knight,Rosario+Vampire
my お気に入り sports are:Basketball,Tennis,Swimming
I'm the youngest child my mother have I have a biological brother and mom also my brother is a electronic Engineering
I have one small cute Malchi dog

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Suicide Squad trailer review

posted by MovieReveiw

This is an opinion so if あなた don't like these logoff...now.
In my opinion the new Suicide Squad sucks. Harley Quinn is not even Harley Quinn any more, Deadshot has stupid movie lines, and no King Shark. WTF. I will explain this all for people who are not familier with The Suicide Squad.
Since the beginning of time Harley Quinn has had an accent and, guess what, no accent in the new Suicide Squad. And since when does Harley Quinn dress like a fucking slut.
Deadshot is normaly the main charecter in The Suicide Squad but now he has two stupid 尻, お尻 lines, "So we are some kind of Suicide Squad?" Yes あなた are stupid it is the タイトル of your movie. "Let's go save the world." Fuck it I am done with Deadshot fully.
King 鮫, サメ is, well, a giant 鮫, サメ but now they have replaced him with a less cool Killer Crok.

Sucky one

galaxy

posted by erissajade05

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100 Rooms Chapter One

posted by Weasel1999

I. The Nursery

Ember lived in her nursery for the 次 few months, only being let out occasionally to go to the toilet. All she saw were the four walls around her but it wasn’t all bad.
The room was painted a pretty sky-blue and the carpet was thick, fluffy and a deep midnight blue. There was a ベッド and a huge white wardrobe with the most beautiful, 昔ながら, 昔ながらの clothes inside.
Rich velvets cloaks, soft 毛皮 stoles, bright silk dresses, every item of clothing needed to make a young lady of society look beautiful.
But Ember was not a young lady of society living in Victorian times. She was a...

Psychoanalysis: Chapter 30

posted by Insight357

    “Damien, I’m sorry,” his smooth voice 発言しました in my ear. I couldn’t face him. He had kicked me out, why would he be here? To apologize? It was a nice gesture, but it crippled me just to see him.
    “I don’t believe you,” my voice was shaking. Tears kept streaming down my face.
    “Listen,” he crept down the side of my face.
    “No, あなた listen to me,” I 発言しました turning over to face him. Our faces were all of three inches apart. “You killed me! Now あなた expect to come in here, apologize, and I’ll...