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just chapter 2 and beginning of Chapter 3...please coment on how あなた like it. thank you

Chapter 2

The guard shoved the key into the lock and opened the door. The room was dimly lit and my eyes had a hard time adjusting. Once they pushed me in, the door behind me slammed. Great alone with a bad light candle. But that's when I heard the whimper. I whirled, expecting to find a dog または something like that, but instead a boy with shaggy black hair sat in the corner. I stared at him until he glanced up. His eyes were a gentle brown; his features were soft unlike Griffins. The boy smiled. He still had that childish grin. I could easily tell he wasn’t that much older than me.

The boy suddenly stood making me jump. He had such a grace that it was freakish. I could tell that he wasn’t what I called normal. I cleared my throat
" h...h... hello. I... I... I'm Hayden. What I...I... Mean who are you?" the boy just looked at me and his grin got even bigger exposing canine teeth
"you smell good" little red flares went up in my brain. Anyone または thing that tells あなた that あなた smell good means that あなた should run.
" I beg your pardon?"
“I 発言しました あなた smell good. But different. You’re not from Vagan are you?"
I assumed that Vagan was the town または place that I was at.
"Uh... No I'm not. Are あなた a vampire?"
" oh heavens no!!! I would kill myself if I got turned into a leech!" after this he made a whimpering sound and then continued "I am a Half Wolf! And slightly proud of it" he paused "ok maybe I'm not but being the son of a Lycian has its perks."
"Your fathers a Lycian??"
" no my mother is a Lycian. If my father was a Lycian I would be fuzzier and もっと見る wolfish."
His voice wasn’t really a growl but it wasn’t high either. This boy または thing was apparently almost fully grown.
"The names Ziff. It's nice to meet あなた Hayden" he leapt up onto the 上, ページのトップへ bunk with out using the ladder. He aimed his nose at me and sucked in a gust of my sent and whimpered again.
"Yes あなた smell very good" again he breathed in and it snapped me. Hey, if あなた just got put into prison I think something that tiny would bug あなた too.
"Would あなた stop doing that! It's annoying!!"
Ziff dipped his head and I felt sorry for him
"I'm sorry it's kind of a habit"
"it's a habit that’s gotta be broken" Ziff nodded and mumbled
"a habit that's gotta be broken. Gotcha"
That's when I had an idea
"do あなた know a way out of here?" he had laid down facing the wall. He tilted his head slightly toward me.
"If I did, then would I be laying here?"
All my hopes were suddenly dashed.
"I guess not" I could hear the disappointed in my voice and he looked at me with his sad brown eyes.
“but I do have a plan" with that he smiled and I thought I saw his eyes flash a light red.
"So what is it?"
"What?"
"What’s this great plan?"
"Oh that"
"Yes THAT. I need to get out of here. My boyfriend is locked in one of these cells"
"Who’s your boyfriend? What is he?"
"My boyfriend is Griffin and he's..."
"A what? Lycain, troll, outsider, half-wolf, Sydren?" he paused and shivered "a Vampire?"
"You know about vampires?"
"Duh I know about vampires! I mean they ONLY rule the realm of Darken. That's no biggy. Really it's not" he cocked is head, peering down at me. From down here he did look like a wolf.
"Yes he's a vampire"
"I should have know によって the way あなた smelled"
"What’s that supposed to mean?"
"It means that あなた smell like and outsider AND a vampire. That's the sent that I couldn't pick up" I sighed and sank to the floor. Ziff looked at me with extreme concern.
"What’s the matter? Are あなた alright?" why would he care? He's a criminal
"Yes I'm fine. But what to あなた care?" he whimpered
"I-I-I don't know. I just do. I'm a caring person I guess"
I rolled my eyes "so are we gonna get out"
"Yes. I'll help あなた escape" I shook my head
"How do あなた know that I'm not going to double クロス you?"
"I don't. I'm just going to have to trust you.....Hayden" the way he 発言しました my name sounded like he was talking to his lover
"Well, sweet pea, do あなた want the 上, ページのトップへ bunk?"

Chapter 3
The 次 few weeks were close to hell. Ziff was overly friend and I actually started to warm up to him. I got used to the way he whined and whimpered and what pitch meant what emotion. He ate his 食 with his hands but always did it quietly. He usually spent his time in the corner behind the door または relaxing on the 上, ページのトップへ bunk which I let him have. He sometimes howls in his sleep, which is annoying. He curls up on his side kinda like a dog. I don't mind it just as long as he doesn’t pant and really act likes a dog.
The only problem is at night. He seems to get jittery if he's not asleep. He can't seem to sleep when the moon is shinning in our cell window. He sits at the window, staring out at the moon. While he's doing this he's humming または bouncing または both. He hums this song that sounds a lot like the lullaby Griffin sang to me only slightly different.
One night Ziff actually sang it in a deep majestic voice.

"Deep In the night, lies a loveless bird
The wolfs howl dies into the dread
Through nightfall, to the open field
Until the moon is high in sky
Pain and sorrow
Death and shade
All shall cry...
All shall.........die"
"That's sad, beautiful, but sad"
"My mother used to sing that to me. Believe it または not, Lycian’s can sing" I laughed
"Well あなた had to get your voice from somewhere"
"I'll take that as a complement. Thank you"
"Your welcome" he turned toward me and smiled his canine smile which made me smile. He smiled もっと見る then Griffin did.
"Crud"
"What?"
"We have to get out"
"Where’s the sudden rush coming from?"
"I've been away from ホーム for almost a month"
"Uh no あなた haven't"
"Yes I have"
"no... Time passes differently in the outside world"
"How differently?"
"Well let's say you've been here a complete month. あなた left your ホーム at 7:00 at night. You've been HERE a 月 but you've been GONE an hour"
"An hour?"
"Yep. That's kinda what I said" I stood
"My mother would still be worried" I was about to say something when the door opened reviling a guard.
"Ok. Miss, あなた need to come with me. If あなた don't fight, your death will be painless" DEATH?!?!
"She’s not going any where" Ziff stood in front of me
"Stand aside outcast"
"No"
"What"
"You heard me, no"
"You’ll regret that, dog" suddenly Ziff seemed to grow. I mean, he's already a head taller then me, but he became a head and a half. I saw the hair on the back on his neck stand up. I gasped as his nails grew into claws.
"She’s not going any where" he growled each word. I saw a fear flash across the guards face, quickly followed によって his poker face.
"Stand aside"
"And why would. I do that?" the guard brought a very good reason why. A gun. And yet people still rode on horses? What kind of place was this?
"I 発言しました move"
"No あなた 発言しました stand aside. Not to move" the guard rolled his eyes and Ziff used the distraction to his advantage and punched the man. The guard went flying out the door and into the wall, fell to the floor in a heap, presumed unconscious.
"GO Hayden!"
"What?" I could hear もっと見る guards coming. Crud もっと見る trouble
"I 発言しました GO!!" I didn't think and took off. I ducked into a hallway when I saw a group of guards
"There she is!! Get her!!"
"Crap" I ran at full speed, creeps reaching out their hands between the bars.
I finally found my escape, an empty doorway. I ducked inside, pulled the door to and slid the lock home. I sank to the floor against the door. I glanced around the room. It was some sort of office. The lights were off but I could make out a desk, shelves, and a chair. I listen and held my breath as feet drummed by. And Ziff found his way into my thoughts. I hope he's ok.
posted by Thalia_huntress
please rate and tell me what あなた think :)



“Maryann’s pov (the ghost)”
When Kura woke I went back to the アンダーワールド to yell at モクレン, マグノリア (her mom) “I hate lying to that poor child! あなた left her to become a vamp after あなた asked a witch to turn あなた back into a human to have her then be turned back into a vamp!” I yelled at her. She was getting ready to go feed on the males that followed her around. “Well あなた don’t have to watch after her I was your choice.” she 発言しました like a snob. “Because her mom didn’t care and I’m beyond younger then あなた I was twelve when あなた killed me and...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 11
I pulled away and showed matt where I was looking it was a brown 狼, オオカミ staring at us I bet he was stairing the whole time we were there the 狼, オオカミ had intelligent eyes like human then it disappeared and jake came out of the same spot with his bare chest
-jake?
-Bella what are あなた doing here? Didn’t あなた say あなた were living?
He 発言しました coldly
-you talk like this is your land! I was born here あなた cant say were I should go!
-I can Bella I don’t want to kill you!
I laughed kill me! Pfffff
-you cant kill us!
Matt 発言しました angry
-jake what do あなた want あなた don’t have powers…………and how did you...
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The guards walked back and forth in their normal sweeping motion that they always used. This made Joseph smile watching them through his hotel window with his state-of-the-art night-vision binoculars. just routine as usual, at least that's what the guards thought. Joseph looked at his watch, 12:23a.m. only seven もっと見る 分 till he had to go. Joseph grabbed his bag of ammunition and various other things. His small, light smg. He also put on his body armor, his cammo, and grabbed his combat knife. And of course his baby, he'd never forget his baby. His baby was a 9.mm beretta. Aims like a dream...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
(end of chapter8)
I was so nerves how charlie was going to react, matt squeezed my hand to comfort me charlie opened the door and gasped he was stairing at me ,not beliving it was me
-Bella?
He wasn’t sure if it was really me and then I heard billys voice from the phone
-charlie charlie are あなた ok?
He didn’t respond and turned off the phone
-yeah dad its me
He staired at me again
-you look different!
-yeah two weeks does that to you.
I lied to him
-oh Bella! I missed あなた so much I was so worried that I wouldn’t see あなた again!
Then I took my hand out of matts and hugged him
-your cold
-yeah its freezing...
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“Damn nobody in sight yet, I hope Marley and Alec are doing ok” 発言しました Opal. As she jumped from place to place she saw a young girl between the ages of 17-20, Opal didn’t even speak, and she didn’t need too. The girl was alone so Opal jumped behind her and as the girl turned Opal dug her fangs right into the girl’s neck. At first the girl’s eyes lit up with shock but then eased down into a deep sleep. Opal’s eyes turned the rose colour it does and when she was finished she through the girl to the ground, it has been too long since she drank so she didn’t really care about anything...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
"My world is devoid of hope. It's a world where all I hear is the sound of outside voices and the screams of those I kill. Where all I see is the black surface of an ocean reflecting a moon that is always a crescent, and the scarlet river that tears me in two, the river filled with the blood I have spilled. The river may not be real, but at some point, reality and imagination merge together, so あなた can no longer discern them from one another. At some point, it just won't matter anymore," Taylor whispered, resting her forehead against the spotted mirror that hung in her room.

How strange that...
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posted by dancing_banana
I see everything very clear and I can sense things others cant. My family sees at a great gift sent to me from the senses spirit while I see it as a curse.

For centuries we lived 次 to earth closer to it then the moon living in peace with the humans until they saw us as a threat and started a war against us, at first we fought back but the humans refused to give up their battle. Our kind used to be very peaceful and most of us retreated to Jupiter. But not everyone, a little less then half of our ancestors stayed including my great great grandfather he stayed because he saw it as a right....
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posted by Bella_Swan3
She reached out and made contact with a brick wall.

Careful not to draw attention to herself, she scaled the building and hurled herself over the lip.

Without pausing, she ran across the rooftops, leaping the small gap between them. The pain was worsening によって the minute.

She froze, hearing two voices coming from the alley below. She crouched low, peering over the edge, her heightened senses zeroing in on the conversation.

She calculated their positions, and leaped down, her figure a blur. She landed, pinning her first victim down. She clapped her hand over his mouth, stifling his scream. With...
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Skiro
As I walked in I noticed everyone knew someone. I also noticed everyone was wearing uniforms-blue または white shirts and kaky pants. I stood out much もっと見る than I wanted to. Though I wanted people to see me, and now a lot did, so I smiled and looked for a place to sit. I saw a group of girls, a group of hot guys,a lot of black-wearing people,and some others that I didn't care to know.
Then there was a 表, テーブル that was mostly empty except for one very cute boy. as I walked toward him I saw もっと見る of his features: he was pale-I wondered why-,skinny and muscular-did he play a sport?-,and light blond...
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Chapter Nineteen

Seeing Sean Connors there with a bottle of wine inside the bag he’s carrying, Jamie was about to closed the door and headed up the stairs to sleep but she didn’t. Instead of doing that, Jamie stared at Sean’s eyes and with a questionable tone in her voice and a thin line on her face that resembled her smile, she asked him, “Sean, what are あなた doing here?”

Holding the heavy canvas bag in his hand and holding it up to the brunette woman while saying to her, “Hi, Jamie and well, I went over to the liquor store on the way ホーム to get myself a six-pack of ビール because...
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posted by Ninano1998
Fire, every were ,no escape,so many dead, another
nightmare...
"Liana,Liana wake up!" I opened my eyes ,and groaned. Mami stood over me. "Come on sleep slough" she 発言しました "or あなた will be late for P.C.S" P.C.S is my school . It stands for power control school. I sighed and got up. Still sleepy, I brushed my teeth and got dressed. I grabbed a バナナ and ran out the door.Outside sat Hikaru." What took あなた so long?" he asked." Sleep.""Ha ha ha!" he laughed. Hikaru is my best friend. He has beautiful green hair with two long stripes of yellow and has big brown eyes that always sparkle.Nothing like my...
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After Patrick left, I had a restless night. I couldn’t sleep feeling that I’m a prisoner in those four walls in my room. I couldn’t sit quietly all night, nor slept for a brief moment. After all, Patrick’s visit was quite unexpected, and I wasn’t ready to see him that day. Also what was weird about his visit, that during all these two weeks he didn’t pay, not even a brief visit, to Robert’s house.
Wandering around my room with my pajama on, didn’t help me to sleep, nor comforted my restless mind. As I didn’t see him during these two weeks, I thought that those feelings I...
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posted by Ms_Montana
Spotlight

1. Cold pizza

It was a cold and rainy 日 in November. Some people called this rain even snow, but not thus Helena. It was not the type Person all that varnished.
While she rushed によって the crowded U platform, it rummaged about him of her pocket for her mobile phone. She tried to type in the scrum the number of her mother, however, without success.
Helena rolled irritated with her eyes. Their mother had 発言しました her at noon she must fetch her small sister Allison. And here only so she stood.
On the left from her a hard occupied looking man called up his mobile phone and before her there stood...
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posted by JazzLover101
Nicholas suddenly slid down on one knee and asked me at age 13 will あなた marry me even with our age and mother and father would be against it I 発言しました yes. I Elizabeth {or Lizzie for short} Catherine Cromwell will soon be Lizzie Catherine Tucker in a few short months/ There was so much to do so much to plan in fact I will make a 一覧 of what I already know
Marriage List:
日付 __
time __
place __
食 __
dj __
cake testing __
bridal シャワー __
center pieces __
bouquets __
dress shopping __
shoe shopping __
makeup shopping __
posted by BeSafe
Is it possible to fall in 愛 with someone you’ve never met
Your only knowledge stemming from information you’ve seen または read
Before I knew of his existence I would have stated no
Yet the first time I saw him my ハート, 心 begged to never let go
It isn’t rational
または logical
Though 愛 rarely is
I can’t make my ハート, 心 stop wishing that I held his
And I know it's stupid and silly to believe
In some kind of fairy tale
The perfect prince for me
But every time I see that smile
I can’t help but feel
That one 日 we could share
A 愛 that is real
posted by BellaSwan636
Serena

Ashleigh was a little three 年 old, and I could see she'd be really pretty when she was older.

I wasn't sure how how, but becoming a mother just let me see clearly. About so many things. What was important and what wasn't worth it.

**************************************************

I'd picked her up from the daycare and took her to the playground, where we were supposed to meet Jamie, the little girl who was Ashleigh's best friend, and her mother, Jenna. Jenna was a single mother, like myself, but two years older. We'd become best フレンズ as our children had.

It was Friday, and Jamie...
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posted by ihavOTD
I breathed in and out slowly. This was horrid. Running. I spat at the word. I despised running.

Joseph jogged up to me. "You okay Kristen?"
"Yeah, just give me a minute."
"Hah! あなた always end up like this. Maybe あなた should quit track?"
"You know I can't! If I do, then I have to do Trigonometry. Ugh. That's worse."
"Right..."
I stood up and we walked in silence. His lithe step did not match mine. I had a clumsy, trip over step. I needed somebody to teach me how to walk right.
"Oof." I had tripped, and landed on my side. How? I have no idea. Normal people land on their face または back. Not me!

Please e-mail me または comment. Tell me if あなた like this segment または not, if I get enought votes, I will continue my writing.
i was a normal 18 年 old colledge student until that night that horid night the night that all saftyein my life died it was a cold winters night and me and my friend trent were going to stay the night at the most haunted hospital in the world ( もっと見る like most haunted place of death and despair)waverly hlls sanitoryoum. "come on tristen were going to be laughing stocks of the city if we dont go" "trent." i 発言しました " i dont think we should go" " are u chicening out." he 発言しました " no" i snapped " but its not right" i argued to him "its these millions of death beads and u have famly that died there and so do i" " he looked mad at me mentioning his uncle who died there but i had to make him stop. "no" he 発言しました " we are going." to hell i thought if only i new
posted by twilight0girl
this 月 is going to be terrible.
i live in barrow alaska.this is thier 月 of complete,totall darkness.also,this is when the ヴァンパイア come out to feed on the helpless men,women,and children.but instead of shaking in pure fear,i'll go out and see how they act.but i'm also going out because my two brothers,isaac and marcus,are ヴァンパイア too.

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4 days later

i've never walked around outside during this time of month.i can hear the screaming coming from every direction.i havent seen any va,pires nor my two brothers.when i started to walke away...
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The snow is falling on this cold blistery afternoon.
    Just up ahead, in the clearing I could see a young woman gloriously and delicately skating. Skating, as if she had skated her entire life.
Suddenly, I began remembering an adventure that seemed so many moons ago.
Beyond the horizon I could see myself walking briskly toward the solid, cold ice that kept me アナと雪の女王 in silence.
I could hear the ice crackling, like ポップコーン being popped, beneath my shaking feet.
As I adventured onto to the ice, I felt a cold chill creep up my back that seemingly felt like a warning sign to...
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