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posted by Kimi4312
Chapter Four:Immortality

The 次 day, Kimberly came to her old house she once lived, she walked around and she look at all the rooms and she saw her old bedroom is now her twin daughter's room now, she sees a picture of her daughters and she went to her parents bedroom and sees pictures of her and her sister Alice as children, Kimberly felt so guilty of not telling them she was alive and she cries, Jacob notice she look so much like she used to be when they were younger expect her hair is now short and curly, he sees her sorrow behind her eyes and see a blood tear drop on the floor, he walked through the ウォール in where she is at, she cries harder and もっと見る harder, he walked closer to her, she sense he is near her "I know you're there Jake" she said
and she cries, he sit beside and she knows since she is dead and he is dead she will able to touch him and feel him, she hugs him tight and he held her in his arms "I'am so sorry Jake" she 発言しました while crying on his shoulder "I forgive あなた Kim" he 発言しました and he holds her tighter, "I 愛 you" she whispers while still crying "I 愛 あなた too" he 発言しました and he stare at her eyes and begins キス her, she begins キス him back, meanwhile Hayley stays with her friend's house where her friend Maddie lives, Maddie has long blonde hair and icey blue eyes and lighter skin, Hayley sees Maddie is really afraid of her own mother Christine, Hayley sat on Maddie's ベッド 次 to her "what's wrong?" Hayley asked Maddie, Maddie stare at Hayley and cries and 表示する her a burse on her shoulder "my mom did this to me" she 発言しました while crying, Hayley hugged Maddie, Maddie cries on her shoulder, "I'll call the cops" Hayley 発言しました Maddie held Hayley tighter and shed tears Hayley knew she needs to get her friend out of there, Kimberly sleeps in the attic with Jacob, Jacob lays beside Kimberly and touches her shoulder with his finger tips and goes down to her hand and holds it tight and he holds her closer and kisses her shoulder before going to sleep

end of chapter four
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posted by Thalia_huntress
thanks dancing_banana for your idea. and if あなた have any ideas send me a message plzz tell me what あなた think.


There were two other women with him the first one looked like Charlie and Marcus the other was Annabel. Charllie was closer then i tought he 発言しました from right behind me "yes that's our mother our father got killed in jail when he saw her he killed the man." i can see where he got his looks. we kept walking. a lady saw us she welcomed us in to her house she braided my hair with pale blue ribbon running through it. she gave me a dress that was pale blue like the ribbon. it had white roses...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
Taylor sat with her back against the wall, her arms wrapped around her knees, as she relived memories of pain.

The broken glass that littered the floor served as a reminder. Everywhere she looked, she saw a memory, the earliest being when she was barely four.

Dying. Perhaps that is how it feels, filled with the thoughts and reminiscence of the life あなた have lived, and in some cases, wished あなた hadn't.

The slight nine 年 old sat on the riverbank. There was a boy, about as old as she was sitting 次 to her.

"He did it again, didn't he?" the boy asked softly, gently touching a bruise on the...
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posted by Thalia_huntress
"catch me if あなた can!" my little sister yells running in the back yard.i go after her. she suddenly stops. "Jaz!Jaz! come here!" she calls. "yes Abbie?" i fallow her eyes. smoke was riseing from the house. oh-no i thought. i grab my cell phone and dial 911. there here in twenty minutes. they've put out the fire. our parents are dead. i sit on one of the chairs in our back yard. abigal climbs into my lap and hides her face in my hair then she crys. i must've looked like a statue becuase my breathing was shallow. "sweeties are あなた ok?" my rich aunt said. i blinked "yes were fine aunt julie" i...
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posted by jklilly56
I dont know what to call my book yet the タイトル is whats blocking my thoughts. yet but if あなた can give me some feed back that would be awsome!

“Hey are あなた guys almost here yet?” I asked my best friend Rose. “Oh yeah I see あなた now. Okay see あなた in a sec.” We were at the event of the 年 for us, the National Western Stock 表示する PBR finals. Rose was meeting me at one of the rest rants in the stock yards (some of the cheapest and best 食 is sold there.) Rose was bringing her boyfriend, Matt, with her and so she was late. “Rose over here!” I 発言しました waving her over. She came over to the...
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posted by HarryPLover
looked in the mirror and saw that ugly girl
That girl that constantly reminded of who I was,
Of what I was.
I was a murder
People say My parents death wasn’t my fault
I killed them
I felt guilty
I felt ashamed
I was the one to blame
My life flashed before my eyes
I saw the fire, the crash
I saw the flames erupt inside me
I felt tears burn my eyelids
I felt it as much they did
They burned, I burned
I didn't want to be left alone
I never wanted them to leave
Though I was taken from them
They were also taken from me
Though they're gone,
We both pay the price
Death
And Scars.
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The rest of the night i didn't sleep. When it was time to wake up jose found the package dad sent. His was like mine but he had a skull ring and a skull and crossed BONES(ボーンズ)-骨は語る- necklace. He loved it i still disapproved of it. And suprise suprise Brandon had the same one. I stopped talking to near everyone until i can understand what was happening. Tyler tried to get me to talk but i couldn't till today. "Babe please say something i want to hear your voice." he pleaded. "Don't worry Tyler it's better this way." Maybel said. That was it i hated her もっと見る then ever. "Maybel...
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That night I locked my windows it seems it only really brings me trouble. But again I couldn’t sleep. “Knock, knock” Dawn 発言しました coming in her voice was gentle. “Hey, you’re up late” I 発言しました getting out of bed. “Yeah, what did Ethan do?” she said, Dawn could read your anger. “Nothing, there was just a misunderstanding, that’s all” I said. “Really?” she said. “Well we kissed” I 発言しました now sitting on my bed. She followed and sat down 次 to me. “Wow, Why?” she asked, “Why would あなた ask me why?” I asked. “Because あなた have always 発言しました that あなた would never go...
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posted by XhuddyobsessedX
I looked out the window at the man I wanted to be with. He doesn't know my name または that I watch him leave for work everyday. He doesn't even know I live 次 door to him. But, one 日 that will change.
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The 次 日 I brought myself to go meet the man I had watched from my window for so many years. I wanted to know evetything about him. And most of all, I wanted him to know everything about me. From the 秒 I saw him I knew we were ment to be.

I went up to his door and knocked on it. It opened. He looked at me with curiosity.

"Can I help you?"

"Um..yes...
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