f I had to identify the most important step in 書く an essay, I would probably say it was the organization. Coming up with a thesis is a big part of essay writing, but it doesn’t mean anything if あなた do not have the proper support for it. That is where organization comes into play. If あなた can put your thoughts in the right order, あなた can get people to feel a certain way as they read your work. It’s like taking them on a journey through your mind.
Here are some tips to help あなた effectively organize your essays in the future.
The Pyramid Method
This is my お気に入り way to write essays, and I feel it is the most effective. あなた start によって barely introducing what あなた are going to talk about, and then あなた build a pyramid of support from there. In the conclusion, あなた make your big, powerful assertion that makes people go “Wait, what just happened? I just got 雌犬 slapped によって brilliance!” This method is great for persuasive essays, but I use it for everything. It just makes sense.
The Inverted Pyramid Method
This is the exact opposite of the method above, where あなた start with a big idea and then support it afterward. I don’t like this because it lacks progression. It doesn’t keep people hooked. It may work well for a web 記事 または a news story, but not a college essay. Nevertheless, some professors 愛 this method, so あなた just have to test it out and see what they think.
The サンドイッチ Method
In this method, あなた start with something big, provide support, and end with something equally big. Basically あなた have a thesis at the beginning that poses a 質問 または a problem, and then あなた have a conclusion that 回答 it. I have used this method a few times, and it has worked well. I would recommend using it at least once または two.
General Tips for Essay Organization
In the case of a compare and contrast essay, don’t do one paragraph for one story and then another paragraph for the other story. Try to mix the two together and compare them point によって point. Each point would be an 記事 all its own.
Try to talk about events in chronological order so your readers can follow them. If あなた jump all through a book または resource, あなた may lose track of your focus and fluidity.
Don’t be afraid to use small paragraphs if あなた have different topics in each of them. It is better to do that than to have a long paragraph that no one wants to read through.
If あなた follow my tips above for your 次 essay in college, あなた should be able to wow the professor and get your point across at the same time. Good luck!
Here are some tips to help あなた effectively organize your essays in the future.
The Pyramid Method
This is my お気に入り way to write essays, and I feel it is the most effective. あなた start によって barely introducing what あなた are going to talk about, and then あなた build a pyramid of support from there. In the conclusion, あなた make your big, powerful assertion that makes people go “Wait, what just happened? I just got 雌犬 slapped によって brilliance!” This method is great for persuasive essays, but I use it for everything. It just makes sense.
The Inverted Pyramid Method
This is the exact opposite of the method above, where あなた start with a big idea and then support it afterward. I don’t like this because it lacks progression. It doesn’t keep people hooked. It may work well for a web 記事 または a news story, but not a college essay. Nevertheless, some professors 愛 this method, so あなた just have to test it out and see what they think.
The サンドイッチ Method
In this method, あなた start with something big, provide support, and end with something equally big. Basically あなた have a thesis at the beginning that poses a 質問 または a problem, and then あなた have a conclusion that 回答 it. I have used this method a few times, and it has worked well. I would recommend using it at least once または two.
General Tips for Essay Organization
In the case of a compare and contrast essay, don’t do one paragraph for one story and then another paragraph for the other story. Try to mix the two together and compare them point によって point. Each point would be an 記事 all its own.
Try to talk about events in chronological order so your readers can follow them. If あなた jump all through a book または resource, あなた may lose track of your focus and fluidity.
Don’t be afraid to use small paragraphs if あなた have different topics in each of them. It is better to do that than to have a long paragraph that no one wants to read through.
If あなた follow my tips above for your 次 essay in college, あなた should be able to wow the professor and get your point across at the same time. Good luck!
She fell to the floor and wept, and the jar shook
The 日 ended on a cold note for the cold night
He had her ハート, 心 sealed in a jar, fragile and trapped
Until he had his moment and let go
With little strength, she had saved it and ran
She had ran until the darkness was unbearable,
As she wept, the jar shivered in her arms
Her dark blue eyes were drenched
And her mind was a dark, narrow corridor.
Her heat prolonged in entrapment,
Torturing her unknowingly with each eternity-like moment.
Finally, she ceased her overwhelming emotions,
Now silent and pondering
Distracted, the jar fell, and shattered at her feet
He’s gone. He’s gone! The words danced in her mind.
Her ハート, 心 was free, and she was free
She got to her feet, no longer stumbling
And the shattered jar crunched under her feet
There was no もっと見る pain.
~~~~~~~~
...Yeah, I know it kinda sucks. Like I said, first attempt. :/
The 日 ended on a cold note for the cold night
He had her ハート, 心 sealed in a jar, fragile and trapped
Until he had his moment and let go
With little strength, she had saved it and ran
She had ran until the darkness was unbearable,
As she wept, the jar shivered in her arms
Her dark blue eyes were drenched
And her mind was a dark, narrow corridor.
Her heat prolonged in entrapment,
Torturing her unknowingly with each eternity-like moment.
Finally, she ceased her overwhelming emotions,
Now silent and pondering
Distracted, the jar fell, and shattered at her feet
He’s gone. He’s gone! The words danced in her mind.
Her ハート, 心 was free, and she was free
She got to her feet, no longer stumbling
And the shattered jar crunched under her feet
There was no もっと見る pain.
~~~~~~~~
...Yeah, I know it kinda sucks. Like I said, first attempt. :/
Ok, so I just want to write a little summary to my story that I want to write called A Place of Our Own I'm basically 書く this to see if people will like it, and if they do, I'll write more. :)
So anyways, it's about a Hollie, 17 年 old girl who has an alcoholic mother and a step father who abuses her as well as her 12 年 old sister, Amy. Hollie's been in a 3 年 on/off relationship with a heroin addicted boyfriend, Danny. When a close call puts Danny in the hospital, he promises Hollie that he'll quit and they'll find a better life. This causes Hollie to realize that she needs to leave ホーム and find help herself.
So yeah, if あなた liked this, please コメント and there WILL be more. Thanks. :)
So anyways, it's about a Hollie, 17 年 old girl who has an alcoholic mother and a step father who abuses her as well as her 12 年 old sister, Amy. Hollie's been in a 3 年 on/off relationship with a heroin addicted boyfriend, Danny. When a close call puts Danny in the hospital, he promises Hollie that he'll quit and they'll find a better life. This causes Hollie to realize that she needs to leave ホーム and find help herself.
So yeah, if あなた liked this, please コメント and there WILL be more. Thanks. :)
~ Chapter 1: Dreams
Love. Unconditional and pure 愛 was there, found in their hearts. Feelings, pure and strong lived from 日 to day.
But the days were cold. Cold wind froze their dreams.
A child was born.
Dreams, spreading its roots, now slowly fade.
But still live and last in the hearts of the dreamers.
A child wasn't a part of a dream, though.
It wasn't. But 愛 was still there, although destroyed によって many issues, it started fading slowly like a smothered flame.
Mother's eyes was full of hope and ハート, 心 full of love, so pure, so gentle.
She knew. Life won't be ミルク and honey, though she must be strong.
Looking at her baby girl, happy and sad in the same time, so many thoughts were flying through her head.
So many questions, perhaps a small dose of regret.
She felt sadness inside.
愛 was still there, that pure 愛 that kept them alive, though these dreams they both had were somehow far and unreal.
A flame of 愛 was still burning...
Love. Unconditional and pure 愛 was there, found in their hearts. Feelings, pure and strong lived from 日 to day.
But the days were cold. Cold wind froze their dreams.
A child was born.
Dreams, spreading its roots, now slowly fade.
But still live and last in the hearts of the dreamers.
A child wasn't a part of a dream, though.
It wasn't. But 愛 was still there, although destroyed によって many issues, it started fading slowly like a smothered flame.
Mother's eyes was full of hope and ハート, 心 full of love, so pure, so gentle.
She knew. Life won't be ミルク and honey, though she must be strong.
Looking at her baby girl, happy and sad in the same time, so many thoughts were flying through her head.
So many questions, perhaps a small dose of regret.
She felt sadness inside.
愛 was still there, that pure 愛 that kept them alive, though these dreams they both had were somehow far and unreal.
A flame of 愛 was still burning...
Texas Rancho Viejo 1942
Bonnie's POV
I walked quickly down the dusty dirt road, I kicked and scrapped pebbels, It was hot and dry today, another great thing when your isolated! *CRASH* I gasped, I slowed to a stop and carfully and slowwly turned around. Behind me stood a man. He had wild brown hair and blue piercing eyes, He held a gun and a charcol covered teddy bear. He smiled and inchined twords me. "Whoa pardner, who are you?" I asked in my thick texian accent. "I am a friend" He 発言しました kindly. I suspiciously eyed him up and down. I reached into my back pocket and gripped my fingers around a gun I found. "Dont be afraid i'll make it all better" He moved closer to me, I panicked.Is this the phantom murder? I thought. I pulled out my gun and aimed it at him. "I dont think あなた will"
I 発言しました sweetly, then I triggered it and shot him, he fell to the ground stunned. I smiled. When your isolated in texas あなた cant trust anyone. and i mean ANYONE.
Bonnie's POV
I walked quickly down the dusty dirt road, I kicked and scrapped pebbels, It was hot and dry today, another great thing when your isolated! *CRASH* I gasped, I slowed to a stop and carfully and slowwly turned around. Behind me stood a man. He had wild brown hair and blue piercing eyes, He held a gun and a charcol covered teddy bear. He smiled and inchined twords me. "Whoa pardner, who are you?" I asked in my thick texian accent. "I am a friend" He 発言しました kindly. I suspiciously eyed him up and down. I reached into my back pocket and gripped my fingers around a gun I found. "Dont be afraid i'll make it all better" He moved closer to me, I panicked.Is this the phantom murder? I thought. I pulled out my gun and aimed it at him. "I dont think あなた will"
I 発言しました sweetly, then I triggered it and shot him, he fell to the ground stunned. I smiled. When your isolated in texas あなた cant trust anyone. and i mean ANYONE.