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posted by Skitty_Love
"Mmm this お茶, 紅茶 is delicious. Many thanks Soul." Professor Rhinestone 発言しました charmingly. I quickly nodded. "Yes! Will we be starting training soon?" He looked up at me, is fuchsia colored bangs covering his shinning eyes. "Very well. We need to あなた to be 上, ページのトップへ Taoloid, after all." He said, I showed him a little smile. "Yes!"

"Hyaaaaaaa!" I balanced the long bamboo pole on the tip of my index finger. "Aye, this is not gymnastics Soul, this is real. This is battle. Come at me." He held his pole in front of him in a dynamic position. "Uh...I.." His leery glare caught me. "Yes.. Hyaaaaaaaaaa!" I sprinted toward him and did a back flip and landed on his shoulders and gutted him with the bamboo stick. I ended it with a front flip and a bow. "I hope I did not injure あなた too bad, professor.." I 発言しました timidly. He grunted and managed to return to standing up. "No, I-I'm fine... Your doing great." I grinned, "Oh professor!" I walked up and grabbed my pole. "Anything else we should review? We need to practice for the Taoloid Match Off after all!" Professor Rhinestone took out a dusty old book. What was it for? "Professor?" He stared intimately at it like it was his enemy. "Here. You'll have to practice step 65 and 68.." He held it out for me to grab. I quickly took it and opened up to the bookmarked pages. "Thai..Jit..Su?" If I wasn't mistaken, Thai came from Thailand, which is a country in the content Asia. "Hmm.. Is this a form of fighting?" I looked back where Professor Rhinestone was, he vanished. Must've left me to study.."

"Professor! I nailed it! I accomplished every battle move!" I jumped up and down eagerly. His ruby red eyes stared into my エメラルド one's. "Great job, Soul. Your very achieving lately. I'm proud." I let out an unplanned flattered giggle. "Th-thank you, and, its all thanks to you!" My cheeks glowed with light ピンク blush. "Oh! I have to make dinner! Oh my!" I started to the キッチン but Professor grabbed my hand. My イチゴ blonde hair with purple tips smacked my face suddenly. "Not necessary. I'll make it. あなた go sit on the sofa." The blush continued. "I... Are あなた sure?" He nodded. "Chowder または lasagna?" I smiled. "Lasagna!"
Oh, I admired Professor so.. Hes so wise and kind. Like I want him to be all mine, I want him to own me as his own and no one else's. And if someone shall separate us, well, lets just say I've been programmed to kill.
Jake Gartner here. For some reason, something kept those mutant serpents away from us. Chase Johnson, my friend, is over here with me at the としょうかん, ライブラリ of Death. Yeah. Bad name for a library, if あなた ask me. I would never have come here in the first place, had no one ever bothered me with a ransom note about my mother dying if I didn't go on this life-or-death journey. (Sorry, I have to speed the story up now. Chase says I'm getting all the attention.) So, what we found out at the library. Not much. All we found out was that mutant serpents tend to be very huge, have sharp teeth, and stay away...
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posted by Insight357
    “Kayden!” Sebastian-my band’s manager-had a look of dismay on his simple features. I couldn’t hear him, but I could read his lips. Anyone who knew me knew to get my attention before they spoke.
    “What?” I asked. Though I’d been deaf since I was five I knew how to speak as well as anyone with full hearing.    
    “You still haven’t made your set list,” he stated, his face screwed up into a frown. “The first performance is tomorrow night.”
    “I’ll have it finished...
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posted by hgfan5602
My name is Matt Downley, and I am a サッカー player. I just moved here to New York, and I was just going to try out for the Weston Middle サッカー team, when believe it または not, the principal came rushing down the halls and 発言しました that I couldn't play because I am disabled. WHAT THE HECK!!! Okay, I was like, "So here's the deal. I can't play. I can't do anything. What the freak am I supposed to do at this stupid school!!!" But, of course, I didn't have the guts to say that out loud to the principal, so I just muttered and said, "Okay." Lately, I feel like people have been stalking me when I came back from school. Everyday when I go to bed, I feel like people are looming in the shadows above me. I didn't know now, but tonight would be a night of extreme danger.
posted by alicia386
What scandalous secrets can adults keep from their parents? I need ideas for a book I am currently writing. It is about how some secrets adults keep from us can actually save our lives. I hope to give あなた a sneak プレビュー of my book which is called The Deadly Truth. Can't wait for your opinions!

To know もっと見る about my book please post your 質問 on my wall. I will try my best to reply as fast and as soon as I can. If I don't then just know I did read them.

あなた can believe the first chapter of my book will be 投稿されました either this week または 次 Friday.
posted by morganaforever
Full of excitement, Nicole and Ellie arrived at the fairground. They walked through the towering gates, expecting laughter and chatter – but everything remained quiet. No music, no noise, nothing! The place was deserted. A strong gust of wind blew, making them shiver. As they walked on, it began to get darker. Gradually, the sky turned from a bright blue to black. One によって one the lights of the fairground flickered on, illuminating the black sky. As they passed によって The Haunted Mine, it seemed to be inviting them to have a go. A man clad completely in black was waiting beside the entrance.

“Can...
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It probably took あなた a while to learn the 26 letters of the alphabet back when あなた started school. But actually, あなた should count yourself lucky. Some languages use alphabets with many もっと見る letters than that. Russian, for example, has 33 letters, and the Khmer language of Cambodia has over 70. And in China and Japan, where they write with signs called 'characters', there are hundreds, even thousands of different shapes to remember. Japanese primary school children are expected to learn about a thousand characters before they can go on to high school!
posted by candyvtoby511
Tess’s parents were shot down right before her eyes, coming out through the side door of a theatre. She couldn’t understand why he had killed them and not her. The murderer was young, maybe even the same age as herself. He was disguised as an older man, but she could still tell he was quite young, 14 または so.
Tess is walking late at night with her dog alone, thinking about her parent’s mysterious murderer; why didn’t he kill her as well? What motive did he have to kill them? She ponders over the words her mother spoke in her dying breath; what did she mean that I shouldn’t trust him?...
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 Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture によって ゴールド Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)
Emmanuel Cuts The Ribbon to Open Fashion Week Gibraltar - (Picture by Gold Productions Studios (Gibraltar) www.goldps.com)
Emmanuel Ray, Britain’s Fashion アイコン of The 年 2011 (Fashions Finest Awards), successfully opened Fashion Week Gibraltar on 18 April 2012 at the Casemates Gallery in Gibraltar.
London – In front of an excited crowd Emmanuel Raygave a short speech thanking everyone who came to the opening, his publicist David J Mann, director ofHighmore PR, and Fashion Week Gibraltar’s organiser and fashion designer Reene Weston. He then proceeded to cut the red ribbon allowing everyone to start their Fashion Week experience.
Emmanuel had this to say about the opening,
“What an amazing experience it was....
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posted by anbonie
“Nice performance!”
“Thank you, butler!”
Servant smile to Pieter and opens the door of red Ferrari. While driving no one used to speak, until Pieter say something to his butler and bodyguard:
“Did あなた hear when my voice trembled? I think that was 14th song.”
“No, Sir…”
“When my father isn’t near, please call me Pieter”
“Yes, Si… I mean Pieter”
They arrived to McChink’s mansion. Servant turned engine off and ran on other site of car to open Pieter’s door, but he was too late. “I’m sorry, Sir…” 発言しました butler. Pieter sent him angry look: “I can open the door!...
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If i get enough コメント i will extend it.

It was damp, smelled of earth and pine, I heard leaves rustle, twigs snap as 動物 scurried in the 木, ツリー tops. I wasn't supposed to be here, this wasn't my room, my bed. I was supposed to me in によって cottage on eagle lake. I was supposed to be asleep, 上, ページのトップへ bunk with my younger brother Elliot on the bottom. I was supposed to be smelling fabric softener and hear the soft snore from little Elli, feel the heat of my cat sleeping on my chest. I opened my eyes and I could see the sky, black with soft twinkle of a million 星, つ星 and the florescent glow of the moon....
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posted by precious211
“Before we leave I must warn you. We are now entering alien territory, so be careful and considerate to you’re new surroundings. One stupid mistake can get you, and everyone around あなた killed.”

The safety instructor’s voice boomed across the large, air conditioned spaceship. It sounded oddly cheerful for someone who had just told them that they could all die.
Everyone tried to see where her line of vision was pointing towards. It was aimed toward the windows.
Kendra glanced through them and, and gulped. They were about four thousand feet above sea level, and the 宇宙 craft had just...
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Using correct grammar and sentence structure is vital if あなた want to convey your thoughts accurately. あなた also want your 書く to hold the reader's attention. Nothing is もっと見る annoying than 読書 a manuscript littered with grammatical errors. The error of 書く sentence fragments is a common error. Sentence fragments are incomplete sentences that don't express a complete thought.

tips:
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Have a subject for every verb. The subject is the actor in the sentence. The verb is the action taken in a sentence.

2


Make sure all of your dependent clauses have a completing thought. An independent...
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posted by cutiegirl01
(Please tell me your opinion on my story and be truthful please!)

    “Erik get down here now!” My father yelled.
    “I’m coming, I’m coming!” I hurried down the stairs. I learned in the last 17 years I’ve been alive, that if my dad calls me I need to be down fast…or else…
    I got down the stairs, and went into the living room where he always sat on his days off. “Yes, dad? What can I get you?”
    My mother smiled up at me from her book, “You are such a good son, Erik-“
    My...
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posted by DarkGirl23
Five years later, sixteen, and the experience of it still torments me.

I suffer sleepless nights in the dark, waking up from the strangest nightmares known to man.
The site of the body still clings to me like the stench of misery. It makes me wonder, all through this time, what actually keeps the average human going?

All we are is dead in the end anyways.
I mean, It’s not exactly like people get the opportunity to really DO something with their lives anymore. Like, for example, something heroic: slaying a dragon, assassinating the one who desires to kill and rule with tyranny, または maybe be the...
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posted by NormalcyIsDead
Boom boom clap
Bounce your head, snap
To the classic, to the rap


Step ball change
Basic with a buck
Pleay, tour jete
Bounce your head to the rock


One two three,
Two two three,
Count along with your head
Mosh with the beat


Hop shuffle hop back
Twirl your arms, bend your back
Do the thingamajiggie
Wear out your taps

Breathe it in, breathe it out
Reach for the sky, dance on the ground
Flitter here, gallop there
Lose yourself anywhere

Flow with the music
Feel it in your veins
As あなた bounce your head, snap
Boom boom clap
posted by DxCFan123
Third Person POV
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Sadao walked up to God and asked him if he was eligible to be in Heaven. God just simply nodded his head. Sadao walked through the large golden gates and found himself walking through his town he lived in when he was alive. He found his way to his house, and swung open the door. Everything was how it was before. He started crying, remembering the memories he had with Kat here. He heard crying coming from his room, so he opened the door and saw a blonde girl curled up in the corner of his room, sobbing.

"K-K-Kat?" he managed to stutter out. The blonde looked...
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posted by DxCFan123
MONTH 12, DECEMBER 28, THE 日 SADAO IS TO DIE
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I ran away before Sadao woke up, taking my scythe with me. I was to be away from him all day, anyways. I walked around the town, looking for something to do until 1:10.

I really don't understand why I had to spy on him, he dies either way.

I just jumped around from rooftop to rooftop, watching ランダム people on the street. I ended up doing this until noon, which is when I decided to follow Sadao. He did things that a regular person would do, went to the bank, bought some groceries, went out to eat, etcetera, etcetera, etcetera....
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posted by dragonwriter
As light fades the brightest of souls can even be turned to do the darkest of things. As time time pushes フォワード, 前進, 楽しみにして the mind and body of an individual changes for either good または bad. the decisions they make and the things they do will stick with them forever. I was told this many years 前 によって a wise old man that fortold my future. He 発言しました "the one with the dragon soul is not alone in the world he knows." After being told this it left me nothing but confused but i had a feeling that it wouldn't be the last time i heard of it.
posted by StarsGoBlue
God's ロスト Child 
Chapter 2: An Indefinite Prisoner Of War 

"Unbelievable! Un-fucking-believable."
A nerdy blonde cussed as he stormed  through the upper deck of Sovereign, his hands raised above his head in protest. 
"Oh, let's put Baird in charge of the rookie! Since he's busy anyway. Let's just give him もっと見る shit to do, that's easier on us!"
He continued to fume violently as Nicole followed a 安全, 安全です distance behind. The rest of Delta Squad had dispersed to their cabins to change into their night attire. Baird had been chosen to school the rookie, thanks to his big mouth.  After a bit of sighing...
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In this series of guides, I'll be 表示中 あなた the best techniques for 書く your story. These are tried-and-true techniques, and they work.
First up: characters. Every story has characters. We all know that. But what あなた may not realize is that some portions of a character need not be mentioned. Why spend three pages on your character's dimples if they have nothing to do with the plot? In order to keep your readers hooked, あなた have to yourself to things that are involved with the plot.
Before あなた decide on a plot, あなた should get to know each of your characters. After all, you're telling...
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