I thought I'd post this poem and try to get constructive feedback ;)
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every 分 with her is a 分 to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her 移動する and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions 移動する me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that あなた know me so well?
Sometimes it seems あなた can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, によって design.
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every 分 with her is a 分 to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her 移動する and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions 移動する me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that あなた know me so well?
Sometimes it seems あなた can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, によって design.
