Since I think this is もっと見る of an opinion article, that's what it will be. I don't even know why I picked ファン fiction in the first place.
Anyways, I know my first part was kinda suckish, so hopefully this one is better. Plus, I'll write this in past tense since present tense is too hard. Infact, however many parts there will be will be in past tense. I probably worded that incorrectly. Well, あなた know what I mean..right? Enjoy! :)
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Courtney said, "Where should we go?" m
Duncan said, "I'm suprised your first words weren't an insult." d
Courtney said, "I'm over whatever happened in TDWT."
Duncan said, "So あなた don't hate me または Gwen?" b
Courtney said, "Well, not anymore." Duncan smiled. They arrived at the submarines and got inside one.
After they closed the hatch, the submarine immeadiately started to fill with water. Courtney screamed, "Hey! What gives?" She looked at the water rising up to her ankles.
Duncan said, "What the?" The water was up to his knees.
Courtney said, "We've got to get out of here!" She rushes to open the hatch. "It won't budge!"
Duncan said, "Let me try." Courtney moves out the way so Duncan can open the hatch. The hatch barely moves. "Oh c'mon! This is just like 'Masters of Disasters' all over again."
Courtney said, "Well there must be a way out of here!"
"Right あなた are, Courtney." It was Star's voice.
"Are あなた doing this, Star", Courtney asked in a panicky voice. The water was already up to her waist.
"Maybe I am. Maybe I'm not."
"You better stop this right now, Star", Duncan 発言しました in a threatening voice.
"I'm not afraid of あなた anymore, Duncan. Plus, what can あなた do to me? Your locked in a submarine about to drown in the uprising water. Besides, there nothing I can do to make it stop."
Courtney said, "Well, あなた can't leave us in here to drown!"
"Unfornately, you're right again Courtney. I can't leave あなた both in there. But, I can get one of あなた out of there."
The water was up to his chest. Duncan said, "What do あなた mean?"
"Well, あなた have to choose one person to stay and die. While the other person escapes with their life."
Courtney said, "Are あなた serious?"
"As a ハート, 心 attack. Now choose, and I'd hurry. The water is getting higher and higher によって the minute."
Duncan said, "I'll stay, あなた go Courtney."
Courtney said, "What? あなた choose me? I thought for sure-"
Duncan cut her off. "Look, I have no time to explain why I choose you. Just go before the water goes above your head." He realized that the water was up to Courtney's chin. "Star, I choose Courtney." Just then, they heard the hatch loosen.
Courtney grabbed it an opened the hatch. Before she got out completely, she said, "Thanks Duncan."
"No problem, Princess." Courtney closed the hatch and swam for the surface.
Once on shore, Courtney heard Star's voice say, "Return to the mess hall, Courtney." Courtney ran to it.
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I hope あなた liked this one. Sorry if it's a little short. I'm 書く this at 2:15 in the morning and my brain isn't really functioning.
So, this is how everthing is going to go. Two people about to die and only one person is chosen to stay alive. Yeah, I'm pretty messed up in the head.
Anyways, please leave あなた 質問 and コメント below.
Also, あなた might be wondering why I put those letters at the beginning of the story. Well, I wrote that first part on my cell phone and when I typed it on the computer, the words went on another line. So I put those letters there to keep it all on the same line. There. One 質問 answered.
So, like I 発言しました before, leave your other 質問 and コメント below.
Anyways, I know my first part was kinda suckish, so hopefully this one is better. Plus, I'll write this in past tense since present tense is too hard. Infact, however many parts there will be will be in past tense. I probably worded that incorrectly. Well, あなた know what I mean..right? Enjoy! :)
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Courtney said, "Where should we go?" m
Duncan said, "I'm suprised your first words weren't an insult." d
Courtney said, "I'm over whatever happened in TDWT."
Duncan said, "So あなた don't hate me または Gwen?" b
Courtney said, "Well, not anymore." Duncan smiled. They arrived at the submarines and got inside one.
After they closed the hatch, the submarine immeadiately started to fill with water. Courtney screamed, "Hey! What gives?" She looked at the water rising up to her ankles.
Duncan said, "What the?" The water was up to his knees.
Courtney said, "We've got to get out of here!" She rushes to open the hatch. "It won't budge!"
Duncan said, "Let me try." Courtney moves out the way so Duncan can open the hatch. The hatch barely moves. "Oh c'mon! This is just like 'Masters of Disasters' all over again."
Courtney said, "Well there must be a way out of here!"
"Right あなた are, Courtney." It was Star's voice.
"Are あなた doing this, Star", Courtney asked in a panicky voice. The water was already up to her waist.
"Maybe I am. Maybe I'm not."
"You better stop this right now, Star", Duncan 発言しました in a threatening voice.
"I'm not afraid of あなた anymore, Duncan. Plus, what can あなた do to me? Your locked in a submarine about to drown in the uprising water. Besides, there nothing I can do to make it stop."
Courtney said, "Well, あなた can't leave us in here to drown!"
"Unfornately, you're right again Courtney. I can't leave あなた both in there. But, I can get one of あなた out of there."
The water was up to his chest. Duncan said, "What do あなた mean?"
"Well, あなた have to choose one person to stay and die. While the other person escapes with their life."
Courtney said, "Are あなた serious?"
"As a ハート, 心 attack. Now choose, and I'd hurry. The water is getting higher and higher によって the minute."
Duncan said, "I'll stay, あなた go Courtney."
Courtney said, "What? あなた choose me? I thought for sure-"
Duncan cut her off. "Look, I have no time to explain why I choose you. Just go before the water goes above your head." He realized that the water was up to Courtney's chin. "Star, I choose Courtney." Just then, they heard the hatch loosen.
Courtney grabbed it an opened the hatch. Before she got out completely, she said, "Thanks Duncan."
"No problem, Princess." Courtney closed the hatch and swam for the surface.
Once on shore, Courtney heard Star's voice say, "Return to the mess hall, Courtney." Courtney ran to it.
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I hope あなた liked this one. Sorry if it's a little short. I'm 書く this at 2:15 in the morning and my brain isn't really functioning.
So, this is how everthing is going to go. Two people about to die and only one person is chosen to stay alive. Yeah, I'm pretty messed up in the head.
Anyways, please leave あなた 質問 and コメント below.
Also, あなた might be wondering why I put those letters at the beginning of the story. Well, I wrote that first part on my cell phone and when I typed it on the computer, the words went on another line. So I put those letters there to keep it all on the same line. There. One 質問 answered.
So, like I 発言しました before, leave your other 質問 and コメント below.
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Joss
my フレンズ on this website I will no longer be on here anymore on the count of people cyberbullying me I know you'll miss me but goodbye my フレンズ im going to miss あなた we've all had our good times but there are so many cyber-bullies please remeber me for my kindness my フレンズ goodbye forever xoxo
I also shall throw a cookie party/pizza party with my フレンズ before I leave now we shall celwbrate my フレンズ the people who I call out are imvited
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People not invited
Skyreacher
I also shall throw a cookie party/pizza party with my フレンズ before I leave now we shall celwbrate my フレンズ the people who I call out are imvited
Coolcutegirl
Strawberry0020
Starwarsfan7
Courtneyfan214
Poophead437ext
Jadeismaname
Lollipop97
And many more
People not invited
Skyreacher
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Anna on left vannessa on right
Name: Kamei Savina Cassia
Age:15
Stereo type:the emo
Her cloths: a red dress with a ruff in side n out
red gloves black n white socks
Hair style:long
Hair color: purple with green yellow n blue streaks
eye color: blue
lipstick: gray
pjs: red with skulls
accessory: a black skull earring
Nick names: darkness (only comes out during night)
Siblings: Lance (brother) France(lil sister) Trancy (big sister)
pets: a cat named blackie
friends: gwen n trent
enemies: mostly alejandro
Activity: drawing on walls to 表示する art
Fear: fighting off a piranha
Age:15
Stereo type:the emo
Her cloths: a red dress with a ruff in side n out
red gloves black n white socks
Hair style:long
Hair color: purple with green yellow n blue streaks
eye color: blue
lipstick: gray
pjs: red with skulls
accessory: a black skull earring
Nick names: darkness (only comes out during night)
Siblings: Lance (brother) France(lil sister) Trancy (big sister)
pets: a cat named blackie
friends: gwen n trent
enemies: mostly alejandro
Activity: drawing on walls to 表示する art
Fear: fighting off a piranha