For those that don’t know, “In Another World: Mob Suez” is an else-world non-cannon story that takes people’s characters and puts them into the real world. The main character of this story is Dave Hyatt, who a side-character in the regular stories I usually make. People’s origins are tweaked, and people live in a semi-civilian-based life.
I had plans for how this story would go through various phases, but I feel the most appropriate course of action would be to キャンセル the story.
There are a few reasons I think it’s best to simply end it. While I’ve enjoyed the world-building and creativity this brought around, the もっと見る I look at this story, the もっと見る it sounds like some cliché teenage アニメ plot, and あなた all know how I feel about anime.
The point of the story was that the members of the club would affect the story; its progression, its characters, everything. People could send in a プロフィール of their character, what role they wanted their character to be a part of, and what they wanted to have happen with that character.
To say the least, many of these characters were girls. I would blame everyone except me for this, but that’s not the case. I had no less than three female characters of my own that were potential love-interests for Dave, and two that were actively pursued. I will note that I planned to have one leave for a while, and one rejects him early in the story, but there were still two other potential 愛 interests aside from that, one that was owned によって me, and one owned によって Rawrmonster123, who has left the community.
It wasn’t just that there were too many love-interests, but that the majority of characters were girls. I would not be able to balance this.
This wasn’t the only issue as I found trying to please everyone’s initial requests (including love-lives) difficult. There were 未回答 plot-threads that were not going to go anywhere. It wasn’t a mess quite yet but it would become one. One particular plot-hole that bothered me was that an earthquake goes off and the police never appear about it. This was pretty stupid.
I quite enjoyed MANY things about this story, and I had a surprise about Rin and Ira (Virus) that was going to be revealed, but I simply don’t think the story can stand long enough for that.
Not to mention there is literally NO interaction from people when it comes to how the story will play out, and we all know why that is.
Those who were 読書 it have vanish save a very tiny amount. I simply don’t think this story is worth continuing, at least not right now. MAYBE in the future I’ll go back and fix it all but not right now.
Sorry to let down whoever might read this but them’s the breaks.
God Bless,
Eat Pie and Prosper
I had plans for how this story would go through various phases, but I feel the most appropriate course of action would be to キャンセル the story.
There are a few reasons I think it’s best to simply end it. While I’ve enjoyed the world-building and creativity this brought around, the もっと見る I look at this story, the もっと見る it sounds like some cliché teenage アニメ plot, and あなた all know how I feel about anime.
The point of the story was that the members of the club would affect the story; its progression, its characters, everything. People could send in a プロフィール of their character, what role they wanted their character to be a part of, and what they wanted to have happen with that character.
To say the least, many of these characters were girls. I would blame everyone except me for this, but that’s not the case. I had no less than three female characters of my own that were potential love-interests for Dave, and two that were actively pursued. I will note that I planned to have one leave for a while, and one rejects him early in the story, but there were still two other potential 愛 interests aside from that, one that was owned によって me, and one owned によって Rawrmonster123, who has left the community.
It wasn’t just that there were too many love-interests, but that the majority of characters were girls. I would not be able to balance this.
This wasn’t the only issue as I found trying to please everyone’s initial requests (including love-lives) difficult. There were 未回答 plot-threads that were not going to go anywhere. It wasn’t a mess quite yet but it would become one. One particular plot-hole that bothered me was that an earthquake goes off and the police never appear about it. This was pretty stupid.
I quite enjoyed MANY things about this story, and I had a surprise about Rin and Ira (Virus) that was going to be revealed, but I simply don’t think the story can stand long enough for that.
Not to mention there is literally NO interaction from people when it comes to how the story will play out, and we all know why that is.
Those who were 読書 it have vanish save a very tiny amount. I simply don’t think this story is worth continuing, at least not right now. MAYBE in the future I’ll go back and fix it all but not right now.
Sorry to let down whoever might read this but them’s the breaks.
God Bless,
Eat Pie and Prosper
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power または darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I ロスト my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. フレンズ that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for 読書 this intro, tell me if I should write this または not. I start 次 week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for 読書 this intro, tell me if I should write this または not. I start 次 week. 1/12/12)
Name: Natsumi
Age: 16 1/2
Gender: female
Family: Mom, Dad, younger brother
Powers: none
Backstory: Natsumi lives a normal life. Her mom is an actress, and her dad works at a hospital. Her parents aren't ホーム often. So she usually has to take care of her little bro.
They tend to argue alot....but that's what siblings do, right? She lives in a rural area, and her house is pretty big. In order to protect her brother, she's been specially trained in karate and Kung-Fu. But it's only used in emergencies. she's really shy, except around close friends. And isn't afraid to be aggressive.
Interesting information: she originally was made a "Regular Show" ファン chara. And she still is. But she is also a ファン chara in the Sonic world too. (but in regular show, she's 23) She was also named after a character in the
manga/anime series "Sgt. Frog"
Well, hope ya liked the article! ^^
Age: 16 1/2
Gender: female
Family: Mom, Dad, younger brother
Powers: none
Backstory: Natsumi lives a normal life. Her mom is an actress, and her dad works at a hospital. Her parents aren't ホーム often. So she usually has to take care of her little bro.
They tend to argue alot....but that's what siblings do, right? She lives in a rural area, and her house is pretty big. In order to protect her brother, she's been specially trained in karate and Kung-Fu. But it's only used in emergencies. she's really shy, except around close friends. And isn't afraid to be aggressive.
Interesting information: she originally was made a "Regular Show" ファン chara. And she still is. But she is also a ファン chara in the Sonic world too. (but in regular show, she's 23) She was also named after a character in the
manga/anime series "Sgt. Frog"
Well, hope ya liked the article! ^^
Midnight Stormcloud
Midnight:I cant believe we did this!
Platinum:Im just glad we get to do this together!
(5 hours later)
Platinum:Im really tired.
Midnight:Me too,lets go to sleep.
(They wake up)
Platinum:Midnight,do あなた see that thing over there
Midnight:Yeah I do,lets see what it is.
Platinum:Hi!Im Platinum And this is Midnight
Midnight:Uhhhhh...H-hi
Silver:Im Silver.Nice to meet あなた ladies.
Midnight:Platinum come with me.NOW!
Platinum:Okay?
(Midnight whispers she likes Silver)
Platinum:OMG!
Midnight:Dont tell anyone!
Platinum:I promise.
Silver:Is something wrong?
Platinum:No!We were just talking about our quest to find the chaos エメラルド on Chaos Mountain.
Silver:Oh.I see.I have to go,I'll see あなた again.Goodbye Platinum and Midnight
Platinum:Bye!
Midnight:Ummmm...Bye Silver.
THE END!I HOPED あなた LIKED IT!
PLEASE READ PART 3 THE FINALE!
Platinum Silverburst
Vince soon was at G.U.N.Two men where guarding the entrance."You may not pass!"One exclaimed.Vince soon knocked them out with a few swings from his guitar.He quietly went into the HQ.He sneaked around trying to find Ash."Dammit,where is she?"He whispered to himself.
Soon he found the room where they where about to experiment on Ash.Ash kept dodging the needle full of toxic.Vince knocked the scientist out be for he could inject the needle.He grabbed Ash carried her when the guards chased them trough.
Ash soon grew her bat wings and killed all the guards.Vince was startled.When they escaped he kept quiet.They ended up on 上, ページのトップへ of a cliff.
Ash coulodnt take it any more.She kissed Vince as the moonlight shined on them.
The End ~AshxVince~
Soon he found the room where they where about to experiment on Ash.Ash kept dodging the needle full of toxic.Vince knocked the scientist out be for he could inject the needle.He grabbed Ash carried her when the guards chased them trough.
Ash soon grew her bat wings and killed all the guards.Vince was startled.When they escaped he kept quiet.They ended up on 上, ページのトップへ of a cliff.
Ash coulodnt take it any more.She kissed Vince as the moonlight shined on them.
The End ~AshxVince~
