Hi. I'm Shade2145. It appears a load of あなた are Mary-sues. I am here to help. Unlike someother FC guides. I give アドバイス in the best (and shortest) way possible.I don't try and offend you,this is just here to help.
So here we go!
Chapter One
Mary Sueing is when あなた bassically God Mod.
Don't know what God Modding is? It's when your Invincible,not being able to die. Thats wat Mary sueing is. Let's take an example from a RP.
N00b133!!!: I shoot あなた then telport あなた inside then kill you!! N00B! N00B pro!!!!
Mephilesthedark: Mary suer
N00B133!!!: LOLOLOLOLOLN00B あなた JUST MADE UP AN WORD
See what i mean? This will turn into something like this
N00B133!!!: I kill u
N00B134: Oh no あなた never.
Now. This is the terrible thing of Mary sueing. If we 表示する ourselves to weak and don't stop Marysueing,this Commuity of 2,257. Will disapearr and be absorbed into MarySuering.
Do あなた want that? No.
Chapter 2.
Never Mary sue.
That is all.
So here we go!
Chapter One
Mary Sueing is when あなた bassically God Mod.
Don't know what God Modding is? It's when your Invincible,not being able to die. Thats wat Mary sueing is. Let's take an example from a RP.
N00b133!!!: I shoot あなた then telport あなた inside then kill you!! N00B! N00B pro!!!!
Mephilesthedark: Mary suer
N00B133!!!: LOLOLOLOLOLN00B あなた JUST MADE UP AN WORD
See what i mean? This will turn into something like this
N00B133!!!: I kill u
N00B134: Oh no あなた never.
Now. This is the terrible thing of Mary sueing. If we 表示する ourselves to weak and don't stop Marysueing,this Commuity of 2,257. Will disapearr and be absorbed into MarySuering.
Do あなた want that? No.
Chapter 2.
Never Mary sue.
That is all.
"You're misson is to recover the chaos emeralds." "ok" Ruby runs off heading towards Eggman's base."who's that" ruby thinks. As a Blue hedgehog races by. "It don't matter" As ruby sneaks into one of the vents. Crawling until the she sees the glow of the red chaos emerald. "It's like taking キャンディー form a baby" ruby jumps out of the vent and takes the chaos emerald. As she gets ready to leave a two tailed 狐, フォックス walks in. "huh, who are you" "I'm ruby, don't bother me" she jumps into the vent before tails can get her. "Get back here ruby" Ruby escapes Eggman's base and run torwds the spy HQ. "so あなた say a red hedgehog took the chaos emerald" says sonic "yes, she escaped before I could get her" says tails angerliy "let go after her,sonic" says cream "I'm back" "Good job, angent ruby"says Emma the HQ leader "I have a question, who's the yellow two tailed fox" ruby demands "tails the 狐, フォックス he travels with sonic the hedgehog" "tell me more"
I had seen so many sites, about:
Bad Sonic ファン Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
あなた can have a detailed character, if あなた want so.
あなた can have simply character, if あなた want so.
There is only one think あなた must remember:
Make the character's デザイン fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Bad Sonic ファン Characters
And there is so many critiques about EVERYTHING and EVERYONE designs of them.
So, I had come to this point of having 'good character'
No character isnt perfect.
If the owner loves it, that's all the matters.
あなた can have a detailed character, if あなた want so.
あなた can have simply character, if あなた want so.
There is only one think あなた must remember:
Make the character's デザイン fitting in her/him personality and his/her story.
Thank you.
Have a good night, I'm off to sleep now. >8'I
Ok, so I know a hedgehog whose life is dark... simple this story is about that hedgehog and their long, lost, forgotten life. How the good times turn to simply bad times. And that I know their life. How do I know this? I'm not a stalker nor a watch of life. This hedgehog is me... Shadey Grey the last dark user... the last hope of the planet Dark/Light. First off, dark users are like chaos users, they use dark power または darkness control and so do chaos users... they use chaos control. I never cared for anyone... not even you. Only that I ロスト my family... my friends... everyone I knew and loved. And I seeked revenge for them... only to find new friends. フレンズ that could handle my anger... I become calm for some time. Yet, I still kill people for my family and friends...for anything I can remember.
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for 読書 this intro, tell me if I should write this または not. I start 次 week. 1/12/12)
-Shadey Grey, writer.
(Thank-you for 読書 this intro, tell me if I should write this または not. I start 次 week. 1/12/12)