Suddenly, Chris jumped out of his bed. "I guess that was just a dream..." He said, relieved. He was, infact, correct. He almost got back in bed, then he saw his clock, and it was 11:03 AM, 11-11-11. He crawled out of his hole, and stretched. He noticed that there was a trail of blood leading to the Mystic Cave Zone. He followed it, as though he didn't know what to think. About 20 分 later, he was in the middle of Mystic Cave Zone. He heard voices, but he couldn't exactly see who they were; his veiw was being blocked によって the trees. "Who are あなた and what are you?" A female voice said. "Why do あなた care care?!" A familiar male voice said. He walked a little further. He saw a white bat... and Madjin. "Tell me!" She said. "Get off!" Madjin said. The bat girl was pinning Madjin to a tree.
"No!" The bat shouted. Madjin pushed her away. His push was so powerful that she was flung away and she hit a 木, ツリー across from Madjin. She slowly got back up and ran toward Madjin. Madjin came running toward her. Chris suddenly flipped up and landed in front of Madjin with his sword in ready-to-strike position. Madjin skidded to a stop. "YOU again?!" He shouted. Rouge walked back. Chris swung his sword, but Madjin grabbed his arm and threw him towards a tree. Chris slid down. He ran toward Madjin again, but Madjin did a spindash right while Chris was running, and he hit Chris. Chris fell over. Madjin got up, and stepped on Chris's chest. Rouge ran over from behind Madjin, but Madjin put his hand out, and Rouge was flug away. Madjin got a smirk on his face. Madjin picked up Chris's sword, and put a long deep cut in Chris's arm. "Looks like you've outdone yourself, haven't you?" Madjin said, with his foot still on Chris. "You don't know anything, you're a worthless prototype that was never used because of unacheiement, and あなた were only released because your dumbass brother decided it would be okay to break things." Madjin said. "Can あなた get me a dictionary? I didn't get a thing あなた just said. "Just go along with it."
"but-" "Just go along with it, goddamit!" Madjin dug his foot in deeper. Madjin got off. he rose his arms up, and 木, ツリー roots 塔の上のラプンツェル up Chris's limbs and his torso. He tried to get up, but that was impossible. Madjin took Chris's sword and carved out a hole in his own stomach. Madjin turned red, like he was hen he first came. He got down on the ground. A purplish-black mist poured out of the hole in his stomach. It kept pouring and pouring and pouring. Madjin closed his eyes and slowly started disentigrating. Soon the purplish black mist covered everything. The sky turned black. Smoke filled the air, and a pentagram spread across the sky. "Oh no..." Chris said.
End of Chapter 10
Chapter 11 coming soon!
"No!" The bat shouted. Madjin pushed her away. His push was so powerful that she was flung away and she hit a 木, ツリー across from Madjin. She slowly got back up and ran toward Madjin. Madjin came running toward her. Chris suddenly flipped up and landed in front of Madjin with his sword in ready-to-strike position. Madjin skidded to a stop. "YOU again?!" He shouted. Rouge walked back. Chris swung his sword, but Madjin grabbed his arm and threw him towards a tree. Chris slid down. He ran toward Madjin again, but Madjin did a spindash right while Chris was running, and he hit Chris. Chris fell over. Madjin got up, and stepped on Chris's chest. Rouge ran over from behind Madjin, but Madjin put his hand out, and Rouge was flug away. Madjin got a smirk on his face. Madjin picked up Chris's sword, and put a long deep cut in Chris's arm. "Looks like you've outdone yourself, haven't you?" Madjin said, with his foot still on Chris. "You don't know anything, you're a worthless prototype that was never used because of unacheiement, and あなた were only released because your dumbass brother decided it would be okay to break things." Madjin said. "Can あなた get me a dictionary? I didn't get a thing あなた just said. "Just go along with it."
"but-" "Just go along with it, goddamit!" Madjin dug his foot in deeper. Madjin got off. he rose his arms up, and 木, ツリー roots 塔の上のラプンツェル up Chris's limbs and his torso. He tried to get up, but that was impossible. Madjin took Chris's sword and carved out a hole in his own stomach. Madjin turned red, like he was hen he first came. He got down on the ground. A purplish-black mist poured out of the hole in his stomach. It kept pouring and pouring and pouring. Madjin closed his eyes and slowly started disentigrating. Soon the purplish black mist covered everything. The sky turned black. Smoke filled the air, and a pentagram spread across the sky. "Oh no..." Chris said.
End of Chapter 10
Chapter 11 coming soon!
So why am I remaking it? Well the series was the first fanfiction series I made and when I did it wasn’t really well written, plotholes galore, so I wanted to remake it completely. But at the same time I didn’t want to redo it because of all the ideas I had.
So what I’m doing is rewriting the story, and keeping it as it was, but making some changes along the way. This way the original story will be there but it will be written better. I’ll add some other parts into it, but rest assured it’s not a reboot, just an edited version.
So what I’m doing is rewriting the story, and keeping it as it was, but making some changes along the way. This way the original story will be there but it will be written better. I’ll add some other parts into it, but rest assured it’s not a reboot, just an edited version.
Attention every fanpopper! I know あなた have going to the Sonic ファン Character ホーム page! A person has uploaded a bunch of inappropriate pictures, now, I have this person's プロフィール page and あなた have to レポート this person immediately! If this keeps on going, it could be dangerous for other people!
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Then, あなた type in anything あなた want in the additional information.
Then, click the offensive content button underneath.
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Here is the guy:
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First, あなた レポート abuse this guy.
Then, あなた type in anything あなた want in the additional information.
Then, click the offensive content button underneath.
May his account be terminated...
Lukky, She was kind,smart,energetic and mature for her age.
"The key isn't working to my apartment..." She 発言しました softly. She went downstairs to get the key checked out. They 発言しました "It's covered in Rain, You'll have to copy another key" Lukky went outside to go to a Key Copy Machine. She put it in. "I do not see why it's not working..." Then suddenly, Someone got her from behind. She started crying. She didn't know what she did wrong.
"WHAT,WHAT HAVE A DONE TO DESERVE THIS! Then she escaped. She didn't know what happened. She didn't loose anything. She ran away. She didn't know where she was または were she went.She began to walk, Therefore cry at the same time. Rain began to fall. "Fuck, I have to get ホーム ASAP."
"The key isn't working to my apartment..." She 発言しました softly. She went downstairs to get the key checked out. They 発言しました "It's covered in Rain, You'll have to copy another key" Lukky went outside to go to a Key Copy Machine. She put it in. "I do not see why it's not working..." Then suddenly, Someone got her from behind. She started crying. She didn't know what she did wrong.
"WHAT,WHAT HAVE A DONE TO DESERVE THIS! Then she escaped. She didn't know what happened. She didn't loose anything. She ran away. She didn't know where she was または were she went.She began to walk, Therefore cry at the same time. Rain began to fall. "Fuck, I have to get ホーム ASAP."
