It's good and I can see that あなた put a lot of work in to it. But there is, of course, room for improvement.
The angle looks a bit confusing, partially because the head and the ears aren't harmonizing very well. The ears are at a tilt to the side and are drawn at a front view, like we are looking directly at them. On their own, they're pretty good. Then あなた get to looking at the head, which isn't tilted and is at もっと見る of an angle rather than being in a front-view. Also, the nose and mouth are slightly off center both with one another and with the general facial structure. The eye is good, but I think it could use もっと見る of a detailed shape. Also, あなた can try adding a line above it to suggest the shape of an eyelid. The hair could use もっと見る detail, too. And try shading with a light 情報源 and using values that relate to that rather than just laying shades down.
I suggest that あなた focus on using guidelines in your work. They take a bit もっと見る time to use than just sketching something out where it looks like it goes, but the outcome is worth the time. Also, as I always say, reference is always a great help when you're drawing, for both light 情報源 and for form. Really take the time to study 写真 and even people in your everyday life to see how features of faces work together in proportion to one another and how light affects those features. Take every last detail あなた see in to consideration. Detail is important, even for the simplistic styles of アニメ and cartoons.
I'm also going to suggest that あなた use resources and take tips and tricks of professional artists in to consideration. YouTube and DeviantART are always good for free sources, and あなた can always go to the bookstore または としょうかん, ライブラリ for 本 filled with tips and tricks. A name that I always suggest people to look for is
link. He devotes a lot of time in to making tutorials that are detailed and easy to understand and he's recently published a how-to-draw book. He's a good person to start learning from.
But no matter what あなた do, don't stop practicing. It may take a while to get to where あなた want to be- Hell, I've been learning to draw for 3 または 4 years and I'm still not as good as I would like to be- but it's rewarding in the end to see how much あなた improve through practice. It's a long road, but a satisfying one, so don't get discouraged if what あなた do isn't perfect. Just keep it up and you'll be improving in no time.
Don't give up, good luck, and happy drawing!!!~
![It's good and I can see that あなた put a lot of work in to it. But there is, of course, room for improvement. The angle looks a bit confusing, partially because the head and the ears aren't harmonizing very well. The ears are at a tilt to the side and are drawn at a front view, like we are looking directly at them. On their own, they're pretty good. Then あなた get to looking at the head, which isn't tilted and is at もっと見る of an angle rather than being in a front-view. Also, the nose and mouth are slightly off center both with one another and with the general facial structure. The eye is good, but I think it could use もっと見る of a detailed shape. Also, あなた can try adding a line above it to suggest the shape of an eyelid. The hair could use もっと見る detail, too. And try shading with a light 情報源 and using values that relate to that rather than just laying shades down. I suggest that あなた focus on using guidelines in your work. They take a bit もっと見る time to use than just sketching something out where it looks like it goes, but the outcome is worth the time. Also, as I always say, reference is always a great help when you're drawing, for both light 情報源 and for form. Really take the time to study 写真 and even people in your everyday life to see how features of faces work together in proportion to one another and how light affects those features. Take every last detail あなた see in to consideration. Detail is important, even for the simplistic styles of アニメ and cartoons. I'm also going to suggest that あなた use resources and take tips and tricks of professional artists in to consideration. YouTube and DeviantART are always good for free sources, and あなた can always go to the bookstore または としょうかん, ライブラリ for 本 filled with tips and tricks. A name that I always suggest people to look for is [url=http://www.youtube.com/user/markcrilley?ob=4&feature=results_main]Mark Crilley[/url]. He devotes a lot of time in to making tutorials that are detailed and easy to understand and he's recently published a how-to-draw book. He's a good person to start learning from. But no matter what あなた do, don't stop practicing. It may take a while to get to where あなた want to be- Hell, I've been learning to draw for 3 または 4 years and I'm still not as good as I would like to be- but it's rewarding in the end to see how much あなた improve through practice. It's a long road, but a satisfying one, so don't get discouraged if what あなた do isn't perfect. Just keep it up and you'll be improving in no time. Don't give up, good luck, and happy drawing!!!~](http://images5.fanpop.com/image/answers/2508000/2508911_1331676752273.99res_479_300.jpg)
