I have been waiting for AGES for someone to ask for our opinions on their drawings! I have been DYING to see some drawings and have had an itching to constructively criticize some... >3< あなた have made me very happy...
Anyway...
Your drawing is very good and certainly has a unique, cartoony quality to it, but I to have some suggestions to help あなた improve.
- The chin is a bit oddly shaped, as well as the forehead. Not that these are flaws, but it's not quite realistic. It would certainly help あなた a lot if あなた were to use 写真 reference. Google 画像 and deviantART are good places to look for that.
- The eye is a bit... dis-positioned. Again, 写真 reference is always nice when you're starting out.
- The fluff around the ears and back makes that part of the body look disconnected from the rest of the body. Erasing some of the harsher lines should fix that.
- The eye, while well drawn, is a bit lacking in depth. Pay close attention to color gradient and light when you're shading an eye.
- Though there is fluff, there is little to no 毛皮 texture. 毛皮 texture is hard to do, but with practice and tutorials, あなた can master it in no time. YouTube and deviantART are good places to look for tutorials on drawing.
Ah, also, if it's of any help, I have a drawing of a 狼, オオカミ that I did recently
link that あなた can use as a visual example if I didn't explain something well. Even though my scanner killed the quality.
I hope I've helped you! ^^
