How does it look?

it looks good for a begginner...

It looks quite good and neat. Really cool too. Keep up the good work with that drawing :)

It's very defined and your shapes are excellent.

What I would suggest is that あなた don't use such thick lines when sketching with pencil as it doesn't look as sharp and put together. If あなた want thick lines, thicken them when あなた use ink によって using a pen that draws lines thicker. あなた should let your tools work for あなた instead of drawing over the same line again and again. When あなた sketch with pencil, the picture should look about as bare as it can be (for マンガ drawing that is).

Overall, to me it looks like you're ready to start using もっと見る than just pencil.

It looks cool but あなた should work on the eyes im a levi ファン so thanx for drawing him my 日 began so beautiful😝