Well..
ZenJeager737 has asked me to review his story JASPER HELL HIGH..
To be honest, I don't usually have high hopes for the fanfiction stories of these days.
The alpha and omega Fanfiction.net page will never completely be the same as it was 3 または 4 years ago.
All those people I've come know, are gone now, and I barelly come to this page anymore I read other pages, and review most of the stories from back in the day..
But anyway.
This story was better then I expected, though that probably isn't saying much, I wasn't expecting much.
I like the way it keeps switching between P.O.V's so rapidly, I don't think I've seen that before.
And as for the story itself. Not sure if I have anything worth saying.
But that's pretty common now.
I wish I could say their's no sex. But truth is.. I couldn't tell.
Its rated M so it's very likely. But I hope to god there isn't.. But the hope of 'nice' stories is becoming harder and harder these days.
But anyway..
Sorry for not ranting, swearing, または giving a better review.
This is all I could do.
Zen asked me to point out spelling mistakes also, but I don't think I'll be the best for that. Considering I suck at it myself and don't want to sound hypercritical..
Anyway..
Till 次 time.
Live long and prosper!
ZenJeager737 has asked me to review his story JASPER HELL HIGH..
To be honest, I don't usually have high hopes for the fanfiction stories of these days.
The alpha and omega Fanfiction.net page will never completely be the same as it was 3 または 4 years ago.
All those people I've come know, are gone now, and I barelly come to this page anymore I read other pages, and review most of the stories from back in the day..
But anyway.
This story was better then I expected, though that probably isn't saying much, I wasn't expecting much.
I like the way it keeps switching between P.O.V's so rapidly, I don't think I've seen that before.
And as for the story itself. Not sure if I have anything worth saying.
But that's pretty common now.
I wish I could say their's no sex. But truth is.. I couldn't tell.
Its rated M so it's very likely. But I hope to god there isn't.. But the hope of 'nice' stories is becoming harder and harder these days.
But anyway..
Sorry for not ranting, swearing, または giving a better review.
This is all I could do.
Zen asked me to point out spelling mistakes also, but I don't think I'll be the best for that. Considering I suck at it myself and don't want to sound hypercritical..
Anyway..
Till 次 time.
Live long and prosper!
one 日 hupmhrey was log sledding
he ran into tree
he met kate
kate 発言しました hi ur cute humphy
humpfry was cute and was nice
'i have 2 go 2 alfa school' 発言しました kate
'aww' 発言しました humphrey
Llater they got back but they got stuff 2 do
ok guys that ch1 was my fanfic hope it was good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
he ran into tree
he met kate
kate 発言しました hi ur cute humphy
humpfry was cute and was nice
'i have 2 go 2 alfa school' 発言しました kate
'aww' 発言しました humphrey
Llater they got back but they got stuff 2 do
ok guys that ch1 was my fanfic hope it was good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Talking Plushies
Wave 1:
Play with Me Kate
Tell me a Joke Humphrey
Wave 2:
Exercise with Me Garth
Sing with Me Lilly
Wave 3:
Dance with Me Princess
Wave 4:
Tickle Me Runt
Tickle Me Claudette
Tickle Me Stinky
Life Sized Plushies
Wave 1:
Humphrey
Kate
Lilly
Garth
Wave 2:
Claudette
Stinky
Runt
Wave 3:
Princess
Fleet
Magril
Wave 4:
Eve
Winston
Tony
Wave 5:
Hutch
Can-Do
Deluxe Action Figures
Wave 1:
Kate and Humphrey
Wave 2:
Garth and Lilly
Wave 1:
Play with Me Kate
Tell me a Joke Humphrey
Wave 2:
Exercise with Me Garth
Sing with Me Lilly
Wave 3:
Dance with Me Princess
Wave 4:
Tickle Me Runt
Tickle Me Claudette
Tickle Me Stinky
Life Sized Plushies
Wave 1:
Humphrey
Kate
Lilly
Garth
Wave 2:
Claudette
Stinky
Runt
Wave 3:
Princess
Fleet
Magril
Wave 4:
Eve
Winston
Tony
Wave 5:
Hutch
Can-Do
Deluxe Action Figures
Wave 1:
Kate and Humphrey
Wave 2:
Garth and Lilly