Well..
ZenJeager737 has asked me to review his story JASPER HELL HIGH..
To be honest, I don't usually have high hopes for the fanfiction stories of these days.
The alpha and omega Fanfiction.net page will never completely be the same as it was 3 または 4 years ago.
All those people I've come know, are gone now, and I barelly come to this page anymore I read other pages, and review most of the stories from back in the day..
But anyway.
This story was better then I expected, though that probably isn't saying much, I wasn't expecting much.
I like the way it keeps switching between P.O.V's so rapidly, I don't think I've seen that before.
And as for the story itself. Not sure if I have anything worth saying.
But that's pretty common now.
I wish I could say their's no sex. But truth is.. I couldn't tell.
Its rated M so it's very likely. But I hope to god there isn't.. But the hope of 'nice' stories is becoming harder and harder these days.
But anyway..
Sorry for not ranting, swearing, または giving a better review.
This is all I could do.
Zen asked me to point out spelling mistakes also, but I don't think I'll be the best for that. Considering I suck at it myself and don't want to sound hypercritical..
Anyway..
Till 次 time.
Live long and prosper!
ZenJeager737 has asked me to review his story JASPER HELL HIGH..
To be honest, I don't usually have high hopes for the fanfiction stories of these days.
The alpha and omega Fanfiction.net page will never completely be the same as it was 3 または 4 years ago.
All those people I've come know, are gone now, and I barelly come to this page anymore I read other pages, and review most of the stories from back in the day..
But anyway.
This story was better then I expected, though that probably isn't saying much, I wasn't expecting much.
I like the way it keeps switching between P.O.V's so rapidly, I don't think I've seen that before.
And as for the story itself. Not sure if I have anything worth saying.
But that's pretty common now.
I wish I could say their's no sex. But truth is.. I couldn't tell.
Its rated M so it's very likely. But I hope to god there isn't.. But the hope of 'nice' stories is becoming harder and harder these days.
But anyway..
Sorry for not ranting, swearing, または giving a better review.
This is all I could do.
Zen asked me to point out spelling mistakes also, but I don't think I'll be the best for that. Considering I suck at it myself and don't want to sound hypercritical..
Anyway..
Till 次 time.
Live long and prosper!
Hi there! I'm back!
I don't know if any of あなた remember me but it's VictoriaWolf, i used to be a member here but then i quit. I decided to come back! So hello to those who remember me and hi to those who don't know who the hell i am. It looks like most of anyone i knew here has left , but if あなた haven't good to see あなた again!
Well here is some info on on me if あなた dont know me.
Status: I'm back! Yipee!
Mood: Happy
毛皮 Color: Black
Gender: Female
Crush: X
Mate: X
Pups: X
Rank: Alpha
Country: Canada
Eyes: Red
Personality: Fun,bubbly and seductive ;)
I don't know if any of あなた remember me but it's VictoriaWolf, i used to be a member here but then i quit. I decided to come back! So hello to those who remember me and hi to those who don't know who the hell i am. It looks like most of anyone i knew here has left , but if あなた haven't good to see あなた again!
Well here is some info on on me if あなた dont know me.
Status: I'm back! Yipee!
Mood: Happy
毛皮 Color: Black
Gender: Female
Crush: X
Mate: X
Pups: X
Rank: Alpha
Country: Canada
Eyes: Red
Personality: Fun,bubbly and seductive ;)
When I hear a funny joke I will not reply, "LOL, LMAO, または ROTFLMAO!"
Start using フェイスブック for something other than Farmville and stupid quizzes
I will try to figure out why I "really" need 5 フェイスブック accounts.
Lose 20 pounds によって going to the gym!
I will stop using, "So, what's your URL?" as a pickup line.
I will spend less than five hours a 日 on the Internet.
I will read the manual... just as soon as I can find it.
Spend less than $1000 for drinks at スターバックス this year.
Lose weight によって inventing an anti-gravity machine
Stop repeating myself again, and again, and again.
I will stop tagging pictures of myself in pictures even when I’m not in them
I will think of a パスワード other than "password"
Start using フェイスブック for something other than Farmville and stupid quizzes
I will try to figure out why I "really" need 5 フェイスブック accounts.
Lose 20 pounds によって going to the gym!
I will stop using, "So, what's your URL?" as a pickup line.
I will spend less than five hours a 日 on the Internet.
I will read the manual... just as soon as I can find it.
Spend less than $1000 for drinks at スターバックス this year.
Lose weight によって inventing an anti-gravity machine
Stop repeating myself again, and again, and again.
I will stop tagging pictures of myself in pictures even when I’m not in them
I will think of a パスワード other than "password"