Twilight Eclipse 09/09/09

I'm 書く a fanfic called "Almost Alice" about Alice, Jacob, Jasper, and Bella, and I'd really like it if you'd review. If あなた like it, I can put up a link to the story (which is much farther along than the first chapter, I can tell あなた that). And if you're gonna be mean about it, don't bother commenting. Thanks!
-Alice <3

Almost Alice
Chapter One: Smoke


“I win,” Alice 発言しました smugly, holding out her hand towards Edward. “Again.”

Edward rolled his eyes as he searches his backpack for Alice’s “prize.” I smiled. She was getting to be exactly like Jasper, always betting on something....

Mysterious love

-chapter one-



It was my first 日 of 11th grade.My alarm clock went off I stayed in ベッド for a little while I didnt want too get up.But after a miniute または two I just got up.I went too my closet and pick out some clothes really it was just what I seen first.After I dressed my self I went down stairs too see my father in the キッチン makeing coffee.Soon he would be on his way too work, just like every day.My father is a lawyer for the town of Bartonville,Arkansas. Every body liked him thoughs who didnt did not know him very well,but he is very queit kinda like me.Him and my mother...

bella's pov

edward took my hand and we walk toward my parents

when my mother look at me her eyes got wider and my dad look surprized
edward was still holding my hand i was getting もっと見る nervous with each step a took foward

"Hello mother , father" my mother nodded and also my father
after a 分 of silence
then my father look at edward
"Are あなた carlisle younger brother Edward??" my dad ask and look at me when he 発言しました his name

probably remembering when i interrupt him and 発言しました edwards name i look at edward and he was repressing a smile probably someone was thinking something funny
my edward was...

bella's pov

edward sigh heavily took my hands between his and started to talk

"it all started one 日 at the hospital a couple months ago.." he 発言しました slowly he look at my face my face was curious and interest in hearing もっと見る
he touch my cheek and continue もっと見る quickly
"so i lied at the party when i told あなた i didn't knew あなた "

" I was workin in the hospital as a helper of my brother i was organizing some papers when i heard that all of the young male thoughts turn excited and extreamly happy"

wait the thoughts he heard????
but i didn't 発言しました anything i thought that maybe if i interrupted he wouldn't...

The car is warm and as we drive off the reservation, my mind can only think of my dreams. They were so real so life like. They felt like the were really happening . My future couldn't already be set によって my nightmares, could it?

"What are あなた thinking about?" Jacob ask's me, never removing his eyes from the road. He is so good at setting the mood.

"Life, in general." I answer, not wanting him to worry. His face looks emotionless.

"I'm a good listener." he turns to me and smiles. "Really whats up?" He ask stoping the car.

"I'm just worried thats all."

"Do あなた want to go se Carlisle?" His expression...

I watched my Aunt pack my bag. She barley told me that I was going to stay there a whole year. " Do あなた want to take this Ipod" she asked. I didn't say anything. " あなた know this silence treament won't do あなた any good" She said. "Ok grab your backpack and let's go" she whispered. I followed her to the car. We arrived at the airport and she hugged me and cried." Be good and listen. The sonner あなた start to talk the sonner あなた get to come home. I didn't want to come ホーム and pass によって the empty lot that once held my home. "Bye. 愛 you. あなた better leave the plane to Arizona is about to leave" she...

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In days gone by, there once was a land where the moss and vines grew thick, and the trees hid the forest floor from the sunlight. This was a place where gray-billowed clouds covered the sky, sucking the shadows from the Earth and spewing them back as fog and rain.

It was the perfect...