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I got this from Stephenie Meyer's website...I didnt write this myself!
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**A note: I don't pull any punches here, so if あなた haven't read New Moon and あなた don't want to be spoiled, don't read this.**

Writing a sequel is a very different experience than 書く a story. It was for me, at least.

If you've read the link, then あなた know that I didn't set out to write a novel または begin a career as an author. I was just 書く down a story for my personal enjoyment, letting it grow as it would and lead where...

here is my twilight ファンタジー life......
it is SERIOUS fantasy, its also SUPER long(I am NOT exaggerating so if あなた are doing something important, あなた should wait to read this some other time), some of the parts of the story are not in relation to twilight at all, while others are, so if i get something different than the book, its probably on purpose, and I’m not wrong, I’m just making stuff up!
also it is in a first-person story-thingy so if あなた get lost, sorry! AND it is my first story-thingy(haha) so dont sue me if its THAT bad. just tell me where i can improve! コメント PLEAZ!

My name is...

yea i made the タイトル to be something a little less opinionated, and もっと見る open to other peoples opinon. so if あなた agree, say why, and if not, give some examples of her good side! all i did was her bad side cuz thats my opinion. :)

These are from the first chapter of Eclipse.

pg. 14-Charlie to Bella"You're hurting Jake's feelings, avoiding him like this."
response: HOLY CRAP listen to your father Bella!!! あなた have got a serious problem, and あなた are hurting poor Jake in the process! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?!? GET..A..LIFE, and leave Jacob out of it

pg. 17-in Bella's mind"I wrenched the door out...