I stood up, shrugging Jakes arm off my shoulder. I couldn’t be around anyone when they were 芝居 like this, especially not Jacob. Why would dad be right? I loved Jacob and he loved my right? That’s how imprinting works.
“Renesmee.” Jacob called after me.
I ignored him. Did he really think that? When I was younger I always dreamed that when I graduated, Jacob would ask me to marry him. That we would be happy together, for eternity. That we would have our own children and our own house. But life isn’t a fairy tale, または something あなた can just plan out in front of you. It’s something much undecided. And my little dream from when I was younger seemed very unlikely now.
“Ness, are あなた going home?” Jacob asked from behind me.
“I don’t know.” I 発言しました truthfully.
“Please do. Your mum will be extremely upset if あなた don’t.” Oh so it was my mum that would be upset now. He didn’t care. He came down here for Mum’s benefit?
He knew what I was thinking.
“Oh come on Ness, あなた know I didn’t mean it like that. I didn’t want あなた to get hurt either.” Oh yes and I was totally ment to believe that wasn’t I!
“Renesmee, look at me.” Jacob 発言しました grabbing my wrist and twisting me around.
His eyes were soft, and I tried very hard to keep my glare at him. He made it so difficult to be angry at him.
“You know I 愛 you. But I want what’s best for you.”
“Being with あなた is what’s best for me.” I said. And that I was certain about.
“But it might not be.” He 発言しました again. Why did he keep saying things like that? It was just being stupid.
I turned away from him.
“YOU OBVIOUSLY DON’T KNOW WHAT’S BEST FOR ME THEN.” I shouted and then ran home.
I curled up on my ベッド crying. Dad and Mum were now hunting as far as I was aware and I didn’t think Jacob would follow me.
“Nessie can I come in?” Auntie Alice asked.
I sniffed, sitting up and Auntie Alice came in.
“I know how あなた feel Nessie.” She 発言しました hugging me. “I can assure あなた I would feel the same way if I was told I couldn’t be with Jasper because my grades were bad. There your responsibility not his. And あなた shouldn’t be disciplined in that way. I may not know a lot about Imprinting but, I’m going to guess it’s pretty hard for あなた two to be apart. I mean I hate being away from Jazz, but with あなた two...Let’s just say it has to hurt, doesn’t it?” I nodded.
Aunt Alice understood better than I thought. She understood better than anyone.
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“Renesmee.” Jacob called after me.
I ignored him. Did he really think that? When I was younger I always dreamed that when I graduated, Jacob would ask me to marry him. That we would be happy together, for eternity. That we would have our own children and our own house. But life isn’t a fairy tale, または something あなた can just plan out in front of you. It’s something much undecided. And my little dream from when I was younger seemed very unlikely now.
“Ness, are あなた going home?” Jacob asked from behind me.
“I don’t know.” I 発言しました truthfully.
“Please do. Your mum will be extremely upset if あなた don’t.” Oh so it was my mum that would be upset now. He didn’t care. He came down here for Mum’s benefit?
He knew what I was thinking.
“Oh come on Ness, あなた know I didn’t mean it like that. I didn’t want あなた to get hurt either.” Oh yes and I was totally ment to believe that wasn’t I!
“Renesmee, look at me.” Jacob 発言しました grabbing my wrist and twisting me around.
His eyes were soft, and I tried very hard to keep my glare at him. He made it so difficult to be angry at him.
“You know I 愛 you. But I want what’s best for you.”
“Being with あなた is what’s best for me.” I said. And that I was certain about.
“But it might not be.” He 発言しました again. Why did he keep saying things like that? It was just being stupid.
I turned away from him.
“YOU OBVIOUSLY DON’T KNOW WHAT’S BEST FOR ME THEN.” I shouted and then ran home.
I curled up on my ベッド crying. Dad and Mum were now hunting as far as I was aware and I didn’t think Jacob would follow me.
“Nessie can I come in?” Auntie Alice asked.
I sniffed, sitting up and Auntie Alice came in.
“I know how あなた feel Nessie.” She 発言しました hugging me. “I can assure あなた I would feel the same way if I was told I couldn’t be with Jasper because my grades were bad. There your responsibility not his. And あなた shouldn’t be disciplined in that way. I may not know a lot about Imprinting but, I’m going to guess it’s pretty hard for あなた two to be apart. I mean I hate being away from Jazz, but with あなた two...Let’s just say it has to hurt, doesn’t it?” I nodded.
Aunt Alice understood better than I thought. She understood better than anyone.
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こんにちは ... This is my first fanfiction :D so if its not good just give me some constructive critism to make it better. Thanks (:
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
My awesome 'other':
Edward あなた are delicious,
I bet you'd be nutritious,
I reckon you'd be good to eat,
Quite juicy and quite sweet.
Tastier than any チョコレート cake,
With hunger, my belly aches,
In a totally non sexual way.
Ha ha ha ha don't take this seriously guys. I'm not weird, honest. But Edward would be good to eat. Not that I would know... Nothing rhymes with delicious, あなた know... Except nutritious... So anyways, that's my latest bout of weirdness, I hope I've met my quota for the day.
Edward あなた are delicious,
I bet you'd be nutritious,
I reckon you'd be good to eat,
Quite juicy and quite sweet.
Tastier than any チョコレート cake,
With hunger, my belly aches,
In a totally non sexual way.
Ha ha ha ha don't take this seriously guys. I'm not weird, honest. But Edward would be good to eat. Not that I would know... Nothing rhymes with delicious, あなた know... Except nutritious... So anyways, that's my latest bout of weirdness, I hope I've met my quota for the day.