yea i made the タイトル to be something a little less opinionated, and もっと見る open to other peoples opinon. so if あなた agree, say why, and if not, give some examples of her good side! all i did was her bad side cuz thats my opinion. :)
These are from the first chapter of Eclipse.
pg. 14-Charlie to Bella"You're hurting Jake's feelings, avoiding him like this."
response: HOLY CRAP listen to your father Bella!!! あなた have got a serious problem, and あなた are hurting poor Jake in the process! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?!? GET..A..LIFE, and leave Jacob out of it
pg. 17-in Bella's mind"I wrenched the door out of my way--ridiculously eager--and there he was, my personal miracle."
response: ok Bella, あなた may think he is your own "personal miracle" and all, but hey, GUESS WHAT?? he loves あなた UNCONDITIONALLY. and what do あなた do? OBSESS NON-STOP, NOT LETTING HIM HAvE HIS OWN LIFE, and HANGING ON HIS EVERY WORD! give him some breathin 宇宙 girl!
pg. 18-Bella's mind "It made me sad that he had to try so hard. I comforted myself with the knowledge that I wouldn't be causing him pain much longer.
response: so the part i underlined, wouldn't be causing him pain much longer???? Bella, honey, あなた ARE ALWAYS GOING TO CAUSE HIM PAIN. NO MATTER WHAT あなた DO, HE WILL BE IN PAIN. so dont lead yourself in the wrong direction, thinking that あなた are so perfect
Yea haha so ok now im done with the very short pointless ranting. PLEASE COMMENT!
These are from the first chapter of Eclipse.
pg. 14-Charlie to Bella"You're hurting Jake's feelings, avoiding him like this."
response: HOLY CRAP listen to your father Bella!!! あなた have got a serious problem, and あなた are hurting poor Jake in the process! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?!? GET..A..LIFE, and leave Jacob out of it
pg. 17-in Bella's mind"I wrenched the door out of my way--ridiculously eager--and there he was, my personal miracle."
response: ok Bella, あなた may think he is your own "personal miracle" and all, but hey, GUESS WHAT?? he loves あなた UNCONDITIONALLY. and what do あなた do? OBSESS NON-STOP, NOT LETTING HIM HAvE HIS OWN LIFE, and HANGING ON HIS EVERY WORD! give him some breathin 宇宙 girl!
pg. 18-Bella's mind "It made me sad that he had to try so hard. I comforted myself with the knowledge that I wouldn't be causing him pain much longer.
response: so the part i underlined, wouldn't be causing him pain much longer???? Bella, honey, あなた ARE ALWAYS GOING TO CAUSE HIM PAIN. NO MATTER WHAT あなた DO, HE WILL BE IN PAIN. so dont lead yourself in the wrong direction, thinking that あなた are so perfect
Yea haha so ok now im done with the very short pointless ranting. PLEASE COMMENT!
投稿されました によって Twilight_News - 28/01/10 at 09:01 am
At the opening of their new ロンドン department store, Selfridges held a survey to find out the 上, ページのトップへ kisses of the past decade. Coming in at number one on their 一覧 was the キッス between Edward and Bella in “Twilight.” Considering the current ファン frenzy and media hype surrounding the “are they/aren’t they” relationship of Robert Pattinson and Kristen Stewart, this shouldn’t be a big surprise. Other kisses on the 一覧 include the upside down Spider-man キッス and the キッス from Brokeback Mountain. Entertainment Wise has the details including a slide 表示する of 写真 of Kristen and Rob
black moon ファン im so sorry im not 書く very often hope your not mad!
i cant write every 日 cause of my ホーム works :(
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i cant write every 日 cause of my ホーム works :(
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Regarding Kayla.....
Guys, I regret to inform あなた that my internet had committed technical suicide. I have stolen someone's laptop to write this and I hate to tell あなた that until someone revives my internet no further Kayla chapters can be posted.
This is an unforseen event and I will kick as many asses as I can to get the internet working agan.
I will continue to write the chapters and try to steal as many laptops and PCs as possible to post them.
I hate that I leave my story with あなた at such a critical point. Unfortunately this post is just a spur of the moment thing and I don't have my memory stick with me または I'd shove a chapter on at the end of this message.
Very sorry my peeps. あなた can verbally abuse me, my internet または BT broadband または all three!
Emmii-Luu
Guys, I regret to inform あなた that my internet had committed technical suicide. I have stolen someone's laptop to write this and I hate to tell あなた that until someone revives my internet no further Kayla chapters can be posted.
This is an unforseen event and I will kick as many asses as I can to get the internet working agan.
I will continue to write the chapters and try to steal as many laptops and PCs as possible to post them.
I hate that I leave my story with あなた at such a critical point. Unfortunately this post is just a spur of the moment thing and I don't have my memory stick with me または I'd shove a chapter on at the end of this message.
Very sorry my peeps. あなた can verbally abuse me, my internet または BT broadband または all three!
Emmii-Luu