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yea i made the タイトル to be something a little less opinionated, and もっと見る open to other peoples opinon. so if あなた agree, say why, and if not, give some examples of her good side! all i did was her bad side cuz thats my opinion. :)

These are from the first chapter of Eclipse.

pg. 14-Charlie to Bella"You're hurting Jake's feelings, avoiding him like this."
response: HOLY CRAP listen to your father Bella!!! あなた have got a serious problem, and あなた are hurting poor Jake in the process! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?!? GET..A..LIFE, and leave Jacob out of it

pg. 17-in Bella's mind"I wrenched the door out of my way--ridiculously eager--and there he was, my personal miracle."
response: ok Bella, あなた may think he is your own "personal miracle" and all, but hey, GUESS WHAT?? he loves あなた UNCONDITIONALLY. and what do あなた do? OBSESS NON-STOP, NOT LETTING HIM HAvE HIS OWN LIFE, and HANGING ON HIS EVERY WORD! give him some breathin 宇宙 girl!

pg. 18-Bella's mind "It made me sad that he had to try so hard. I comforted myself with the knowledge that I wouldn't be causing him pain much longer.
response: so the part i underlined, wouldn't be causing him pain much longer???? Bella, honey, あなた ARE ALWAYS GOING TO CAUSE HIM PAIN. NO MATTER WHAT あなた DO, HE WILL BE IN PAIN. so dont lead yourself in the wrong direction, thinking that あなた are so perfect

Yea haha so ok now im done with the very short pointless ranting. PLEASE COMMENT!
"now i know" he mutted
"know what" i was curious.
"where u got あなた looks from" i smiled while he blushed.

we arived at the house it was a pretty house not something i was use too as it was a little small.
"what?" i hadnt realised that he was looking at me ontil he had spoken.
"you house. its its beautiful isnt it?"i didnt realise ontil i 発言しました it that this was true his house was beautiful. i could see my self living in it.
"its allright nothing compared to your though" he smiled but i could see he felt emivious.
i didnt like the hurt in his eyes it somehow caused me pain.
"so are we just going...
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posted by Tatti
Esme made me 晩餐, 夕食 and since Jake has already gone I was eating alone. It was good that no one bothered me - I had too many thoughts. Bella's 質問 pulled out some dark memories I was struggling to forget. It was a bit like Nessie's touch, I could feel something pulsing in my head. Maybe they were right about the shield? または it was just another headache?
When I finnished I asked Esme if I can go sleep and she lead to the same bedroom. I lied on ベッド for a long 時 trying to fall asleep but nothing. I sighed angrily and changed my position. I hated doing nothing. And then someone knocked on...
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posted by CarlislesLover
Sorry for the delay.
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I woke up on the plane with Jacob sat 次 to me. “Where are we going Jake?”

“Dubai”

“Wow. That must have been really expensive”

“I ストール, 盗んだ Carlisle’s wallet and somehow figured out his pin number”

“Is Carlisle the doctor?”

“Yes”

“I guess he has loads of money then”

“He defiantly does”

“What if the credit card gets tracked down?”

“Oh don’t worry we’re going to put the money on to a different credit card and then burn this one”

“Ok”

2 Years later


I’m twenty now and Jacob was eighteen. I’m married to him and we live in Dubai together,...
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posted by CarlislesLover
I'm sorry あなた had to wai a while for this one.
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I stepped through looking around, it was pitch black and I couldn’t see anything. Then the door slammed behind me. I ran at it pulling the handle down but it wouldn’t open. I heard laughter echoing in the room または whatever it was I was in. I walked フォワード, 前進, 楽しみにして putting my hands in front of me feeling around to see if anything was here. I found another door which I opened. It lead me into another pitch black room. I ran my hands up the walls searching for lights but I didn’t find anything. I found yet again a door which opened. Every door I opened...
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posted by CarlislesLover
I'm sorry あなた had to wait long for this
Hope あなた like it
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I didn’t know what to do. I loved her so much I couldn’t lose her. I went up to my bedroom thinking of ways to get around this. How do make her remember me. I just wanted to have her in my arms one last time knowing who I am. Surely Carlisle could give her an operation または something. What was the last thing she remembered? Would she be staying in forks? I went downstairs. Everyone was still sat where they were sat when I left. “Carlisle what was the last thing Bella remembered?”

“She remembered being with her mum”

“Does...
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It was after I heard her scream that I started running. There wasn't a part of my body that didn't sting and burn. I saw her laying on the ground, Seth kneeling over her.
"What happened?!" I yelled. I scooped her up in my arms as she screamed in pain. The blood was dripping off her heel and onto my shoe.
"Paul got mad, really mad. We told her to back away but he phased sooner than we thought he would. He caught her leg." Seth took off his シャツ and started to dab at her wounds.
"I got to get her to the Cullen's." I told him.
"Let me have her untill あなた phase." He reached out her arms where...
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posted by kiwi12
part 13

I made it to LA eventually. My cash supply was severely reduced due to transportation so I had to do a lot of odd jobs. In a few years I would have to either win the lottery, find a buried treasure または 移動する somewhere other than America where a "fourteen 年 old" could get a full time job. I loved LA. I missed フレンズ from years 前 though. I wouldn't be able to handle LA for four または five years. It was better in small doses. I felt emptier than I had in a long time.

The emails had slowed but not ceased. I usually took several days to respond but I checked almost every day. Two months...
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posted by Hellohoudini
Best キッス of the decade


投稿されました によって Twilight_News - 28/01/10 at 09:01 am


At the opening of their new ロンドン department store, Selfridges held a survey to find out the 上, ページのトップへ kisses of the past decade. Coming in at number one on their 一覧 was the キッス between Edward and Bella in “Twilight.” Considering the current ファン frenzy and media hype surrounding the “are they/aren’t they” relationship of Robert Pattinson and Kristen Stewart, this shouldn’t be a big surprise. Other kisses on the 一覧 include the upside down Spider-man キッス and the キッス from Brokeback Mountain. Entertainment Wise has the details including a slide 表示する of 写真 of Kristen and Rob
posted by AnonymousXXX
I hope everyone likes this one. Tell me what あなた think and if あなた have any suggestions tell me.


That night I had the strangest dream. There was a 狼, オオカミ howling in the back yard near the forest. I followed the sound despite the fact I was terrified. I looked at the large, massive 狼, オオカミ up and down. I felt calm and at peace with it so close. It was almost all white. On Its face it had black around its eyes and the tip of its ears. His eyes were what struck me the most. They were deep ミルク チョコレート brown eyes. It was like they were burning a hole through my eyes and seeing into my soul. If that...
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Edwards POV


Bella had been out cold for atleast fifteen minutes. I was starting to get worried. I just wish there was something I could do. I was just about to give up on looking through paper after paper after paper but then I saw something on it that could help effectivly to Bella. It 発言しました that it is also good to talk to them and ask them to squeze your hand.
That sounded good enough for me to do. I loved the feel of her skin on my hand, it felt warm like temperature of a mug after youve poured hot チョコレート into it and then it has cooled down. I walked over to Bella and sat on the edge of...
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posted by lollipopszx3
Student-teaching

When I got over my crisis I followed Alice to Emmett's room. It was in a whole different dorm and that's why Emmett and Rose weren't together. That didn't mean they didn't sneak though. But if there were dorms together I'd bet Rose'll be pregnant によって now.

"Bella?" asked Emmett when we went in. Spare key on 上, ページのトップへ of the door. "EMMETT!" I squealed. We hugged. I never knew Emmett got this... big. He had a huge ring of muscle going around his arms. His face got もっと見る older than the last time I saw him. I think his dimples got more... dimplier.

"OH EM GEE! I NEVER SAW あなた IN LIKE FOREVER."...
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posted by lexie2635
Twilight Oath:
I promise to remember Bella
Each time I carelessly fall down
And I promise to remember Edward
Whenever I’m out of town
I promise to obey traffic laws
For Charlies sake of course
And I promise to remember Jacob
When my ハート, 心 fills with remorse
I promise to remember Carlisle
When ever I am in the Emergency Room
And I promise to remember Emmett
Every time there’s a huge boom
I promise to to remember Rosalie
Whenever I see something that holds pure beauty
And I promise to remember Alice
When I’m at a mall and a cute outfit spots me
I promise to remember Renesmee
When I see that beautiful bronze...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
black moon ファン im so sorry im not 書く very often hope your not mad!
i cant write every 日 cause of my ホーム works :(
but dont give up on me i promise to write soon!!
and thanks 4 your support!
and i want to know if u want me to continue または start new ones i have plenty of new ideas!!
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posted by twilight_james
I lay, dying, getting closer to death every tick of the clock. I was in pain. And then the shifts changed. I saw Carlisle come in. he talked to my mother, then wheeled her away. When he came back, he had an expression of determination on his face. He took me away to. I knew where we were going-the morgue. Yet I was not dead. I tried to speak, but I could not. SOmething told me that something terrible was about to happen. Yet I had no idea what was in-store for me.

We arrived. Carlisle's determination was replaced によって pain. I could only wonder why. Anad then he opened his mouth, and I felt a strange...
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posted by gossipgirlstar2
Mag: Could あなた tell us about the new Twilight movie, New Moon?

AG:It was fun for me because it was a little もっと見る in-depth for Alice’s character. It’s もっと見る about the angst part of it than the 愛 story as far as Edward and Bella. Edward leaves Bella, so she kind of falls into a depression and gets close to Jacob, and discovers a couple もっと見る crazy things about the town. We had a blast filming. We got to go to Italy, which was amazing. It was a couple of us who got to go to Italy, and I was included. It was coming back to the people we got really close to in the movie before so it was like...
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posted by twilight-7
Regarding Kayla.....












Guys, I regret to inform あなた that my internet had committed technical suicide. I have stolen someone's laptop to write this and I hate to tell あなた that until someone revives my internet no further Kayla chapters can be posted.
This is an unforseen event and I will kick as many asses as I can to get the internet working agan.
I will continue to write the chapters and try to steal as many laptops and PCs as possible to post them.

I hate that I leave my story with あなた at such a critical point. Unfortunately this post is just a spur of the moment thing and I don't have my memory stick with me または I'd shove a chapter on at the end of this message.

Very sorry my peeps. あなた can verbally abuse me, my internet または BT broadband または all three!





Emmii-Luu
posted by surfergal
That morning I woke up and Nathen had left me a note saying:

Dear Addi,
Jacob is making us do some patrols. I'll meet あなた at school.
Love,
Nathen.
I thought it was so sweet. I looked over at my clock and it 発言しました that it was 7 oclcok. I was running late again. I found some clothes and then pulled my hair into a ponytail, knowing that it would have to come done when I put on my helmet. I put on some mascarra and then headed downstairs to get something to drink. Edward had me a glass of sweet お茶, 紅茶 on the counter when I walked into the kitchen. Once I told everyone bye I walked into the garage...
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Here's the 次 chapter of Amore! ^_^

I was glad that no one followed me when I was on my way out. I need to find out that girl is. But then I heard footsteps behind me and a finger tapped my sholder. I jumped.
"Angela?" I asked, a little startled.
"I'm going to help あなた with this, even though I don't know what あなた saw." she said.
I opened my mouth to argue, but she cut me off.
"I'm not asking for あなた to tell me what あなた saw, Bella. I'm just going to help あなた as a friend." she said, while smiling at me.
I sighed.
"Fine, Angela. あなた can help me, but I don't know exactly what I'm going to do now....
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posted by Sk8bordNewMoon
Zoey. 
Alice's POV
I didn't know if Jasper and I were maknig the right decion my waiting to make her a vampire または not.  I sat in the middle Jasper and Seth. Seth had his head down on the ベッド holding her hand. Jasper was sitting beside me holding my hand. It was torture to just sit here and wait for the time to change her. Carisle came in and asked to speak to Jasper and I. We walked to his office and sat down in the chairs. Carisle-I wanted to talk about which venom we want to give her. Jasper 発言しました -he didn't understand what he ment. Would あなた like Zoey to have my venom または one of your venom...
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Chapter 2 Home

The doctor was right, today Is tomorrow and I'm out! What am I going to do now? I tell あなた what I'm going to do nothing.
I closed the front door behind me with my bag full of clothes on my back.
“If あなた need anything honey just ask” worry was in my mums eyes... I was going to reply don't worry then I suddenly thought why she being so stupid for I'm fine.
“I'm fine OK jee back off will ya” anger burst through me. She your mum for crying out loud what's wrong with me. I started walking up the stairs I looked at mum she looked hurt... she needs to get over herself I thought....
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