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This is my version of Bella's cliff diving experience in New Moon, continued:
“Breathe!” A husky, anxiety filled voice barked at me. Water was pouring from my mouth, and the familiar jagged stones from the La Push ビーチ were digging into my back. A large rock slammed into my now upright upper back, directly between my shoulder blades. もっと見る water than I thought possible flew out of my mouth as I tried to breath. I could not obey the command. My lungs were burning.
“Breathe, Bella! C’mon!” I suddenly recognised the deep, barking voice. Jacob. My eyes flew open, desperate to see my best friend, but also out of guilt. I had not thought about him in what I thought were to be my last moments on this Earth.
Black and red spots dominated my sight, leaving me with only a few glimpses of Jacob’s face. I expected his eyes to be filled with hate and anger, to him it must have seemed like I just committed suicide. Instead of fury, I saw desperation and tears. I had never seen Jacob so child-like and vulnerable, not even when he was sprawled across his far too small bed, sleeping.
The rock struck me again.
The rock was not as cold as I expected. The rocks in the water had been like ice against my skin. Everything around me had been dead cold. Nothing was warm. Although, now, I could feel heat pulsing towards me, reminding me of Jake’s skin ever since he had become a…a wolf. My skin was burning from where the rock grazed any exposed flesh of mine.
Even though the heat reminded me of Jacob, the burning reminded me of whenever he would touch me. The tingling on my skin whenever our bodies touched in any way. My brain was working a lot slower than usual, due to the lack of oxygen, but I then realised, it was no rock. It was Jacob’s hand. He was saving my life and, once again, I was thinking about Edward. I mentally kicked myself, Jake deserved better than the way I was treating him.
An ear splitting crash of thunder and spark of lightning caused my vision to become even もっと見る impaired. One thought made me loose consciousness again, one thought brought me back to reality, and that one thought caused my body to weaken even もっと見る and smash back into the needle sharp stones beneath me.
Baseball.
(A/N: If あなた don't get the baseball thing, it's because the thunder reminded her of when she played baseball with the Cullen’s. Only further torturing her with thoughts of Edward.)
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This is my version of Bella's cliff diving experience in New Moon, continued:
“Breathe!” A husky, anxiety filled voice barked at me. Water was pouring from my mouth, and the familiar jagged stones from the La Push ビーチ were digging into my back. A large rock slammed into my now upright upper back, directly between my shoulder blades. もっと見る water than I thought possible flew out of my mouth as I tried to breath. I could not obey the command. My lungs were burning.
“Breathe, Bella! C’mon!” I suddenly recognised the deep, barking voice. Jacob. My eyes flew open, desperate to see my best friend, but also out of guilt. I had not thought about him in what I thought were to be my last moments on this Earth.
Black and red spots dominated my sight, leaving me with only a few glimpses of Jacob’s face. I expected his eyes to be filled with hate and anger, to him it must have seemed like I just committed suicide. Instead of fury, I saw desperation and tears. I had never seen Jacob so child-like and vulnerable, not even when he was sprawled across his far too small bed, sleeping.
The rock struck me again.
The rock was not as cold as I expected. The rocks in the water had been like ice against my skin. Everything around me had been dead cold. Nothing was warm. Although, now, I could feel heat pulsing towards me, reminding me of Jake’s skin ever since he had become a…a wolf. My skin was burning from where the rock grazed any exposed flesh of mine.
Even though the heat reminded me of Jacob, the burning reminded me of whenever he would touch me. The tingling on my skin whenever our bodies touched in any way. My brain was working a lot slower than usual, due to the lack of oxygen, but I then realised, it was no rock. It was Jacob’s hand. He was saving my life and, once again, I was thinking about Edward. I mentally kicked myself, Jake deserved better than the way I was treating him.
An ear splitting crash of thunder and spark of lightning caused my vision to become even もっと見る impaired. One thought made me loose consciousness again, one thought brought me back to reality, and that one thought caused my body to weaken even もっと見る and smash back into the needle sharp stones beneath me.
Baseball.
(A/N: If あなた don't get the baseball thing, it's because the thunder reminded her of when she played baseball with the Cullen’s. Only further torturing her with thoughts of Edward.)
PLEASE rate and comment. Thanks xoxo
My ファンポップ site is getting harder and harder to get on and isn't even letting me on half the time so i'm going to have my friend put my fanfiction site on this story as a コメント and あなた can log on and find me. Ok???? Cool!!!! I'm sorry if i let あなた down but i'm trying my best. I got in trouble because my grades were down and thats aboout it!!
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part 2 the cullens. like always it was a rainy 日 in forks. bella and edward were on they way to bella's ホーム but all of a sudin bella was in need of a human momment.they stoped によって the ディナー close to to were they were going after bella came out two men came in.edward could read what they were thinking.he new them some how but he had no clue who they were.all he new was he had to get bella away from them. we'll come back later wisper edward so low that only bella could here what he said.he had to leave. this is were the story begins.
if あなた liked that just wait for part 3 immortls find vampires.
if あなた liked that just wait for part 3 immortls find vampires.
9: Send him 愛 letters and sign them “You dearest Victoria”.
8: Constantly think about キス Bella. Run!
7: Lock him in a room with Mike, Tyler, Eric, and Jacob. Give everyone except him a picture of Bella.
6: Tell him the relationship he is having with Bella is practically paedophilia and he could be sent to jail for it.
5: Whenever he leaves a room または says goodbye, get down on your knees and beg him not to go, not again.
4: Make him go out with あなた to a fancy restrant for his Birthday when it isn’t his Birthday. Get all offended when he won’t eat anything. Start crying.
3: Whenever he complains または argues, reply with “What are あなた gonna do Edward? Go to Italy?”
2: Buy him a dog. Name it Jacob.
1: Don’t think.
Oh... one もっと見る thing.... RUN!!!