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hi guys just being really メリダとおそろしの森 here coz i dont usually do this but would u plz read a poem i wrote? it was inspired によって twilight saga :)

my friend Twilight_lover encoraged me 2 put my poem up here! plz tell me wot u really think i want to b told the truth coz i 愛 書く and i want to improve it thx :

愛 is the closest thing we have to magic
But It can be hurtful and painful too
it lies in those whos hearts are cold
it glows in those who are true.

あなた can find it in the least expected places,
It can kill to let 愛 go
It can comfort those who are in need of help
It can fight and take over woe

愛 is something that never dies,
It stays in the hearts of the gone,
愛 is a candle that never goes out,
No one knows where its from

愛 is the glue that holds us together,
It is the thing that makes us smile
Without knowing, we rely on love
もっと見る then anyone would know

It can kill those who turn against it,
It can take over those who don’t
It can bring tears and laughter and cries of pain
But die is what it wont

People hurt for those that leave
愛 finds the one who another needs
They need the ones they can’t live without
It can cause hearts to bleed


Sometimes 愛 burns
To an extent that we can’t bear
愛 is an emotion,
something we can to share

Maybe あなた don’t 愛 the one who loves you,
But even if your ハート, 心 is full of hate
愛 comes first before anything
It burns on after fate

愛 can bring back life to those
Who have ロスト meaning and hope
So I belive 愛 is good,
It warms the ones grey and cold who havn’t the strength to cope

愛 is goodbye, but also a welcome
A bird that flies there, free
愛 is something あなた can’t buy,
Whatever the price may be.

To watch a face twist up in pain,
愛 is how あなた sooth
愛 is calm but also wild,
音楽 that makes あなた move

Peaceful is what 愛 is,
a flutter in the air
愛 is sometimes peaceful
愛 isn’t fair

A palm on an island,
a petal on a rose
愛 never stops growing
we don’t know how big 愛 grows.


愛 is the closest thing we have to magic
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sorry guys couldnt fit the rest in it was 2 long but the ending sentence was the first verse of the poem :) thx for 読書 it
Elzybells posted 1年以上前
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thanx i luv this poem girl this rock.
blacke posted 1年以上前
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wow great poem better than some pro work can i add u as a friend?
badvamps posted 1年以上前
 Elzybells posted 1年以上前
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トワイライト・シリーズ 回答

ABDCFan- said:
This poem is awesomeeee! (:
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posted 1年以上前 
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thx!! that means alot
Elzybells posted 1年以上前
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o and btw ur reveiw is awesomeeee! aswell ;) lol
Elzybells posted 1年以上前
Hellohoudini said:
Beautiful and moving! Dont be afraid to post more..
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thanks that is really really nice it means loads to me thank u xx
Elzybells posted 1年以上前
countrygirl2008 said:
wow that was very touching . あなた have a natural talent.!
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:::::DDDD lol thank u thank u!!!! thats really nice it means alot
Elzybells posted 1年以上前
ScottishChic said:
THAT WAS AN IMMENSE POEM!!!!!!!!
how'd u get so good at 書く them??? *jealous*

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wow thx that really nice :)
Elzybells posted 1年以上前
twifan2010 said:
WOW, AMAZING! Could u give me some tips on how u can write poems like that, cause I really like 書く n would like to do some more! :)
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thx ye i will x :)
Elzybells posted 1年以上前
loverofedward said:
こんにちは there ur poem is really awesome u knw .I guess u must b in luv too dats y u wrote dis poem.U did include dat suggestions r welcome so i just felt dat ur line "love isnt fair" is incorrect as i think luv is always fair または maybe u cld xplain wat did u meant によって it.
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kk thx and btw im not in love!!! lol thx tho
Elzybells posted 1年以上前
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