あなた spell it STORIES ... and judging によって that I had a fair idea what to expect. I read the first one, not impressed. Full of spelling errors, and grammar is poor. Stay at school & study comprehension & creative writing. あなた might learn something ... sorry あなた ask for opinions, あなた get it.
I 愛 them even though あなた spelt a few things wrong there really gd and i think あなた should keep witing will あなた read some of mine? it's on a club called Jacob and Renessme and the story is called Wedding 日