This is the prologue of a novel that I'm thinking about doing, tell me what あなた think, because your opinion matters! Plus I probably won't end up doing it if the majority of あなた guys don't like it.
Her laughter broke the silence. Everyone turned to stare at her, but she ignored them. She hated being in awkward situations, but could care less when people thought she was weird または strange.
This girl is Autumn Konrad. She has curly, red hair, bright green eyes, and freckles dot about every square inch of her faces. She's your typical 14 year-old girl, except for the fact that she's not. She's a part of what the rest of the school calls, "The Loser Squad", but she doesn't know they call them that. All she knows it they whisper when she walks by, または when anyone from her group of フレンズ walk by. Her only 5 フレンズ who are in the group are, Kelli Rush, the blonde with the brains, Samantha Gonzalez, the brunette brainiac, Catie Byerley, the light-brown brilliance, Anne Riley, the more-than-dull dirty blonde, and Liz Strickland, the righteously smart raven, and together they make, THE LOSER SQUAD!!
Her laughter broke the silence. Everyone turned to stare at her, but she ignored them. She hated being in awkward situations, but could care less when people thought she was weird または strange.
This girl is Autumn Konrad. She has curly, red hair, bright green eyes, and freckles dot about every square inch of her faces. She's your typical 14 year-old girl, except for the fact that she's not. She's a part of what the rest of the school calls, "The Loser Squad", but she doesn't know they call them that. All she knows it they whisper when she walks by, または when anyone from her group of フレンズ walk by. Her only 5 フレンズ who are in the group are, Kelli Rush, the blonde with the brains, Samantha Gonzalez, the brunette brainiac, Catie Byerley, the light-brown brilliance, Anne Riley, the more-than-dull dirty blonde, and Liz Strickland, the righteously smart raven, and together they make, THE LOSER SQUAD!!
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Because I'm too lazy to type it again. :P I wrote this poem because I just graduated a school and it's really sad, and I do not like the idea of leaving all of my friends. I know that there are a few that I'll never see again. So I kind of vented about it through this poem. I hope it's good. Hgfan5602 is such an inspiration, so this is pretty much dedicated to them. I've always stunk at poems, and I haven't written one in ages, so I hope this will suffice as a decent piece of poetry.
Because I'm too lazy to type it again. :P I wrote this poem because I just graduated a school and it's really sad, and I do not like the idea of leaving all of my friends. I know that there are a few that I'll never see again. So I kind of vented about it through this poem. I hope it's good. Hgfan5602 is such an inspiration, so this is pretty much dedicated to them. I've always stunk at poems, and I haven't written one in ages, so I hope this will suffice as a decent piece of poetry.
