Help!!!!! I don't know where to change it または keep it all the same!?!?!?!

If あなた want my advice, here it is: You're overthinking the book. You're planning too far ahead in the story. This drastically increases the chance of early spoilers. Butdon't worry. There is a way to salvage your book. First, あなた need to throw out all your plans for the storyline. Keep anything that doesn't pose a spoiler risk. After that, firmly plant the original vision of the book in your mind. From there, the book should practically write itself.

I had the same problem. Two years ago, I was 書く a book called チャームド〜魔女3姉妹〜 and Dangerous. I thought everything was wrong and I added too much stuff and I ruined the ending. I threw the book idea out. Looking back on it now I realized nothing was wrong with it, I was trying too hard and didn't relax about it. And here it is today, the original version.

U r over thinking it. U need to take a breathe and do half. Add some spoilers but then have もっと見る 質問 popp to the point where there are spoilers but あなた haven't spoiled the ending, あなた are just keeping the reader interested, the もっと見る 質問 and secrets go 未回答 the もっと見る they will read. Spoilers are interesting, don't get rid if them all. But if u feel that it is good then don't changer but if your ハート, 心 is half way in it then something needs to be done.