Firstly get an agent.If あなた have an agent.People will be much もっと見る inclined to listen to your pitch.If あなた are starting off I would also say to write another screenplay/script because lets face it あなた are not gonna get to work with Spielberg on your first attempt. Hope this helps and good luck
Steven, Of course they all say this but what about a movie about people that own 9 holes golf course, we do and I think it could be a new funny movie about the locals etc. I am 47 years old with 2 teenagers and we own 2 nine hole golf course. Nobody has done this idea, I think あなた should think about this