One 日 あなた were over your best friend, Jacob's house, when the doorbell rung. A few 秒 later Jacob opened the door, there stood the one and only Chresanto August from the boy band Mindless Behavior. When Chresanto walked into the living room, he sat 次 to あなた and 発言しました "Hey, (your name)!!!", and then あなた shyly 発言しました "Hi, Chresanto." Without looking at him, then Jacob came in the room looking awkward. A few 分 later Jacob asked "So...Why did あなた come over without letting me know あなた were coming?", "Came over un-invited because I needed to talk to あなた about something. " Chresanto said, then Jacob asked "OK Then...So what did あなた have to talk to me about? ", the 次 thing あなた know Chresanto looked あなた and whispered something in Jacob's ear. To Be Continued...

Should I keep going または nahhhhhh?