My poems, what do yoy think?

The Joy of a Mother

あなた start to giggle
As あなた see the baby inside of あなた wiggle
あなた laugh with joy
When あなた have 与えられた birth to a baby boy
あなた gasped once あなた heard
His voice saying his first word
With happiness あなた wept
At the sight of your son taking his first step
あなた smiled with a proud heart
When he comes back from school with his own work of art
Years and years go by
When it is time to say goodbye
Off to college he goes
Knowing he wont be back until it snows
But do not worry
He will not forget his Mommy
And now with gladness あなた are crying
As あなた hear the wedding bells ringing
Oh how happy it is to be
A grandmother of three!

愛 unto Death

At night I stay up

Thinking of あなた until my time is up

When I am gone I wish あなた the best

I 愛 あなた even if あなた 愛 me less

Never understood why we were apart

I guess we were never meant to be from the start

As the wind called my name

I was ready to go until あなた came

Kissed my hand and cheek

あなた 発言しました "I 愛 you, and it is あなた whom my ハート, 心 seeks."

The temptation to go was as great as it was to stay

So I must be careful of what I do and say

Whatever i do is my choice

Who knows, we might miss each other's voice

I decide to stay with my love

As the stars tremble above

On my lips I'll keep a kiss

All my life I'll think of this

I can never say goodbye

Even if I die