パーシー・ジャクソンとオリンポスの神々

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パーシー・ジャクソンとオリンポスの神々 質問

Thoughts on my made up prophecy? ^__^

My horrible attempt at a Prophecy for my fanfic. :D Be honest please... I need to know if it sounds catching and makes あなた want to read もっと見る about it...

Four halfbloods shall embark on a quest
to the land of the rising sun
where what they seek shall rest.
Taken によって the one slain によって twins
'Tis the one seeking revenge, changing skins.
Three shall be of the eldest gods
while one shall be of the goddess of thoughts.
Succeed they might, fail they may
for one shall meet the end of their days
in that lurks Death.

So...what do あなた think? Mysterious enough to keep the reader's attention? Gives away too much? FEEDBACK APPRECIATED! xx
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In the land that reeks Death* Sorry :P
cuteypuffgirl posted １年以上前
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I like it but who goes on the quest?
alex31234 posted １年以上前
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wats the タイトル of the fanfic
greeksrule11 posted １年以上前
 cuteypuffgirl posted １年以上前
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パーシー・ジャクソンとオリンポスの神々 回答

Nicolicious said:
Great it's really mistifiying it's better than the one i suggested
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posted １年以上前 
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あなた kidding? あなた inspired me! :D
cuteypuffgirl posted １年以上前
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Really I inspired someone :O
Nicolicious posted １年以上前
sideshowbobbart said:
I like it although I think it reveals a bit too much as we can immediatly guess who the four halfbloods shall be and it maybe should be a bit もっと見る mysterious ...
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posted １年以上前 
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Actually Zeus's kid will not be Thalia, she'll be an OC of mine.
cuteypuffgirl posted １年以上前
Nikita15 said:
It sounds awesome!!! Love, love, 愛 it!!
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posted １年以上前 
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Thanks :)
cuteypuffgirl posted １年以上前
silver93 said:
Um, I don't think Athena would appreciate being referred to as the Goddess of thoughts. It sounds like they're going to Japan, are あなた incorporating Japanese Gods?
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percabethandchb said:
Its perfect 4 percy jackson!
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greeksrule11 said:
soory it's good but its to obvious and the four poeple on the quest so easy its percy タリア and nico which are the "three shall be of the eldest gods" everyone one knows that the eldest gods which are male are zeus poseidon and hades.and the last is annabeth i mean serouisly "while one shall be of the goddess of thoughts." everyone knows athena is the only smart goddess with a child.
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posted １年以上前 
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Technically the eldest god who would have children is Demeter.
nixiedover posted １年以上前
mslone90 said:
It reveals too much information regarding what they are to do, and all letters must be capitalized in the beginning of each line.
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nixiedover said:
Most prophecies または four または six lines long, so there's that.
And no offense, but it wasn't that great a prophecy...
But that's just the prophecy itself, the plot and suspense of this book is just like, " What's gonna happen? tell me. TELL ME または I EAT YOU."
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posted １年以上前 
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Minus the obviousness of who's going on the prophecy...
nixiedover posted １年以上前
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And some other stuff, but that's it
nixiedover posted １年以上前
ShortPerson said:
YES YES I WANT TO READ THIS! LINK?
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posted １年以上前 
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